| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.36 | | leniency | 0.72 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1256 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1256 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1235 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Unmade." | | 1 | "once" | | 2 | "inhaled" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1083 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | One | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Heartstone" | | 6 | "Pendant" | | 7 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Fae-Forged" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.761 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if passing through smoke" | | 1 | "as if offering something long forgotten" |
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| 38.06% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.619 | | wordCount | 1235 | | matches | | 0 | "not with hunger, but revulsion" | | 1 | "not in offering, but in fists" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 76 | | mean | 16.25 | | std | 16.91 | | cv | 1.041 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 94.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "been written" | | 1 | "was tangled" | | 2 | "were clenched" | | 3 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "The next, silence—deep, muffled, as if the air itself had thickened into velvet." | | 1 | "It throbbed once—warm, insistent—then stilled." | | 2 | "The spiral flared under their touch—blackened, then faded." | | 3 | "A path—narrow, winding, lined with luminescent mushrooms the color of bruised violets—sloped gently between the oaks." | | 4 | "It was tangled canopy—impossibly high—strung with vines that pulsed with bioluminescence, drifting like jellyfish in an arboreal sea." | | 5 | "The air changed—thicker, sweeter, like wine left too long in the sun." | | 6 | "At one point, the path split in three—but all three paths ran parallel, overlapping like layers of film." | | 7 | "Rory reached out; her hand passed through the leftmost trail as though it were smoke." | | 8 | "She clutched it, stumbling forward—and the middle path solidified beneath her feet." | | 9 | "At its center stood a statue—tall, faceless, arms outstretched, palms up, as if offering something long forgotten." | | 10 | "Platters overflowed with glistening fruit—pomegranates split open to reveal seeds like rubies, grapes the size of quail eggs, berries that shimmered with iridescence." | | 11 | "Rory’s stomach twisted—not with hunger, but revulsion." | | 12 | "Then—laughter." | | 13 | "Now, they were clenched—not in offering, but in fists." | | 14 | "But the air tasted different now—metallic, like blood on the tongue." | | 15 | "Ink—deep umber—spidered across it in tight, spidery script." | | 16 | "And beneath her fingers, the parchment pulsed—once—like a dying heart." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1113 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.034141958670260555 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006289308176100629 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 8.52 | | std | 5.92 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 61.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the Heartstone flared." | | 1 | "Just the faint, cloying sweetness" | | 2 | "Then it crumbled to dust." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form flickered, edges blurring" | | 1 | "She wore a gown of" | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 3 | "It throbbed once—warm, insistent—then stilled." | | 4 | "She hadn’t told anyone why" | | 5 | "She tilted her head, considering" | | 6 | "She stepped aside, and the" | | 7 | "It was tangled canopy—impossibly high—strung" | | 8 | "Her boots sank slightly." | | 9 | "She clutched it, stumbling forward—and" | | 10 | "They emerged into a ruined" | | 11 | "They hovered at the edge," | | 12 | "Her boot dislodged a pebble." | | 13 | "She stepped back, pulse hammering." | | 14 | "They turned to her." | | 15 | "It still glowed, faintly." | | 16 | "She took one step toward" | | 17 | "She couldn’t read it." | | 18 | "She lifted it." |
| | ratio | 0.171 | |
| 81.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees swallowed the sound" | | 1 | "The next, silence—deep, muffled, as" | | 2 | "The path beneath her boots" | | 3 | "The standing stones of the" | | 4 | "Rory paused, her breath forming" | | 5 | "Their form flickered, edges blurring" | | 6 | "Violet eyes glowed fainter here," | | 7 | "Nyx murmured, the whisper of" | | 8 | "Rory said, nodding toward the" | | 9 | "Isolde Varga stood barefoot on" | | 10 | "She wore a gown of" | | 11 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 12 | "Isolde said, voice lilting, as" | | 13 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the Heartstone" | | 14 | "It throbbed once—warm, insistent—then stilled." | | 15 | "She hadn’t told anyone why" | | 16 | "The pendant had been in" | | 17 | "Nyx drifted to the edge" | | 18 | "The spiral flared under their" | | 19 | "Isolde didn’t look at them." |
| | ratio | 0.757 | |
| 45.05% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, they were clenched—not in" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Violet eyes glowed fainter here, subdued, as though the grove resisted their nature." | | 1 | "Flowers unfurled as they watched, petals spiraling open to release motes of golden pollen that hung midair, shimmering, scentless." | | 2 | "Rory reached out; her hand passed through the leftmost trail as though it were smoke." | | 3 | "At its center stood a statue—tall, faceless, arms outstretched, palms up, as if offering something long forgotten." | | 4 | "Platters overflowed with glistening fruit—pomegranates split open to reveal seeds like rubies, grapes the size of quail eggs, berries that shimmered with irides…" | | 5 | "A roasted bird, golden-skinned, lay on a bed of herbs, garnished with petals that hadn’t bloomed on Earth in centuries." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, the whisper of wind threading through dry reeds" |
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| 70.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.32 | | leniency | 0.64 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |