Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ81D0C6CTFPTGWFGC8QGZ6

Run Details

Duration:
52.2s
Cost:
$0.000790
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station hung thick with mildew and the tang of rusted metal. Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed on the cracked tile as she approached the crime scene, her watch’s leather strap creaking with every stride. Three uniformed officers fanned out ahead, their flashlights slicing through the gloom, while a coroner’s body bag lay half-open on a plastic tarp. The victim was a young man in a tailored suit, his throat slit with surgical precision. Nothing about the corpse moved, but Quinn’s jaw tightened—a corpse in a place like this always felt like it was *watching*. “You’re late, Quinn,” came a voice from the shadows. Eva Kowalski stepped into the beam of a flashlight, her satchel slung over one shoulder. She adjusted her glasses, the round lenses catching the light as she gestured at the body. “He’s been dead twelve hours, maybe more. No ID, no wallet, no fingerprints. Just this.” She dropped a small brass compass onto the tarp. Its needle spun wildly, etched sigils on the face glowing faintly green. Quinn snatched it up, thumb brushing the verdigris casing. “A trinket? You think this proves *what*, exactly? That he was robbed?” Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear, her nervous tic. “The Compass doesn’t lie. It points to rifts, to places where the rules break. If it’s here, the Market was involved.” Her voice was a mix of academic certainty and something sharper. Guilt, maybe. Or fear. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “This is the third body this month, all of them connected to black-market auctions. The department says it’s an underground drug ring. You say it’s some occult nonsense.” She flipped the Compass over, checking for registration tags. Nothing. “Your ‘rules breaking’ explain a hell of a lot, Evie. But until I see a body vanish or a ghost testify, I’m sticking with the law.” A flicker of something crossed Eva’s face—disappointment? Resentment? Before she could reply, a shout came from the corridor. “Detective, you need to see this.” The voice belonged to DS Raj Chopra, Quinn’s colleague since the academy. He stood at the edge of the crime scene, flashlight trained on the wall beside the body. The concrete bore a scorch mark, irregular and branching like molten lightning. “Al-Ketabi’s team says it’s acid,” Raj said, joining Quinn. His collar was damp with sweat despite the chill. “But the pattern doesn’t match anything in their database. And look at the floor.” He pointed at the water pooling beneath the body. It shimmered faintly, as if reflecting starlight. Quinn crouched, reaching into her coat for gloves. The water was colder than the air, and as her fingertips touched it, the Compass in her hand jolted. The needle locked, pointing directly at the scorch mark. “Eva,” she said, not looking up. “What’s inside the Compass’s sigils?” Eva leaned in, her breath fogging in the air. “It’s a containment formula. For stabilizing rifts. If this water is what I think it—” “Then the victim didn’t bleed out,” Quinn interrupted. She moved faster now, military precision cutting through uncertainty. Kneeling beside the body, she pressed her palm to the corpse’s chest. No warmth, no rigor. But when she tilted the Compass over the wound on his neck, the needle spun again, this time tracing a slow arc toward the pooling blood. Raj swore. “That’s not possible. The tox report’ll come back clean.” “Will it?” Quinn’s fingers dug into the satchel, pulling out a magnifying loupe. She scanned the edges of the wound, the skin around it too smooth, almost *glazed*. “This isn’t just a cut. It’s a burn—a clean, directed burn. Like a laser, but colder.” She showed Raj the Compass’s needle, now trembling between two directions. “There’s a second point of origin. Something pulled out.” Eva’s hands were already working, flipping open her satchel. She laid a dog-eared notebook on the tarp, tapping a photo of a similar scorch mark she’d taken last year. “The same pattern from a rift collapse in Prague. Whatever did this, it didn’t just kill him. It *unmade* him, piece by piece.” “Speculation,” Quinn said. But her eyes were locked on the Compass. The needle wasn’t random now. It was mapping something. She stood, scanning the room. The Market’s architecture was a warren of impossible angles, tunnels that seemed to shift when you weren’t looking. A new thought took root. The victim’s blood wasn’t just pooling. It was *climbing*, following the Compass’s pull. Raj followed her gaze. “What’s she doing?” he muttered to Eva. Eva didn’t answer. She watched as Quinn jogged down the corridor, the Compass held tight, her steps echoing like gunshots. The detective stopped at a stairwell, its iron railing pitted with rust. The Compass needle jerked, pointing downward. Quinn turned, her voice sharp. “The body’s in the main chamber. The water’s flowing away from it, but the blood’s moving *toward* this staircase. Why?” No one answered. Eva’s hands twitched toward her satchel, fingers brushing the edge of a sealed evidence bag—*hers*, Quinn noted. “Because this isn’t the bottom of the station,” Eva said finally. Quinn stared at her. “There’s no lower level. The architects blueprinted this place stone-dead.” “Not anymore.” Eva pulled out a folded blueprint, its edges singed. “The Market moves every full moon, but it also carves itself deeper. That stairwell leads to a void. A space that wasn’t there before.” Raj shook his head. “You’re saying the walls built themselves?” “Only if you look at them wrong,” Quinn said. She’d read the reports. The Market’s locations always defied maps. But she’d chalked it up to panic, witness misidentification. *Until now.* The Compass gave a final shudder before settling. Its needle pointed straight down. Quinn stepped onto the first stair. “The victim didn’t just die up here. He was *disassembled*, and whatever did it didn’t finish its work. It’s still down there.” Eva started to move, but Raj gripped her arm. “You’re both mad. We have no mandate to go chasing ghosts in a crime scene.” Quinn didn’t stop. “You’ll have a mandate when the next body turns up with half its ribcage missing.” The first step groaned under her weight. Below, the air smelled of ozone and something wet—*like the water on the corpse’s floor*. Eva was right. The Market wasn’t just hidden. It was *growing*. Quinn didn’t look back. The Compass was silent now, but Quinn’s own instincts had gone still and sharp, like a knife poised mid-strike. And the stairs kept going down, into the black.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.433
leniency0.867
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.067
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1086
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1086
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"database"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"gloom"
2"etched"
3"flicker"
4"chill"
5"database"
6"shimmered"
7"warmth"
8"tracing"
9"scanned"
10"scanning"
11"echoing"
12"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch’s"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords18
totalWords1083
ratio0.017
matches
0"watching"
1"what"
2"glazed"
3"unmade"
4"climbing"
5"toward"
6"hers"
7"Until now."
8"disassembled"
9"like the water on the corpse’s floor"
10"growing"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount734
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.59
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn19
Eva12
Kowalski1
Guilt1
Compass10
Raj7
Chopra1
Market3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Eva"
2"Kowalski"
3"Compass"
4"Raj"
5"Chopra"
6"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.206
windowScore0.167
5.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like it was *watching*"
1"as if reflecting starlight"
2"tunnels that seemed to shift when you weren’t looking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1083
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean34.94
std22.15
cv0.634
sampleLengths
099
176
221
347
467
524
641
748
847
924
1059
1111
1264
1352
1461
1511
1620
1743
1820
1911
2014
2135
2210
2330
2413
2528
2624
2718
2833
2923
309
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"were locked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was *watching"
1"were already working"
2"was mapping"
3"weren’t looking"
4"wasn’t just pooling"
5"was *climbing"
27.42% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences99
ratio0.04
matches
0"Nothing about the corpse moved, but Quinn’s jaw tightened—a corpse in a place like this always felt like it was *watching*."
1"A flicker of something crossed Eva’s face—disappointment?"
2"Eva’s hands twitched toward her satchel, fingers brushing the edge of a sealed evidence bag—*hers*, Quinn noted."
3"Below, the air smelled of ozone and something wet—*like the water on the corpse’s floor*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount739
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.028416779431664412
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008119079837618403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.94
std7.45
cv0.681
sampleLengths
017
122
223
316
421
59
615
716
824
912
109
1112
1211
1332
142
152
163
1737
181
1926
207
211
2210
236
2412
2517
2612
279
289
2923
307
318
3219
339
346
355
369
3715
388
399
4012
414
4226
432
449
4513
4615
4727
489
499
60.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences75
matches
0"She adjusted her glasses, the"
1"She dropped a small brass"
2"Its needle spun wildly, etched"
3"Her voice was a mix"
4"She flipped the Compass over,"
5"He stood at the edge"
6"His collar was damp with"
7"He pointed at the water"
8"It shimmered faintly, as if"
9"she said, not looking up"
10"She moved faster now, military"
11"She scanned the edges of"
12"She showed Raj the Compass’s"
13"She laid a dog-eared notebook"
14"It was mapping something."
15"She stood, scanning the room."
16"It was *climbing*, following the"
17"he muttered to Eva"
18"She watched as Quinn jogged"
19"She’d read the reports."
ratio0.293
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed on"
2"The victim was a young"
3"Nothing about the corpse moved,"
4"Eva Kowalski stepped into the"
5"She adjusted her glasses, the"
6"She dropped a small brass"
7"Its needle spun wildly, etched"
8"Quinn snatched it up, thumb"
9"Eva tucked a curl behind"
10"Her voice was a mix"
11"Quinn’s eyes narrowed."
12"She flipped the Compass over,"
13"A flicker of something crossed"
14"The voice belonged to DS"
15"He stood at the edge"
16"The concrete bore a scorch"
17"Raj said, joining Quinn"
18"His collar was damp with"
19"He pointed at the water"
ratio0.853
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Before she could reply, a"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Market’s architecture was a warren of impossible angles, tunnels that seemed to shift when you weren’t looking."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, not looking up"
1"Eva pulled out, its edges singed"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
1"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.133
75.7839%