| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.365 | | leniency | 0.731 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "sanctuary" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "tinged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1254 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 863 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 17 | | Shadows | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Shadows" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.515 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.19 | | wordCount | 1254 | | matches | | 0 | "not with heat or humidity, but with a kind of weight" | | 1 | "not the sky above, but a moonlit city of impossible spires, bridges arching between" | | 2 | "not by sin, but by invitation" | | 3 | "not in the Grove, but in a kingdom of endless banquets" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 26.13 | | std | 20.53 | | cv | 0.786 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 111 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 52 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as they stepped through the standing stone, not with heat or humidity, but with a kind of weight—like crossing into water without getting wet." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—cobalt blue roses, lantern-like blossoms that drifted above the grass on glowing stems, petals that flickered like candle flames." | | 2 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their form coalescing from shadow to something nearly solid—a tall, lean silhouette wreathed in darkness, eyes two pinpricks of violet flame." | | 3 | "They followed her along a path that hadn’t been there a heartbeat ago—a trail of crushed quartz that sparkled underfoot, leading deeper into the grove." | | 4 | "The air smelled of honeysuckle and wet stone, but beneath it, a metallic tang—ozone, or blood." | | 5 | "She reached into the fountain and drew out a dagger—moonsilver, leaf-shaped, its blade cold and pale as a frostbitten breath." | | 6 | "The crescent-shaped scar—the one she’d had since childhood, the one Evan used to trace with cruel fascination—was warm." | | 7 | "From the tree line, figures emerged—stitched together from shadow and bark and moss, their limbs too long, faces smooth and blank." | | 8 | "There was no impact, no cry—just a ripple in the air, like stone dropped into still water." | | 9 | "The pendant flared—hot this time, searing against her skin." | | 10 | "The quartz path ahead split, branching into three: one shimmering with heat haze like a desert road, another winding downward into roots and darkness, the last glowing with gold-tinged light—warm, inviting, smelling of roasted herbs and wine." | | 11 | "And somewhere, far away, a bell rang—not in the Grove, but in a kingdom of endless banquets, where a prince with eyes like ripe figs smiled, and raised a glass to a toast not yet spoken." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 881 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.032917139614074914 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0056753688989784334 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 11.1 | | std | 8.1 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 59.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3805309734513274 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Their bark shimmered, veins of" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 2 | "She wore no shoes, yet" | | 3 | "they whispered, the voice like" | | 4 | "They followed her along a" | | 5 | "She reached into her coat" | | 6 | "She reached into the fountain" | | 7 | "She tugged her sleeve down." | | 8 | "They made no sound, but" |
| | ratio | 0.134 | |
| 12.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as they" | | 1 | "Aurora held her breath, hand" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed once" | | 3 | "The oak standing stones still" | | 4 | "Their bark shimmered, veins of" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—cobalt" | | 6 | "The sky above wasn’t sky" | | 7 | "Isolde murmured, gliding ahead without" | | 8 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 9 | "She wore no shoes, yet" | | 10 | "Rory exhaled slowly." | | 11 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their" | | 12 | "they whispered, the voice like" | | 13 | "Isolde didn’t look back." | | 14 | "They followed her along a" | | 15 | "The air smelled of honeysuckle" | | 16 | "Rory frowned, scanning the edges" | | 17 | "Flowers turned their blossoms toward" | | 18 | "Nyx said, their voice lower" | | 19 | "Shadows peeled from the trees," |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the grove around them" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—cobalt blue roses, lantern-like blossoms that drifted above the grass on glowing stems, petals that flickered like c…" | | 1 | "They followed her along a path that hadn’t been there a heartbeat ago—a trail of crushed quartz that sparkled underfoot, leading deeper into the grove." | | 2 | "The water within wasn’t water at all, but a slow swirl of liquid silver that reflected not the sky above, but a moonlit city of impossible spires, bridges archi…" | | 3 | "Nyx stepped in front of Rory, their body dissolving into a column of darkness that surged forward, meeting the nearest figure in a clash of silence." | | 4 | "Isolde stepped forward, cupping Rory’s face with hands that were cool as mist." | | 5 | "Rory closed her eyes, feeling the cold of the blade, the heat of the stone, the weight of two worlds pressing in." |
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| 98.68% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice lower now" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |