Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7WRFR5D4GCB611RY56K0F

Run Details

Duration:
27.1s
Cost:
$0.000287
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in iron-gray sheets, drumming against the tin awning above the curry house before Eva’s flat. Rory stood beneath it, soaked at the shoulders, her black hair clinging to her neck like ink spilled in water. She shifted the weight of the delivery bag slung over her shoulder—Golden Empress logo peeling at the corner—and raised her fist to knock again. The third deadbolt had just clicked open. The door cracked inward, revealing a wedge of warm, candlelit chaos. Books teetered on every horizontal surface. Scrolls spilled from a wicker basket near the radiator. A tabby cat, half-lidded and smug, perched atop a stack of leather-bound grimoires, tail twitching as if conducting some silent aria. And then—him. Lucien. He filled the gap in the doorway effortlessly, as though he belonged there, carved from shadow and silk. The amber of one eye caught the candlelight, burning like embers in a dying fire; the other, deep and fathomless black, gave nothing away. His platinum-blond hair was slicked back precisely, not a strand betraying the storm outside. He wore a charcoal suit, immaculate, the top button of his crisp white shirt undone, revealing the faintest tracery of silver chain beneath. For a heartbeat, neither moved. “You’re dripping on my floor,” he said, voice low, accented—French molasses laced with something older. Rory’s breath hitched. “It’s not your floor.” “No,” he agreed, gaze flicking over her face, lingering on the scar at her wrist, barely visible beneath the soaked sleeve of her jacket. “But it’s Eva’s. And she’ll complain when the varnish warps.” She opened her mouth—to argue, to explain, to throw the delivery bag at his chest and walk away—but the words died. There was something about the way he looked at her, not with anger, not with cold dismissal, but with a kind of quiet recognition, as if he’d been expecting her even though she hadn’t known she was coming. “I didn’t know you were staying here,” she managed. “I’m not staying. I’m working.” He stepped back, just enough to allow her entry. “Come in. You’ll catch cold, and I’d rather not deal with Eva’s wrath should her best friend expire on my watch.” She hesitated, then stepped over the threshold. The warmth of the flat closed around her like an embrace. Ptolemy chirruped once, then leapt down and slinked away, tail high. Rory set the delivery bag on the cluttered kitchen counter, hands still damp, movements deliberate. “Beef and broccoli for Eva. Extra noodles. And—” she pulled a small paper-wrapped box from the side pocket “—a lychee tart. She asked twice.” Lucien didn’t move from the door, watching her with that unnerving stillness that always made her feel like he was reading pages she hadn’t written. “She’s not here,” he said. “I know.” Rory turned, bracing herself against the counter. “I just—needed to drop it off. She texted, said she was buried in research.” A flicker in the amber eye. “She’s chasing rumors about the Veil weakening near Highgate. Thinks it’s tied to the disappearances.” Rory nodded. “I read the article. Seven missing in three weeks. All psychics. All last seen near cemeteries.” “You still follow the threads,” he observed. “Not by choice. You can’t live in this city and not feel the pulse beneath the pavement.” She looked at him then, really looked. “You changed your cologne.” He arched a brow. “I didn’t think you’d notice.” “I remember things.” A beat. “Even the ones I shouldn’t.” Silence settled, thick and charged. The candles guttered in the draft from the open door. Rain hissed against the windowpanes. Lucien reached past her, closed the door. The sound of the deadbolts sliding home was loud in the quiet. “You never answered my letters,” he said softly. Her breath caught. “You sent three.” “And you burned the first. Blocked my number after the second. The third—” “I kept it.” Her voice dropped. “I just didn’t reply.” “Why are you here, Aurora?” She flinched at the full name. Only he ever used it that way—like it meant something sacred. Like it wasn’t just a label, but a key. “I don’t know,” she admitted. “Maybe I wanted to see if it was true. That you were back. That you—” She broke off, shaking her head. “I thought after Prague, after what happened with the summoning circle, you’d vanish. Permanently.” “I almost did.” He leaned against the wall, one hand resting on the handle of his cane. “I had a buyer in Marrakech. A clean exit. No entanglements.” “But?” “But I found a trail. One that led back here. To a sealed contract between a certain half-demon information broker and a woman who once saved his life during a blood moon ritual.” A ghost of a smile. “Turns out, debts don’t expire.” “You think I saved you?” “I know you did.” He pushed off the wall, took a step closer. “You stood between me and a coven of vengeful witches with nothing but a sigil drawn in chalk and your father’s barrister voice. You told them I was *yours*—bound by blood. They believed you.” “I lied.” “No.” His voice dropped, roughened. “You claimed me. In front of witnesses. In the old way. That’s not a lie, Rory. That’s a vow.” She swallowed. “I didn’t know what I was saying. I just couldn’t let them tear you apart.” “Convenient.” He was near enough now that she could see the faint scars along his jawline—remnants of that night, healed but never gone. “Because I’ve been trying to un-claim myself ever since. And I can’t.” Her pulse thundered in her ears. “You walked away,” she whispered. “Without a word.” “Because you were healing. Because Eva told me you’d just escaped Evan, that you needed peace. And because—” He exhaled, slow, measured. “Because I’m not safe. You know what I am. What my father was. You *know* the risk.” “I’ve faced worse than demons.” “I’m not just a demon.” His heterochromatic gaze held hers. “I’m the thing that sleeps under contracts and blood oaths. I’m the one who negotiates with monsters. And you—you’re bright. Human. Fragile in the worst ways. I couldn’t ask you to walk into that with me.” “So you made the choice for me.” “I protected you.” “From *what*? From *me*?” Her voice cracked. “You don’t get to decide what I can handle, Lucien. Not then. Not now.” He stiffened. For the first time, the mask slipped—just at the edges. Pain flickered in the amber eye. “Do you have any idea how many times I’ve dreamed of hearing you say my name like that? With fire. With life. After I left, I heard nothing. Not a whisper. I didn’t know if you hated me. If you’d moved on. If you were even alive.” “I’m alive,” she said, stepping forward. “And I didn’t move on. Not really. I deliver lo mein and pretend the world isn’t full of shadows that know my name.” They stood inches apart. The air between them hummed. Lucien lifted a hand—slow, deliberate—and brushed a wet strand of hair from her temple. His fingers were cool, steady. “You’re shivering.” “I’m fine.” “You’re not.” His thumb traced the curve of her cheekbone, feather-light. “And I—” He stopped, jaw tightening. “I don’t know how to do this. I don’t know how to be what you need.” “Then don’t be what I need,” she breathed. “Just be here. Just—be honest. Tell me you didn’t miss me. Tell me you don’t still feel it when I walk into a room. Tell me and I’ll leave. Right now.” He closed his eyes. A beat. Two. When he opened them, the black one gleamed like obsidian. The amber burned low and fierce. “I dream of your voice,” he said, voice raw. “Of the way you laugh when you win at chess. Of the scar on your wrist—how it matches the curve of the moon the night we stopped a war between covens with nothing but a forged decree and a bottle of cheap wine. I remember every moment. I’ve *kept* every moment. And if I told you I didn’t miss you, I’d be breaking the first truthful thing I’ve said in years.” Rory’s breath trembled. She reached up—slow, unafraid—and pressed her palm to his chest. Beneath the fine wool of his suit, his heart beat once, strong and steady. Then she rose on her toes and kissed him. The world narrowed. The candles flared. Somewhere, Ptolemy yowled in protest. Lucien froze—then melted into her, one hand cradling the back of her neck, the other wrapping around her waist, pulling her closer. The kiss was deep, desperate, years of silence collapsing into a single point of contact. Salt and rain and memory. When they broke apart, his forehead rested against hers. “We’re going to regret this,” he murmured. “Maybe,” she whispered. “But not tonight.” Outside, the storm raged on. Inside, for the first time in too long, the flat didn’t feel so cold.
created_at"2026-03-25T10:15:55.644Z" 3/25/2026, 10:15:55 AM
model"qwen/qwen3-235b-a22b-07-25"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency131
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time27052
tokens_prompt808
tokens_completion2430
native_tokens_prompt776
native_tokens_completion2092
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0002868
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"c9f927db-d559-49eb-9846-80862c5e3b4e"
id"chatcmpl-838c2b7fd4619686"
is_byokfalse
latency31
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3-235b-a22b-07-25"
provider_name"WandB"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1774433755-2UxuH0eKFGeFyV4Oe9Vl"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-838c2b7fd4619686"
total_cost0.0002868
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"WandB"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.059
86.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"thundered"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silk"
2"warmth"
3"flicker"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"charged"
7"thundered"
8"measured"
9"flickered"
10"whisper"
11"traced"
12"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"t with anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1492
ratio0.003
matches
0"yours"
1"know"
2"what"
3"me"
4"kept"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount792
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Golden1
Empress1
French1
Rory6
Lucien5
Silence1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Silence"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if conducting some silent aria"
65.95% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.34
wordCount1492
matches
0"not with anger, not with cold dismissal, but with a kind of quiet recognition, as if he’d been expecting"
1"not with cold dismissal, but with a kind of quiet recognition, as if he’d been expecting"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean21.31
std19.17
cv0.899
sampleLengths
070
147
22
31
479
55
615
77
834
959
109
1135
1229
1339
1425
155
1623
1721
1818
197
2028
219
2210
2320
2419
258
266
2713
2810
295
3026
3140
3228
331
3443
355
3647
372
3824
3917
4035
416
428
4339
445
4546
467
473
4821
4965
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was coming"
1"was reading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences130
ratio0.085
matches
0"She shifted the weight of the delivery bag slung over her shoulder—Golden Empress logo peeling at the corner—and raised her fist to knock again."
1"And then—him."
2"The amber of one eye caught the candlelight, burning like embers in a dying fire; the other, deep and fathomless black, gave nothing away."
3"“You’re dripping on my floor,” he said, voice low, accented—French molasses laced with something older."
4"She opened her mouth—to argue, to explain, to throw the delivery bag at his chest and walk away—but the words died."
5"Only he ever used it that way—like it meant something sacred."
6"“Convenient.” He was near enough now that she could see the faint scars along his jawline—remnants of that night, healed but never gone."
7"For the first time, the mask slipped—just at the edges."
8"Lucien lifted a hand—slow, deliberate—and brushed a wet strand of hair from her temple."
9"She reached up—slow, unafraid—and pressed her palm to his chest."
10"Lucien froze—then melted into her, one hand cradling the back of her neck, the other wrapping around her waist, pulling her closer."
90.16% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount811
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small paper-wrapped box"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04438964241676942
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007398273736128237
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.48
std10.19
cv0.888
sampleLengths
019
120
224
37
411
56
69
721
82
91
1018
1124
1214
1323
145
1515
163
174
1824
1910
2021
2138
229
2314
2421
257
2611
2711
2815
2924
3025
315
329
3314
346
3515
362
3716
387
3924
404
414
425
435
445
455
4610
475
487
4912
53.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3769230769230769
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"Only he ever used it"
1"Then she rose on her"
2"Somewhere, Ptolemy yowled in protest."
ratio0.039
46.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences76
matches
0"She shifted the weight of"
1"He filled the gap in"
2"His platinum-blond hair was slicked"
3"He wore a charcoal suit,"
4"he said, voice low, accented—French"
5"he agreed, gaze flicking over"
6"She opened her mouth—to argue,"
7"He stepped back, just enough"
8"She hesitated, then stepped over"
9"she pulled a small paper-wrapped"
10"She looked at him then,"
11"He arched a brow."
12"he said softly"
13"Her breath caught."
14"Her voice dropped"
15"She flinched at the full"
16"She broke off, shaking her"
17"He leaned against the wall,"
18"He pushed off the wall,"
19"His voice dropped, roughened"
ratio0.434
45.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences76
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Rory stood beneath it, soaked"
2"She shifted the weight of"
3"The third deadbolt had just"
4"The door cracked inward, revealing"
5"Books teetered on every horizontal"
6"Scrolls spilled from a wicker"
7"A tabby cat, half-lidded and"
8"He filled the gap in"
9"The amber of one eye"
10"His platinum-blond hair was slicked"
11"He wore a charcoal suit,"
12"he said, voice low, accented—French"
13"Rory’s breath hitched."
14"he agreed, gaze flicking over"
15"She opened her mouth—to argue,"
16"He stepped back, just enough"
17"She hesitated, then stepped over"
18"The warmth of the flat"
19"Ptolemy chirruped once, then leapt"
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A tabby cat, half-lidded and smug, perched atop a stack of leather-bound grimoires, tail twitching as if conducting some silent aria."
1"There was something about the way he looked at her, not with anger, not with cold dismissal, but with a kind of quiet recognition, as if he’d been expecting her…"
2"Lucien froze—then melted into her, one hand cradling the back of her neck, the other wrapping around her waist, pulling her closer."
71.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, voice low, accented—French molasses laced with something older"
1"He stopped, jaw tightening"
2"he said, voice raw"
47.06% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he observed (observe)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.583
effectiveRatio0.206
80.5838%