Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7W3HK2KW1X51SKXJCEXYD

Run Details

Duration:
20.3s
Cost:
$0.000266
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had just stopped when Rory stepped past the first of the standing stones. Her boots sank slightly into the damp earth, and the air hung thick with the smell of wet bark and something else—something old, like ink and moss left to steep in a sealed jar. The grove loomed ahead, a hollow ring of ancient oaks forming a perfect circle within Richmond Park, though none of the park maps mentioned it. She’d only found out about it a week ago, scribbled in the margins of a second-hand book Eva had brought her from a Camden market: *The Fae Grove. Seek when the veil is thin.* She hadn’t believed it. Not really. But the pendant around her neck had started pulsing an hour ago. Warmth, just beneath her collarbone, like a heartbeat pressed against glass. It had happened before—near alleyways that dead-ended into walls that hadn’t been there a second earlier, near bus stops where the driver didn’t cast a reflection. Never this strong. Never this insistent. Rory pulled her jacket tighter. The trees here stood too straight, spaced too evenly, their bark smooth and unblemished despite their age. Between them, wildflowers glowed faintly in the dark—purple foxgloves, nightshade, moon daisies—blossoming in defiance of winter. No wind. No birds. Just the damp hush of a world holding its breath. She checked the time. 11:03 p.m. “Alright,” she muttered. “I’m here. What now?” No answer. Just the quiet. She took another step. Then another. The pendant pulsed again, warmer this time. She reached up, fingers brushing the crimson gem. It flickered softly beneath her skin, like a candle seen through tissue. Then—a sound. A rustle. Left. Behind the thicket of silver birch saplings. Rory froze. She turned slowly. Nothing moved. She exhaled. Probably a fox. Or a squirrel. This was still a park, after all. Just because the locals avoided this part after dark didn't mean— A twig snapped. This time, to her right. She spun, heart thudding once, hard, against her ribs. The clearing remained unchanged. Flowers swayed, though there was no breeze. The standing stones stood sentinel, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—grooves that looked like script, but shifted when she stared too long, like eels writhing under mud. She swallowed. “Hello?” she called. Her voice sounded small. Brittle. Silence. Then—a whisper. Not words. Just breath. Shaped into sound. From everywhere and nowhere. Rory backed up a step. Her heel struck something soft. She looked down. A patch of moss, deep green and glistening, had moved. Not grown. Not shifted with the wind. *Moved.* Like a muscle flexing under skin. She stepped back sharply, pulse roaring in her ears. The pendant flared—hot this time, almost burning. She yanked it away from her chest, staring at the gem. Its glow had deepened, crimson swirling like stirred wine. Something was close. She turned in a slow circle. The flowers. They were watching. Not with eyes. Nothing that crude. But their petals were turned toward her, all of them, stems subtly angled, like sunflowers following a sun that wasn’t there. The nightshade’s black berries glistened wetly. One dropped with a soft *plip* onto the soil. The moss beneath it twitched and swallowed it whole. Rory’s breath caught. She reached for her phone. No signal. No time. The screen flickered, then died. Of course. She was alone. Really alone. And not alone at all. She forced herself to breathe. In. Out. *Think.* This was what Silas warned about—the places between. Where rules frayed. Where things slipped through. She wasn’t supposed to be here. Not really. But she hadn’t come for sightseeing. She’d come for answers. About the pendant. About the note left under her door two nights ago, written in handwriting that mirrored her own: *He’s looking for you. Not Evan. The one before. You know his name.* She didn’t. Not really. But the pendant had known. The pendant had burned that night, searing her skin in warning. And now this. She took a step toward the center of the grove. The moss rippled in retreat, but the flowers didn’t turn away. Then—laughter. High. Childlike. From above. Rory looked up. Between the branches, something dangled. A shape. Small. Humanoid. Swinging gently, like a body from a rope. But no rope. Just feet, bare and grey, kicking idly in the air. Its face was turned away. Rory’s blood turned to ice. She started to back away. The thing stopped swinging. Slowly, its head tilted. Not quite human. The neck stretched too far, skin too smooth, too pale. It had no hair. No ears. Just eyes—too wide, too dark—and a smile that split its face like a wound. It raised a hand. Waved. Then dropped. Not falling. *Sliding* down the air like oil down glass. It landed silently. Ten feet away. Smiling. Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant. Hot. Pulsing. She didn’t run. Running was death. Instead, she spoke. Calm. Even. “I’m not here to trespass. I’m looking for something.” The thing tilted its head. The smile didn’t waver. Behind her, something else moved. Then another. Shapes emerging from between the trees. Figures with too many joints. Faces like stretched wax. All smiling. All silent. Rory’s breath came in short bursts, but her voice stayed steady. “I’m looking for the one who sent the pendant. If you’re not her, then tell me who is.” The first creature stepped forward. Its foot didn’t press into the ground. The moss simply parted beneath it, swallowing the impression like water. It reached out. Pale fingers, long and jointed wrong, stretched toward her. Rory didn’t flinch. But her thumb found the scar on her wrist—crescent-shaped, old—and pressed hard. The pendant flared. A pulse of heat, red light flaring once, bright enough to cast shadows. The creatures stopped. The first one hissed—not a sound, but a tearing in the air, like fabric ripping through silence. Then, from the edge of the grove, a new noise. Footsteps. Slow. Deliberate. Crunching on frost that hadn’t been there a second ago. Between the trees, a woman stepped into view. Tall. Dressed in grey wool, Victorian cut. Hair coiled in a tight braid down her back. Dark eyes. Pale skin. Familiar. “Isolde,” Rory breathed. The woman didn’t smile. “You shouldn’t be here, Laila.” Rory’s blood went cold at the name. She hadn’t been called that in six years. Not since Dymas. The creatures shrank back, melting into the trees like smoke. Isolde stepped forward, her boots crushing the glowing flowers without remorse. “The Grove rejects you. It knows what you carry. What you let in.” Rory’s hand tightened around the pendant. “I didn’t know—” “You always know,” Isolde snapped. “You just pretend not to. They’re coming. And you’ve led them right to the door.” Behind her, the standing stones hummed. Faint. Low. Like a bell struck underwater. The air thickened. The flowers turned their faces away. Isolde’s gaze dropped to the pendant. “Give it to me.” Rory stepped back. The warmth against her skin flared again—not in warning. In defiance. Isolde saw it. Her face darkened. “You’ve already chosen,” she whispered. And then the clearing exhaled. The trees groaned. The ground trembled. And from the moss, something began to rise.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
58.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count4
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
4"sharply"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"sentinel"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"roaring"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"perfect"
2"warmth"
3"pulsed"
4"flickered"
5"sentinel"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"glistening"
9"pulse"
10"roaring"
11"searing"
12"footsteps"
13"familiar"
14"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences206
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords26
totalWords1199
ratio0.022
matches
0"The Fae Grove. Seek when the veil is thin."
1"Moved."
2"plip"
3"Think."
4"He’s looking for you. Not Evan. The one before. You know his name."
5"Sliding"
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Instead, she spoke."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1119
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Richmond1
Park1
Eva1
Camden1
Fae1
Grove1
Like2
Silas1
Evan1
Victorian1
Dymas1
Isolde4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Like"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Camden"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.874
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like script, but shifted when she"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.834
wordCount1199
matches
0"not a sound, but a tearing in the air, like fabric ripping through silence"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences214
matches
0"burned that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs118
mean10.16
std13.78
cv1.356
sampleLengths
0107
16
255
352
46
57
65
733
82
910
102
113
122
1326
143
155
169
1740
182
198
201
212
2211
2313
2410
257
261
276
289
2927
303
316
325
3351
343
3514
362
373
382
395
4023
418
426
434
4433
4520
463
4721
481
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences206
matches
0"was turned"
1"been called"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"were watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences214
ratio0.065
matches
0"Her boots sank slightly into the damp earth, and the air hung thick with the smell of wet bark and something else—something old, like ink and moss left to steep in a sealed jar."
1"It had happened before—near alleyways that dead-ended into walls that hadn’t been there a second earlier, near bus stops where the driver didn’t cast a reflection."
2"Between them, wildflowers glowed faintly in the dark—purple foxgloves, nightshade, moon daisies—blossoming in defiance of winter."
3"Then—a sound."
4"Just because the locals avoided this part after dark didn't mean—"
5"The standing stones stood sentinel, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—grooves that looked like script, but shifted when she stared too long, like eels writhing under mud."
6"Then—a whisper."
7"The pendant flared—hot this time, almost burning."
8"*Think.* This was what Silas warned about—the places between."
9"Then—laughter."
10"Just eyes—too wide, too dark—and a smile that split its face like a wound."
11"But her thumb found the scar on her wrist—crescent-shaped, old—and pressed hard."
12"The first one hissed—not a sound, but a tearing in the air, like fabric ripping through silence."
13"The warmth against her skin flared again—not in warning."
78.10% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1138
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount74
adverbRatio0.06502636203866433
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.016695957820738138
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean5.6
std5.28
cv0.943
sampleLengths
014
134
225
328
46
54
62
712
811
926
103
113
125
1317
1416
152
162
1710
184
192
203
214
222
233
244
252
267
278
2812
292
302
311
327
332
343
352
362
373
383
397
4011
413
425
439
444
457
4629
472
483
494
56.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.37383177570093457
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners80
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences141
matches
0"Just the damp hush of"
1"Just the quiet."
2"Probably a fox."
3"Just because the locals avoided"
4"Just feet, bare and grey,"
5"Slowly, its head tilted."
6"Just eyes—too wide, too dark—and"
7"Instead, she spoke."
8"Then, from the edge of"
ratio0.064
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences141
matches
0"Her boots sank slightly into"
1"She’d only found out about"
2"She hadn’t believed it."
3"It had happened before—near alleyways"
4"She checked the time."
5"She took another step."
6"She reached up, fingers brushing"
7"It flickered softly beneath her"
8"She turned slowly."
9"She spun, heart thudding once,"
10"Her voice sounded small."
11"Her heel struck something soft."
12"She looked down."
13"She stepped back sharply, pulse"
14"She yanked it away from"
15"Its glow had deepened, crimson"
16"She turned in a slow"
17"They were watching."
18"She reached for her phone."
19"She was alone."
ratio0.248
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences141
matches
0"Rain had just stopped when"
1"Her boots sank slightly into"
2"The grove loomed ahead, a"
3"She’d only found out about"
4"She hadn’t believed it."
5"Warmth, just beneath her collarbone,"
6"It had happened before—near alleyways"
7"Rory pulled her jacket tighter."
8"The trees here stood too"
9"She checked the time."
10"She took another step."
11"The pendant pulsed again, warmer"
12"She reached up, fingers brushing"
13"It flickered softly beneath her"
14"She turned slowly."
15"This was still a park,"
16"A twig snapped."
17"This time, to her right."
18"She spun, heart thudding once,"
19"The clearing remained unchanged."
ratio0.652
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It had happened before—near alleyways that dead-ended into walls that hadn’t been there a second earlier, near bus stops where the driver didn’t cast a reflecti…"
1"The standing stones stood sentinel, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—grooves that looked like script, but shifted when she stared too lon…"
2"But their petals were turned toward her, all of them, stems subtly angled, like sunflowers following a sun that wasn’t there."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory breathed (breathe)"
2"Isolde snapped (snap)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.615
82.4157%