| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 58.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "sentinel" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "roaring" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 206 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 214 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 1199 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove. Seek when the veil is thin." | | 1 | "Moved." | | 2 | "plip" | | 3 | "Think." | | 4 | "He’s looking for you. Not Evan. The one before. You know his name." | | 5 | "Sliding" |
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| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1119 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Like | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Like" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.874 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like script, but shifted when she" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.834 | | wordCount | 1199 | | matches | | 0 | "not a sound, but a tearing in the air, like fabric ripping through silence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 118 | | mean | 10.16 | | std | 13.78 | | cv | 1.356 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was turned" | | 1 | "been called" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 214 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank slightly into the damp earth, and the air hung thick with the smell of wet bark and something else—something old, like ink and moss left to steep in a sealed jar." | | 1 | "It had happened before—near alleyways that dead-ended into walls that hadn’t been there a second earlier, near bus stops where the driver didn’t cast a reflection." | | 2 | "Between them, wildflowers glowed faintly in the dark—purple foxgloves, nightshade, moon daisies—blossoming in defiance of winter." | | 3 | "Then—a sound." | | 4 | "Just because the locals avoided this part after dark didn't mean—" | | 5 | "The standing stones stood sentinel, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—grooves that looked like script, but shifted when she stared too long, like eels writhing under mud." | | 6 | "Then—a whisper." | | 7 | "The pendant flared—hot this time, almost burning." | | 8 | "*Think.* This was what Silas warned about—the places between." | | 9 | "Then—laughter." | | 10 | "Just eyes—too wide, too dark—and a smile that split its face like a wound." | | 11 | "But her thumb found the scar on her wrist—crescent-shaped, old—and pressed hard." | | 12 | "The first one hissed—not a sound, but a tearing in the air, like fabric ripping through silence." | | 13 | "The warmth against her skin flared again—not in warning." |
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| 78.10% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1138 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 74 | | adverbRatio | 0.06502636203866433 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016695957820738138 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 214 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 214 | | mean | 5.6 | | std | 5.28 | | cv | 0.943 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 56.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.37383177570093457 | | totalSentences | 214 | | uniqueOpeners | 80 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the damp hush of" | | 1 | "Just the quiet." | | 2 | "Probably a fox." | | 3 | "Just because the locals avoided" | | 4 | "Just feet, bare and grey," | | 5 | "Slowly, its head tilted." | | 6 | "Just eyes—too wide, too dark—and" | | 7 | "Instead, she spoke." | | 8 | "Then, from the edge of" |
| | ratio | 0.064 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank slightly into" | | 1 | "She’d only found out about" | | 2 | "She hadn’t believed it." | | 3 | "It had happened before—near alleyways" | | 4 | "She checked the time." | | 5 | "She took another step." | | 6 | "She reached up, fingers brushing" | | 7 | "It flickered softly beneath her" | | 8 | "She turned slowly." | | 9 | "She spun, heart thudding once," | | 10 | "Her voice sounded small." | | 11 | "Her heel struck something soft." | | 12 | "She looked down." | | 13 | "She stepped back sharply, pulse" | | 14 | "She yanked it away from" | | 15 | "Its glow had deepened, crimson" | | 16 | "She turned in a slow" | | 17 | "They were watching." | | 18 | "She reached for her phone." | | 19 | "She was alone." |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had just stopped when" | | 1 | "Her boots sank slightly into" | | 2 | "The grove loomed ahead, a" | | 3 | "She’d only found out about" | | 4 | "She hadn’t believed it." | | 5 | "Warmth, just beneath her collarbone," | | 6 | "It had happened before—near alleyways" | | 7 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter." | | 8 | "The trees here stood too" | | 9 | "She checked the time." | | 10 | "She took another step." | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed again, warmer" | | 12 | "She reached up, fingers brushing" | | 13 | "It flickered softly beneath her" | | 14 | "She turned slowly." | | 15 | "This was still a park," | | 16 | "A twig snapped." | | 17 | "This time, to her right." | | 18 | "She spun, heart thudding once," | | 19 | "The clearing remained unchanged." |
| | ratio | 0.652 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It had happened before—near alleyways that dead-ended into walls that hadn’t been there a second earlier, near bus stops where the driver didn’t cast a reflecti…" | | 1 | "The standing stones stood sentinel, their surfaces carved with symbols she didn’t recognize—grooves that looked like script, but shifted when she stared too lon…" | | 2 | "But their petals were turned toward her, all of them, stems subtly angled, like sunflowers following a sun that wasn’t there." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde snapped (snap)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.615 | |