| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 67 | | tagDensity | 0.224 | | leniency | 0.448 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1126 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1126 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "shattered" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1115 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "we" | | 1 | "Sigils of the Hollow Veil" | | 2 | "that" | | 3 | "you" | | 4 | "shink" | | 5 | "Laila" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 686 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Hollow | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Bengali | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Hollow" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Bengali" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like recognition" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 90 | | mean | 12.39 | | std | 11.58 | | cv | 0.934 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory didn’t open the door fully at first—just a thin slice, the warped wood creaking against the frame." | | 1 | "Her breath caught—just once." | | 2 | "His cane tapped once on the floorboards—a single, precise note." | | 3 | "His amber eye caught the lamplight; the other, black as a starless night, absorbed it." | | 4 | "Lucien’s fingers traced the spine of a weathered grimoire on the counter—*Sigils of the Hollow Veil*, its cover cracked with use." | | 5 | "She saw it—the flicker in his heterochromatic gaze." | | 6 | "Not just memory—the weight of everything unsaid since that night in Cardiff." | | 7 | "All she saw was him—the sharp line of his jaw, the tension in his throat, the way his breath hitched just once." | | 8 | "The world narrowed—the press of his body, the soft groan in his throat, the way his fingers threaded through her hair like he’d memorised the shape of her skull." | | 9 | "A crash from the street below—glass shattering." | | 10 | "He looked at her—really looked." | | 11 | "A figure stood on the landing—hooded, motionless." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 699 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.034334763948497854 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005722460658082976 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 7.24 | | std | 5.07 | | cv | 0.7 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 51.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.35064935064935066 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, a motorbike backfired." | | 1 | "Then turned the handle." |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 51.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers stayed wrapped tight" | | 1 | "She didn’t move." | | 2 | "His voice was low, smooth" | | 3 | "She kept her voice flat" | | 4 | "Her breath caught—just once." | | 5 | "He stepped through without invitation," | | 6 | "His cane tapped once on" | | 7 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 8 | "She moved to the kitchen," | | 9 | "She poured anyway." | | 10 | "She set the cup down" | | 11 | "He stepped closer" | | 12 | "Her laugh was short, brittle." | | 13 | "She saw it—the flicker in" | | 14 | "His mouth against hers, desperate" | | 15 | "His voice dropped, edged with" | | 16 | "Her breath stilled." | | 17 | "She cut herself off" | | 18 | "His cane clattered to the" | | 19 | "He closed the distance in" |
| | ratio | 0.42 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain clinked as the" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t open the door" | | 2 | "Her fingers stayed wrapped tight" | | 3 | "Ptolemy hissed from the kitchen," | | 4 | "A leather-gloved hand rested against" | | 5 | "The scent of bergamot and" | | 6 | "She didn’t move." | | 7 | "His voice was low, smooth" | | 8 | "The wind funneling down Brick" | | 9 | "The curry house below sent" | | 10 | "Ptolemy reappeared, crouched now, ears" | | 11 | "She kept her voice flat" | | 12 | "Her breath caught—just once." | | 13 | "The scar on her left" | | 14 | "The door swung wider." | | 15 | "He stepped through without invitation," | | 16 | "His cane tapped once on" | | 17 | "Ivory handle, smooth as bone." | | 18 | "The blade inside never made" | | 19 | "The flat hadn’t changed." |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Because she knew that voice." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the woman whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 67 | | tagDensity | 0.104 | | leniency | 0.209 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.06 | |