Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7V2X0MFP3X5T71VZGANJY

Run Details

Model:
Qwen3 235B A22B Instruct 2507
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
17.9s
Cost:
$0.000333
Provider:
WandB

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
82.16% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
19.71% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
100.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
83.33% Name drop frequency (details)
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
99.21% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
93.11% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
55.39% Sentence opener variety (details)
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
70.00% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
100.00% Technical jargon density (details)
53.57% Useless dialogue additions (details)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
78.3565% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened as they stepped between the ancient oaks. One moment, Aurora’s boot crunched on frost-rimed grass just inside the boundary of Richmond Park; the next, the sound vanished, swallowed whole. Silence folded around them like a heavy velvet curtain. Rory blinked. The winter chill had been biting her cheeks moments before, but now—warmth. Not the dry heat of a heater or summer sun, but something softer, like breathing in steam from a kettle of chamomile. The scent came with it—wild thyme, damp earth, and something else… honeyed smoke, almost floral. Ahead, the trees gave way to a clearing she knew wasn’t on any park map. “Time doesn’t walk straight here,” Nyx murmured. Their voice, always a whisper threaded through shadow, seemed to come from every direction at once. A ripple passed through the air, like heat off stone, and suddenly they were fully solid—tall, cloaked in shifting darkness, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the space between the standing stones. Isolde stood motionless at the edge, silver hair drifting as though underwater. Her pale lavender gaze was fixed on the sky—or where the sky should have been. Instead, a dome of shimmering amber light pulsed gently above, like a slow heartbeat. It wasn’t the sun. It wasn’t clouds. It felt watched. Aurora’s fingers brushed the Heartstone pendant at her throat. The gem pulsed once—warm, insistent—just as it had the first time she’d dreamed of Dymas. But this wasn’t Hel. This was something older. “No footprints,” Eva said behind her, voice tight. She knelt, pressing a gloved hand to the moss. “There’s no mark where any of us stepped. Not even mine. Not even *her*.” She nodded at Isolde. Isolde turned. “Some paths erase themselves behind you. It is kinder that way.” Rory exhaled. “Kind?” “A mercy,” Isolde replied, her tone light as dandelion fluff. “Would you want every choice you’ve run from to leave tracks?” The grove unfolded as they moved deeper. Flowers glowed faintly—crimson blooms with veins of silver, buttercups that chimed when the wind touched them. The moss beneath their feet gave like memory foam, springing back with no impression. Trees leaned inward, their bark etched with symbols that shifted if stared at too long. One trunk bore a spiral that spiraled in two directions at once; another had a hollow that whispered when Nyx passed it. “Don’t answer,” the shade warned without turning. “It’s not a voice. It’s a memory stuck in the wood.” Eva clutched her coat tighter. “This place is *alive*.” “It remembers,” Isolde corrected. “It forgets, too. That’s what makes it safe.” Rory’s pendant warmed again, sharper this time. She glanced down. The crimson gem pulsed faster, its inner glow flickering in time with something beneath the earth. She stepped toward a ring of stones half-buried in ivy. At the center lay a shallow pool, its surface still as glass. She crouched. The reflection wasn’t hers. Her own bright blue eyes stared back, but the face was older—gaunt, smeared with soot, a slash of blood across the cheekbone. The hair was shorter, wild. And behind her, towering over her shoulder, rose a shadow with violet eyes. She jerked back. “What?” Eva was at her side instantly. “Nothing. Just—” The image was gone. The pool showed only sky now—amber and undulating, like oil on water. Nyx drifted closer. “You saw it, didn’t you? The future? Or a road not taken.” “I saw *you*,” Rory said flatly. The shade didn’t respond. Their form flickered, turning more smoke than shape. Isolde moved to the edge of the pool, knelt. She didn’t touch the water. “Vision is not truth. It is possibility wearing a mask.” “And you’d know,” Aurora muttered. “You’ve seen enough of them.” A low sound began then—not a noise, not exactly. A vibration in the air. The flowers rippled. The standing stones hummed. One note, held too long, felt like a nail dragging along bone. Then it stopped. In the silence, something shifted in the center of the clearing. The air shimmered, and a bench appeared—carved from a single piece of moonlit wood, smooth and untouched by age. On it sat a bowl of ripe figs, split open, oozing amber nectar. Eva took a step forward. “Is it… offered?” Isolde’s smile was thin. “Nothing in the grove is without cost.” Rory studied the fruit. Her mind flashed to Dymas—golden wine, peaches served on slabs of ice, the smell of spiced meat roasting in pits lined with salt. The Heartstone thrummed against her skin, warm enough now to make her wince. “Gluttony isn’t just about eating,” she said slowly. “It’s about taking more than you need.” Nyx moved like a breath of wind, circling the offering. “The grove tests desire. Not hunger. Want.” “Then why figs?” Eva asked. “Why not gold? Or answers?” “Because,” Isolde said, “everyone thinks they can resist hunger. Few admit what they crave.” Rory stepped forward. She didn’t touch the fruit. Instead, she drew the Fae-Forged blade from her coat. The moonsilver gleamed, cold even in the grove’s warmth, its edge catching the amber light like a shard of frozen moon. The blade hummed faintly. At the sound, the figs trembled. Then one dropped from the bowl—splattering on the moss with a wet thud. From the juice, a shape began to rise. Not solid. Not shadow. Something *between*. Like ink spreading in water, it coiled upward—a creature of silence and suggestion, with too many joints and eyes that blinked in and out of existence. Eva staggered back. “What in hell—” “Not hell,” Nyx corrected, stepping in front of the group. “Limbo. Residue. A memory of something that was offered and *almost* taken.” The thing opened a mouth—if it could be called a mouth—and whispered in a language of cracking ice and dying fire. Isolde raised a hand. “Enough.” The word wasn’t loud. But the grove obeyed. The figure collapsed. The fig vanished. The bowl cracked down the center. Silence returned, heavier now. Rory slid the blade back into place, her fingers numb. The pendant cooled. Slowly. “That could’ve been us,” she said. Eva nodded, face pale. “If we’d taken it. Tasted it.” “Or wanted to,” Nyx added. Isolde walked to the broken bowl. She picked up a shard. Held it to the light. “The grove shows you what you carry inside. Not what you are. But what you feed.” Rory touched her wrist—felt the small crescent scar under her sleeve. A childhood burn. A lesson in fire. She looked around. The flowers still chimed. The trees still leaned. The air still tasted like tea and secrets. But something had changed. Not the grove. Them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said flatly [flatly]"
1"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.114
82.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count3
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"desire"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"velvet"
2"chill"
3"warmth"
4"whisper"
5"scanning"
6"pulsed"
7"etched"
8"flickered"
9"shimmered"
10"desire"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1104
ratio0.005
matches
0"her"
1"alive"
2"you"
3"between"
4"almost"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount899
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Aurora3
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Dymas2
Hel1
Isolde10
Nyx6
Eva7
Rory8
Fae-Forged1
One3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
6"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Dymas"
globalScore0.944
windowScore0.833
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a nail dragging along bone"
1"appeared—carved from a single piece of moonlit wood, smooth and untouched by age"
2"tasted like tea and secrets"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.906
wordCount1104
matches
0"Not the dry heat of a heater or summer sun, but something softer, like breathing in steam from a kettle of c"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean19.03
std16.31
cv0.857
sampleLengths
041
151
215
355
451
532
635
713
83
921
1074
1118
129
1312
1450
154
1640
173
187
192
2016
2115
226
2312
2424
2510
2633
273
2843
298
3011
3140
3215
3317
3410
3514
3642
376
3813
398
4032
416
4222
4321
445
458
4612
474
4814
496
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"was fixed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences136
ratio0.125
matches
0"One moment, Aurora’s boot crunched on frost-rimed grass just inside the boundary of Richmond Park; the next, the sound vanished, swallowed whole."
1"The winter chill had been biting her cheeks moments before, but now—warmth."
2"The scent came with it—wild thyme, damp earth, and something else…"
3"A ripple passed through the air, like heat off stone, and suddenly they were fully solid—tall, cloaked in shifting darkness, their faintly glowing violet eyes scanning the space between the standing stones."
4"Her pale lavender gaze was fixed on the sky—or where the sky should have been."
5"The gem pulsed once—warm, insistent—just as it had the first time she’d dreamed of Dymas."
6"Flowers glowed faintly—crimson blooms with veins of silver, buttercups that chimed when the wind touched them."
7"One trunk bore a spiral that spiraled in two directions at once; another had a hollow that whispered when Nyx passed it."
8"Her own bright blue eyes stared back, but the face was older—gaunt, smeared with soot, a slash of blood across the cheekbone."
9"The pool showed only sky now—amber and undulating, like oil on water."
10"A low sound began then—not a noise, not exactly."
11"The air shimmered, and a bench appeared—carved from a single piece of moonlit wood, smooth and untouched by age."
12"Her mind flashed to Dymas—golden wine, peaches served on slabs of ice, the smell of spiced meat roasting in pits lined with salt."
13"Then one dropped from the bowl—splattering on the moss with a wet thud."
14"Like ink spreading in water, it coiled upward—a creature of silence and suggestion, with too many joints and eyes that blinked in and out of existence."
15"The thing opened a mouth—if it could be called a mouth—and whispered in a language of cracking ice and dying fire."
16"Rory touched her wrist—felt the small crescent scar under her sleeve."
93.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04787812840043525
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013057671381936888
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean8.12
std5.9
cv0.727
sampleLengths
010
122
29
32
412
522
611
74
815
97
1016
1132
1212
1315
1414
154
163
173
189
1915
204
214
228
239
2418
252
2611
272
281
2910
3011
317
3216
3314
3415
3522
367
3711
385
394
404
418
427
433
4416
4510
4612
472
484
4922
55.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3897058823529412
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"Instead, a dome of shimmering"
1"Then it stopped."
2"Instead, she drew the Fae-Forged"
3"Then one dropped from the"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences100
matches
0"Their voice, always a whisper"
1"Her pale lavender gaze was"
2"It wasn’t the sun."
3"It wasn’t clouds."
4"It felt watched."
5"She knelt, pressing a gloved"
6"She nodded at Isolde"
7"She glanced down."
8"She stepped toward a ring"
9"Her own bright blue eyes"
10"She jerked back."
11"Their form flickered, turning more"
12"She didn’t touch the water."
13"Her mind flashed to Dymas—golden"
14"she said slowly"
15"She didn’t touch the fruit."
16"She picked up a shard."
17"She looked around."
ratio0.18
70.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences100
matches
0"The air thickened as they"
1"Silence folded around them like"
2"The winter chill had been"
3"The scent came with it—wild"
4"Their voice, always a whisper"
5"A ripple passed through the"
6"Isolde stood motionless at the"
7"Her pale lavender gaze was"
8"It wasn’t the sun."
9"It wasn’t clouds."
10"It felt watched."
11"Aurora’s fingers brushed the Heartstone"
12"The gem pulsed once—warm, insistent—just"
13"This was something older."
14"Eva said behind her, voice"
15"She knelt, pressing a gloved"
16"She nodded at Isolde"
17"Isolde replied, her tone light"
18"The grove unfolded as they"
19"Flowers glowed faintly—crimson blooms with"
ratio0.78
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Isolde stood motionless at the edge, silver hair drifting as though underwater."
1"Like ink spreading in water, it coiled upward—a creature of silence and suggestion, with too many joints and eyes that blinked in and out of existence."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, voice tight"
1"Isolde replied, her tone light as dandelion fluff"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"the shade warned (warn)"
2"Isolde corrected (correct)"
3"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
4"Nyx corrected (correct)"
5"Nyx added (add)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.743
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.343
78.3565%