Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7WF17DV2EZTT06415M4VV

Run Details

Duration:
20.8s
Cost:
$0.000549
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The greasy smoke of the Underground clung to Harlow Quinn’s nostrils as she stepped off the crime scene tape. Her boots echoed in the abandoned Tube station, the usual hum of the Northern Line replaced by the skitter of rats in the shadows. A single bulb overhead flickered, casting jagged light over the corpse splayed in the center of the platform. The victim—a man in a tailored pinstripe suit, face frozen in a silent scream—looked like he’d been plucked from a boardroom and dumped here with a red pen still clutched in his stiff fingers. “Rule of three,” muttered the sergeant beside her, David Hales, tapping the man’s wrist. A digital blood-spatter analysis glowed on his tablet. “Overdose, probably fentanyl traced back to the Bridge district. No signs of struggle.” His voice hummed with the satisfaction of a case already closed. Quinn crouched, gloved fingers itching to adjust the cuffs of her field coat. The dead man’s tie was knotted in a double Windsor, too precise for someone who’d OD’d in a subway. She lifted his left hand, noting the webbing of black residue under the nails. *Resin*, she thought. *Or ash*. The Veil Market dealt in both. Her left wrist twitched where the leather watch sat, its second hand ticking with the stubbornness of something made for a different time. “You missed something,” she said, voice flat. Hales frowned. “The tox report’ll confirm it—” “Look at the floor.” He squinted at the scuffed tiles, then at Quinn as if she’d gone soft. She pointed at the tendrils of iridescent thread matted into the blood pool. The threads shimmered with a color that didn’t exist in daylight, something like liquid oil under a blacklight. “Biohazard spill?” Hales tried. “No. Silk from the Market. Costs £500 a gram.” She stood, sweeping her gaze over the station. The walls here were different from the others she’d seen in this line of work—the concrete bore puckered scars where it should have been smooth, as though something had pressed up against it and *breathed*. A faint buzz pricked her skin. Quinn reached into her coat and pulled out the Veil Compass, its brass casing dull with age. When she flicked it open, the needle spun wildly before locking northward—not toward the exit, but into the tunnel beyond the platform. A jagged tear jagged in the air, just visible as a distortion in the light, like heat rising from tarmac. Hales snorted. “You dragged me out here for a souvenier compass?” “It’s not a souvenir.” Her fingers closed around the device. “It reacts to rifts.” “Rifts,” he echoed. Quinn ignored him. She stepped closer to the tear, its edges fraying like overexposed film. The air smelled of burnt hair and diesel. Her partner, Morris, had described the same stench before he vanished. *Not a tear,* he’d said during one of their late-night debriefs. *A hunger. It’s not the shadows you have to worry about. It’s what’s inside them.* The dead man’s suit jacket was lying open, the inside lapel pinned with a bone token carved into the shape of a key. Quinn plucked it free; the thing was warm, thrumming. Hales stiffened as she held it up beside the compass. “What’s the matter, David? You suddenly scared of bones?” “It’s feng shui crap,” he snapped. “Chinese gang stuff. I’ll tag a cultural liaison—” “No one’s tagging anyone,” she cut in. “This token doesn’t belong to a gang. It belongs to the Market.” “Which doesn’t exist.” “Ask Forensics why they’re finding half-decayed runes in the blood pool. You think a drug dealer’s got the budget for synthetic runes that mimic pre-Viking sigils?” She ground the token between her fingers. Pale dust rained onto the tiles, and the tear in the air shuddered. The compass needle twitched, then steadied—pointing directly at the dead man’s left eye. Quinn leaned in. The iris had a black pupil divided by a gold ring, like a target. And beneath it, barely perceptible, a second pupil flickered. She leaned closer—no, the same eye. A trick of the light. *Like a camera lens focusing.* “What’s the TOD?” she asked. “Estimate’s three hours ago,” Hales said. She looked at the corpse’s watch—silver, sleek, pristine. The face was blank. No hands. No numbers. Just a smear of something that looked like black ink but smelled like dried blood. “The victim wasn’t just killed,” she said. “He was a key. This—” she nodded at the compass “—reacts to supernatural rifts. This token does, too. And this eye…” She trailed off, the pieces slapping into place. “The Market’s moving locations, yes? Full moon cycle?” Hales crossed his arms. “The full moon’s in two nights—” “Exactly. They’re hiding their new location. This corpse is a beacon.” She turned to the tunnel, the air there thickening. “The Market isn’t just selling contraband. They’re testing something. And Morris knew this eye wasn’t a coincidence.” The tear pulsed, then spat a whisper of wind past her ear. It smelled like the cold breath of a static TV screen. Quinn flipped the compass shut. “Secure the token and the watch. Cancel your report.” “Excuse me?” She didn’t wait for his protest. Quinn strode into the tunnel, her watch’s second hand ticking louder now. Somewhere in the dark, something was waiting to be found.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her fingers closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
94.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount888
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount888
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"synthetic"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flickered"
2"traced"
3"shimmered"
4"silk"
5"flicked"
6"synthetic"
7"pristine"
8"beacon"
9"pulsed"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
79.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"watch’s"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords27
totalWords881
ratio0.031
matches
0"Resin"
1"Or ash"
2"breathed"
3"Not a tear,"
4"A hunger. It’s not the shadows you have to worry about. It’s what’s inside them."
5"Like a camera lens focusing."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount677
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Underground1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Tube1
Northern1
Line1
David1
Hales7
Windsor1
Veil2
Market1
Compass1
Morris1
Pale1
persons
0"Underground"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Line"
4"David"
5"Hales"
6"Market"
7"Morris"
places
0"Windsor"
1"Compass"
globalScore0.835
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like he’d been plucked from a boar"
1"something like liquid oil under a blacklight"
2"looked like black ink but smelled like dr"
3"smelled like dried blood"
4"smelled like the cold breath of a static T"
86.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.135
wordCount881
matches
0"not toward the exit, but into the tunnel beyond the platform"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean30.38
std25.45
cv0.838
sampleLengths
095
146
280
37
47
54
645
74
852
965
1011
1114
123
1360
1451
1514
1619
173
1859
1942
205
216
2231
2344
2410
2537
2637
272
2828
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"been plucked"
1"was knotted"
92.47% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was lying"
1"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences81
ratio0.086
matches
0"The victim—a man in a tailored pinstripe suit, face frozen in a silent scream—looked like he’d been plucked from a boardroom and dumped here with a red pen still clutched in his stiff fingers."
1"The walls here were different from the others she’d seen in this line of work—the concrete bore puckered scars where it should have been smooth, as though something had pressed up against it and *breathed*."
2"When she flicked it open, the needle spun wildly before locking northward—not toward the exit, but into the tunnel beyond the platform."
3"Quinn plucked it free; the thing was warm, thrumming."
4"The compass needle twitched, then steadied—pointing directly at the dead man’s left eye."
5"She leaned closer—no, the same eye."
6"She looked at the corpse’s watch—silver, sleek, pristine."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount686
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.029154518950437316
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004373177842565598
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean10.88
std7.76
cv0.714
sampleLengths
019
124
218
334
414
58
624
713
819
914
103
112
126
1323
147
152
165
174
1814
1913
2018
214
2217
2335
246
2517
2622
2720
282
299
3010
314
323
333
3412
358
3611
3711
382
399
404
4123
429
4310
449
456
468
477
4812
493
62.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4074074074074074
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Just a smear of something"
1"Somewhere in the dark, something"
ratio0.036
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her boots echoed in the"
1"His voice hummed with the"
2"She lifted his left hand,"
3"Her left wrist twitched where"
4"she said, voice flat"
5"He squinted at the scuffed"
6"She pointed at the tendrils"
7"She stood, sweeping her gaze"
8"Her fingers closed around the"
9"She stepped closer to the"
10"Her partner, Morris, had described"
11"It’s not the shadows you"
12"It’s what’s inside them.*"
13"she cut in"
14"She ground the token between"
15"She leaned closer—no, the same"
16"She looked at the corpse’s"
17"she nodded at the compass"
18"She turned to the tunnel,"
19"It smelled like the cold"
ratio0.375
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences56
matches
0"The greasy smoke of the"
1"Her boots echoed in the"
2"A single bulb overhead flickered,"
3"The victim—a man in a"
4"A digital blood-spatter analysis glowed"
5"His voice hummed with the"
6"Quinn crouched, gloved fingers itching"
7"The dead man’s tie was"
8"She lifted his left hand,"
9"*Resin*, she thought."
10"The Veil Market dealt in"
11"Her left wrist twitched where"
12"she said, voice flat"
13"He squinted at the scuffed"
14"She pointed at the tendrils"
15"The threads shimmered with a"
16"She stood, sweeping her gaze"
17"The walls here were different"
18"A faint buzz pricked her"
19"Quinn reached into her coat"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The threads shimmered with a color that didn’t exist in daylight, something like liquid oil under a blacklight."
1"The walls here were different from the others she’d seen in this line of work—the concrete bore puckered scars where it should have been smooth, as though somet…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, voice flat"
1"She turned, the air there thickening"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"muttered the sergeant beside her (mutter)"
1"he snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
78.3858%