Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7TTF5KCJJBFBV54QY06FC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.001101
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in The Fae Grove didn’t move. Not really. It hung, thick and cloying, like the breath of something long asleep. Aurora stepped over the moss-cushioned root of the eastern standing stone and paused, her trainers sinking slightly into the damp earth. The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant tapped once against her collarbone. A whisper of warmth pulsed against her skin—just once—then faded. She exhaled, slow, controlled. Her breath caught in the chill. The sky above the grove wasn’t sky at all. Not properly. It shimmered, translucent like oil on water, stars smeared in slow, lazy streaks across a dome she knew wasn’t part of Earth’s real night. Time bent here. She’d felt it before—once, when she’d come chasing Eva’s ghost of a message scribbled on a napkin: *They’re lying about the trees. Come to the grove. Before they close the way.* That was three days ago. Or maybe seven. Rory couldn’t say. Time in Richmond Park was different from time in the grove. Time here was a liar. She adjusted the strap of her satchel—Yu-Fei’s old delivery bag, still marked with the faded red dragon—and stepped forward. Her torch beam cut a narrow cone through the heavy dark, illuminating wildflowers that bloomed in impossible clusters: white foxgloves in December, scarlet poppies curled tight as fists, bluebells glowing faintly at the edges. They weren’t supposed to grow together. Not like this. Not year-round. A sound. Soft. A rustle in the undergrowth. Not wind. There *was* no wind. Rory froze. “Eva?” Her voice didn’t echo. It died fast, absorbed by the stillness. No reply. She turned the beam toward the sound. Nothing. Just tangled ferns and a fallen birch, split down the middle like it had cracked open from the inside. Moss clung to its exposed heartwood, pulsing faintly green. She blinked. The green wasn’t light. It was movement. Tiny threads, like veins, pulsing beneath the surface. The pendant warmed again. A longer pulse this time. Three beats. She touched it through her jacket. “Not yet,” she murmured. “Not unless I find her.” She moved deeper, boots crunching on frost-free ground. Her flashlight caught the next standing stone—ancient oak, wider than a car, its surface carved with marks that didn’t exist in any language she’d studied. Dymas. She remembered the word from the note that had come with the pendant, slipped under her door wrapped in dried hawthorn. *From one who remembers. Keep it close. It knows when they’re near.* Whoever “they” were. The scar on her left wrist itched. She rubbed it. Childhood accident, the doctors said. A kitchen blade, she’d been told. But sometimes, in dreams, she saw a hand—long fingers, bark-like skin—pressing something cold into her palm. A seed. A twig snapped. Left. Thirty degrees. Rory swung the torch. Light spilled over ferns, over stones, over the pale curve of something half-buried in loam. It wasn’t a stone. It was a face. She stepped closer, heart low and steady in her chest. Fear was a luxury she couldn’t afford. The face was human-shaped, but wrong—too long, eyes sunken too deep, lips pulled back from small, needle-teeth. It was frozen mid-gasp, flesh grey and mottled. Not decay. Preservation. Like it had been pressed into the soil and grown into the earth, roots threading through its jaw, ivy coiling around its temples. She didn’t touch it. She didn’t need to. She recognised the coat. Charcoal wool. Button missing near the collar. Eva’s coat. Her breath hitched. Just once. Then she forced it out. Calm. Controlled. “Eva,” she said, softer now. “If you’re playing some sick game—” A giggle. High. Childlike. From right behind her. Rory spun. Darkness. The beam swept the clearing—empty. The standing stones stood like sentinels. No movement. No sound. Then—laughter again. Not behind. *Above.* She raised the torch. In the branches of the central oak, something shifted. Not a bird. Not a squirrel. A tangle of limbs, too many elbows, bent at impossible angles. It crouched there, hunched, wrapped in what looked like woven bark and shadow. Its head tilted. No eyes. Just two pits, reflecting the torchlight like wet stone. It didn’t move. It didn’t breathe. But she felt it *watching.* The pendant flared. Hot this time. A sharp throb against her skin. She took a step back. The thing in the tree didn’t follow. Instead, the flowers moved. One by one, the blooms around her turned. Heads lifting from the soil, petals parting, facing her. The poppies uncurled into wide, red mouths. The foxgloves stretched tall, trembling. The bluebells chimed—a sound like distant glass, thin and wrong. They weren’t facing her. They were facing *it.* The thing dropped. Not fell. *Unfurled.* Limbs unfolded like a spider’s legs from a shell. It landed on all fours, too low to the ground, joints bending backward. Still no eyes. But its mouth opened—wide, too wide—and let out a breath that wasn’t breath. A ripple in the air. A smell like crushed roots and rotting apples. Rory didn’t run. She backed away, step by step, keeping the torch on it. The light seemed to irritate it—its head twitched, skin rippling. But it didn’t retreat. Then, from the edge of the grove, a voice. “Rory?” She nearly dropped the torch. “Eva?” The voice came again. From the west stone. “Rory, I’m here. I’m stuck. Please—help me.” It sounded like her. Perfect. The lilt, the rasp from too many late nights, the slight Cardiff accent she’d never shaken. But Rory didn’t turn. She knew what it was doing. “Don’t answer,” she whispered to herself. “It learns. It mimics.” The thing on the ground tilted its head again. Then Eva’s voice, from the east now, closer. “Rory, look at me. It’s me. I’m bleeding. It *hurt* me.” A sob. So real. So raw. Rory closed her eyes. The pendant burned now. Constant. Like a fever. She opened her eyes. The flowers were closing. Folding in on themselves. Going dark. The thing stepped forward. One step. Then another. Its limbs clicked. Its skin stretched and pulsed, like something moving beneath. She raised the torch higher. “You’re not her,” she said. The thing stopped. Then, slowly, it raised a hand. Not a hand. A cluster of root-like fingers, knotted and dripping sap. And in its palm—a small, familiar object. Eva’s hairpin. The silver one shaped like a raven. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. It hadn’t just mimicked her voice. It had *taken* something. “Give it back,” she said, voice steady. The thing curled its fingers around the pin. Then looked up—toward the shimmering sky. Above, the stars began to swirl. Not slowly now. Fast. Spiraling into a single point. The air hummed. The standing stones groaned. The ground trembled beneath her feet. The Heartstone Pendant flared white-hot. And Rory knew. Not a portal. A *summoning.* She took one step back. Then another. The thing didn’t follow. It only watched. As the grove began to *breathe.* And from the heart of the central oak, a new sound rose. Not giggles. Not voices. A chorus. Whispers. Hundreds of them. Voices overlapping. Names. Pleas. Laughter. Cries. And beneath it all—footsteps. Coming from inside the tree.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"sentinels"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"lilt"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"chill"
4"shimmered"
5"echo"
6"pulse"
7"sentinels"
8"throb"
9"perfect"
10"lilt"
11"familiar"
12"trembled"
13"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences209
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences209
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences216
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords35
totalWords1191
ratio0.029
matches
0"They’re lying about the trees. Come to the grove. Before they close the way."
1"was"
2"From one who remembers. Keep it close. It knows when they’re near."
3"Above."
4"watching."
5"it."
6"Unfurled."
7"hurt"
8"taken"
9"summoning."
10"breathe."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1143
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Earth1
Eva4
Richmond1
Park1
Yu1
Fei1
December1
Limbs1
Cardiff1
Rory9
Time3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Fei"
3"Limbs"
4"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Earth"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"December"
6"Cardiff"
7"Time"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like woven bark and shadow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1191
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences216
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean14.01
std17.68
cv1.262
sampleLengths
065
179
227
364
414
52
612
72
853
911
1015
1167
123
1339
146
1519
164
174
1868
194
2017
2112
2211
232
246
252
261
2715
285
294
3053
313
323
335
3412
355
367
374
3839
394
404
413
4254
433
4425
459
461
475
481
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences209
matches
0"been told"
1"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs206
matches
0"weren’t facing"
1"were facing"
2"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences216
ratio0.065
matches
0"A whisper of warmth pulsed against her skin—just once—then faded."
1"She’d felt it before—once, when she’d come chasing Eva’s ghost of a message scribbled on a napkin: *They’re lying about the trees."
2"She adjusted the strap of her satchel—Yu-Fei’s old delivery bag, still marked with the faded red dragon—and stepped forward."
3"Her flashlight caught the next standing stone—ancient oak, wider than a car, its surface carved with marks that didn’t exist in any language she’d studied."
4"But sometimes, in dreams, she saw a hand—long fingers, bark-like skin—pressing something cold into her palm."
5"The face was human-shaped, but wrong—too long, eyes sunken too deep, lips pulled back from small, needle-teeth."
6"The beam swept the clearing—empty."
7"Then—laughter again."
8"The bluebells chimed—a sound like distant glass, thin and wrong."
9"But its mouth opened—wide, too wide—and let out a breath that wasn’t breath."
10"The light seemed to irritate it—its head twitched, skin rippling."
11"And in its palm—a small, familiar object."
12"Then looked up—toward the shimmering sky."
13"And beneath it all—footsteps."
96.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1170
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.044444444444444446
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences216
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences216
mean5.51
std4.93
cv0.893
sampleLengths
08
12
212
321
412
510
64
76
89
92
1024
113
1222
134
145
155
163
173
1811
195
2019
2134
226
233
242
252
261
275
282
294
302
315
327
332
347
351
3619
379
382
394
403
418
424
435
442
456
464
475
488
4925
46.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.33796296296296297
totalSentences216
uniqueOpeners73
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences151
matches
0"Just tangled ferns and a"
1"Then she forced it out."
2"Just two pits, reflecting the"
3"Instead, the flowers moved."
4"Then, from the edge of"
5"Then Eva’s voice, from the"
6"Then, slowly, it raised a"
7"Then looked up—toward the shimmering"
ratio0.053
87.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences151
matches
0"It hung, thick and cloying,"
1"She exhaled, slow, controlled."
2"Her breath caught in the"
3"It shimmered, translucent like oil"
4"She’d felt it before—once, when"
5"She adjusted the strap of"
6"Her torch beam cut a"
7"They weren’t supposed to grow"
8"Her voice didn’t echo"
9"It died fast, absorbed by"
10"She turned the beam toward"
11"It was movement."
12"She touched it through her"
13"She moved deeper, boots crunching"
14"Her flashlight caught the next"
15"She remembered the word from"
16"It knows when they’re near.*"
17"She rubbed it."
18"It wasn’t a stone."
19"It was a face."
ratio0.331
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences151
matches
0"The air in The Fae"
1"It hung, thick and cloying,"
2"Aurora stepped over the moss-cushioned"
3"The silver chain of the"
4"A whisper of warmth pulsed"
5"She exhaled, slow, controlled."
6"Her breath caught in the"
7"The sky above the grove"
8"It shimmered, translucent like oil"
9"She’d felt it before—once, when"
10"That was three days ago."
11"Rory couldn’t say."
12"She adjusted the strap of"
13"Her torch beam cut a"
14"They weren’t supposed to grow"
15"A rustle in the undergrowth."
16"Her voice didn’t echo"
17"It died fast, absorbed by"
18"She turned the beam toward"
19"Moss clung to its exposed"
ratio0.689
33.11% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"Before they close the way.*"
ratio0.007
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her torch beam cut a narrow cone through the heavy dark, illuminating wildflowers that bloomed in impossible clusters: white foxgloves in December, scarlet popp…"
1"Her flashlight caught the next standing stone—ancient oak, wider than a car, its surface carved with marks that didn’t exist in any language she’d studied."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice steady"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.286
84.1075%