Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7Z3XK6MENVHYHGY6R0XES

Run Details

Duration:
46.9s
Cost:
$0.000598
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn strode through the yawning concrete arch of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Her boots echoed against the cracked tile, the sound swallowed by the cavernous silence. Here, the air felt heavier, as if the station had become a lung in a forgotten body. Her gloved fingers gripped the lapel of her trench coat, the fabric stiff with motor oil and rain from the night shift. The Veil Market had moved to the old Northern Line platform tonight, its blue-lit stalls flickering in the distance like a mirage. Quinn’s sharp jaw tensed as she passed a rusted service tunnel, the stench of incense and ozone thick in her nostrils. A bone token hung loose in her pocket, but she wasn’t here to trade in alchemy or forbidden secrets. The murder was fresh, the victim’s blood still glinting under the Market’s unnatural light. She clicked her worn leather watch, its second hand steady despite the chaos around her. Somewhere in this shifting underworld, the pieces of the puzzle waited. She’d find them. Her breath fogged in the cold as the corpse came into view, slumped against the cold concrete bench of a disused platform. The young man—a student, by the scuffed loafers and half-ripped Oxford tie—had a faint, almost smug expression on his face. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. The body was too still, too silent. She reached into her coat for the Veil Compass, its brass casing a dull green against her palm. The needle spun wildly until she touched its face with her thumb, revealing a faint ripple in the air beside the victim. “Not just blood magic,” she muttered. Nearby, a cluster of alchemical vials glugged with viscous liquid, their glass throbbing as if alive. Quinn squatted, her salt-and-pepper hair casting a shadow over the corpse’s parted lips. Whatever had happened here, it defied the natural order. “It’s a robbery gone wrong,” said DS Jack Orlow behind her, his voice too loud in the enclosed space. He stood by the corpse’s satchel, zipping it shut. “He was offering one of those cursed trinkets to a buyer, got himself caught in the crossfire. The Market’s full of charlatans like him.” His hand hovered near his holstered baton, its chrome sheen reflecting the unnatural light. Quinn exhaled slowly, the Veil Compass still clutched in her fist. “Charlatans don’t bleed this clean,” she said, her voice sharp with irritation. “No defensive wounds, no struggle. The vials—” She gestured to the throbbing glass—“they’re intact. Whatever caused this, it didn’t attack him. It… chose him.” Orlow rolled his eyes, but he didn’t move closer. “We follow the rules, Quinn. This place isn’t your playground for occult theories.” She turned fully, her posture like a line of report text—unbent, unyielding. “If we ignore the unnatural, we’ll lose sight of the real crime.” The platform’s flickering lights caught the glint of something on the corpse’s wrist: a thin leather cord, its knot frayed as if recently disturbed. Quinn crouched, her gloved fingers tracing the cord to a tiny circular mark on the skin underneath—a sigil, the lines dark as ink. Her breath held. This wasn’t a wound or a mark of violence. It was a design, deliberate. She pulled the compass free again, watching as the needle quivered, pointing toward the mark like a lodestone. Behind the bench, the ground was etched with a pattern—subtle, worn by the Market’s shifting movement. Quinn’s brow furrowed as she ran her fingers along the engravings. They weren’t random. They pulsed faintly, as if the stone itself hummed with something ancient. Her partner, DS Morris, had once told her about the way ritual symbols could warp perception. Quinn had dismissed it then, too caught up in bullet charts and forensic reports. Now, she pressed one hand flat against the pattern. The air beneath it felt like a breath, held and waiting. Her eyes darted to the corpse’s sigiled wrist. The markings mirrored the ones on the ground. Someone had marked this man as part of the design. A vessel. A sacrifice. She reached for her radio, her voice steady. “Orlow. Take a closer look at the floor. I think this wasn’t a killing. It was a summoning.” The DS froze, his mouth parting. The Veil Compass in Quinn’s other hand suddenly snapped as its needle stopped moving. A heartbeat later, the air behind her shifted, thickening like smoke. Quinn didn’t flinch. She’d seen the cracks between worlds—DS Morris had. She’d find the others, the ones who hid in the shadows of this Market. And she’d make them answer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount766
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount766
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"quivered"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"furrowed"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"glinting"
3"glint"
4"tracing"
5"quivered"
6"etched"
7"furrowed"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords760
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount671
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Tube1
Camden1
Veil4
Market4
Northern1
Line1
Oxford1
Compass3
Nearby1
Jack1
Orlow2
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Compass"
4"Jack"
5"Orlow"
6"Morris"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.755
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a breath, held and waiting"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount760
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean69.09
std47.07
cv0.681
sampleLengths
0174
1136
266
347
422
524
682
792
830
926
1061
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences59
ratio0.102
matches
0"The young man—a student, by the scuffed loafers and half-ripped Oxford tie—had a faint, almost smug expression on his face."
1"“No defensive wounds, no struggle. The vials—” She gestured to the throbbing glass—“they’re intact. Whatever caused this, it didn’t attack him. It… chose him.”"
2"She turned fully, her posture like a line of report text—unbent, unyielding."
3"Quinn crouched, her gloved fingers tracing the cord to a tiny circular mark on the skin underneath—a sigil, the lines dark as ink."
4"Behind the bench, the ground was etched with a pattern—subtle, worn by the Market’s shifting movement."
5"She’d seen the cracks between worlds—DS Morris had."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount420
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dull green against her"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.02142857142857143
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004761904761904762
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean12.88
std6.92
cv0.537
sampleLengths
016
114
217
322
422
521
619
714
815
911
103
1122
1220
133
147
1518
1622
176
1816
1913
209
2119
229
2338
2411
2512
2624
279
2813
2912
3012
3124
3223
333
349
355
3618
3716
3811
393
4012
4116
4214
439
4411
458
468
4710
482
492
59.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4067796610169492
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners24
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Somewhere in this shifting underworld,"
ratio0.019
61.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her boots echoed against the"
1"Her gloved fingers gripped the"
2"She clicked her worn leather"
3"She’d find them."
4"Her breath fogged in the"
5"She reached into her coat"
6"He stood by the corpse’s"
7"His hand hovered near his"
8"she said, her voice sharp"
9"She gestured to the throbbing"
10"She turned fully, her posture"
11"Her breath held."
12"It was a design, deliberate."
13"She pulled the compass free"
14"They weren’t random."
15"They pulsed faintly, as if"
16"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
17"Her eyes darted to the"
18"She reached for her radio,"
19"She’d seen the cracks between"
ratio0.396
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn strode through"
1"Her boots echoed against the"
2"Here, the air felt heavier,"
3"Her gloved fingers gripped the"
4"The Veil Market had moved"
5"Quinn’s sharp jaw tensed as"
6"A bone token hung loose"
7"The murder was fresh, the"
8"She clicked her worn leather"
9"She’d find them."
10"Her breath fogged in the"
11"The young man—a student, by"
12"Quinn’s eyes narrowed."
13"The body was too still,"
14"She reached into her coat"
15"The needle spun wildly until"
16"Quinn squatted, her salt-and-pepper hair"
17"Whatever had happened here, it"
18"He stood by the corpse’s"
19"His hand hovered near his"
ratio0.887
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Now, she pressed one hand"
ratio0.019
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Nearby, a cluster of alchemical vials glugged with viscous liquid, their glass throbbing as if alive."
1"The platform’s flickering lights caught the glint of something on the corpse’s wrist: a thin leather cord, its knot frayed as if recently disturbed."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"said DS Jack Orlow behind her, his voice too loud in the enclosed space"
1"His hand hovered, its chrome sheen reflecting the unnatural light"
2"she said, her voice sharp with irritation"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.25
80.2925%