Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ83EXGT0TTAJQBT6N6GH09

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Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.001626
Provider:
Friendli

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered above The Raven’s Nest like a pulse slowing in old age. Aurora Carter paused on the curb, rain glittering in her lashes, the damp collar of her delivery jacket turned up against the Soho drizzle. She’d just finished her third double shift this week, bag still slung over one shoulder, the scent of ginger and black bean clinging to her gloves. Ten past ten. She needed a drink. A real one. Not the cheap gin she sipped off-duty in her flat above the bar. Downstairs, where the world didn’t know her as Laila—alias for paperwork and paranoia—but as Rory, the girl who used to write mock legal briefs in Cardiff libraries while dreaming of anything else. Inside, the air hung thick with smoke and the low hum of jazz—some brass-heavy trumpet number from the sixties. The usual suspects: a couple murmuring in a corner booth, a solo banker with a scotch and a fractured expression, two women laughing over gin fizz near the dartboard. And then, at the far end of the bar, one stool too far from the light, him. She didn’t recognize him at first. Not really. Just a silhouette—tall, broad in the shoulders even with the slight unevenness in his posture. Grey-streaked hair catching the dim light. Then he turned, signaling the bartender with a tilt of his glass, and she saw the ring. Silver. Etched with a crest she remembered from Prague-era gossip sheets her father used to read aloud: owl, key, thorn. The ring Silas never took off. Even in the hospital. Even in the safehouse outside Lyon, when he’d pressed her hand and said, *“You’re better than this world, Rory. Get out while you still can.”* Ten years. Maybe more. She approached slowly, her boots muffled on the worn rug. “Silas?” His head turned. Hazel eyes—duller now, clouded with time—flicked over her face. Recognition came like a delayed fuse. His throat moved. “Aurora Carter.” Not Rory. Never Rory anymore, not from him. He said it like a court summons. “Didn’t expect to see you behind the bar.” “I own it.” He gestured to the room with his glass. “Retirement plan with benefits.” She slid onto the adjacent stool. “Didn’t think you retired.” “Retirement chose me.” He tapped his left knee lightly, winced before he could stop himself. “Doctors said I’d walk with a limp. Lied. I limp more than I walk.” She didn’t laugh. Neither did he. The bartender—Luc, thin-faced and watchful—nodded at her. “Usual?” “Double gin, splash of tonic. Lime on the side.” Silas watched her. “Still avoiding vermouth.” “Veritas in vino,” she said. “Too much truth makes a person reckless.” He almost smiled. Almost. “You look different.” “So do you.” “Older.” “Harder,” she corrected. He swirled the amber liquid in his tumbler. Ice cracked. “Been a while since someone said that to my face.” “Been a while since you had anyone to say it to.” A pause. The trumpet in the music wailed, sharp and lonely. “You’ve been keeping tabs?” he asked. “Not by choice. Ever see a news clip from Belgrade or Dakar and think, *that’s his work*? Hard not to.” He grunted. “Good work doesn’t make headlines.” “And bad?” His gaze cut to her then, sharp as a blade under ice. “Bad gets buried. With apologies.” She looked down at her hands. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she rotated it. He saw it. His jaw tightened. “Still got that?” “Still got it,” she said. “Fell off the garage roof when I was nine. You weren’t supposed to know about that.” “I wasn’t supposed to know a lot of things about you,” he said quietly. “But once you’re in a file, you’re in the system. Always.” “You read my file after I left?” “After you disappeared,” he corrected. “After Prague. After…” He trailed off. After she vanished from safe custody. After she broke protocol, took a burner phone, and ghosted the agency before they could turn her into an asset or—worse—a liability. “You were reckless,” he said finally. “I was eighteen. You were supposed to protect me.” “And you were supposed to listen.” “I didn’t sign up for any of it.” “No one does.” Her drink arrived. She took a sip. Cold, bitter. Familiar. Silas leaned forward slightly, elbow on the bar. “Why’d you come back to London?” “I didn’t. I never left.” She set the glass down. “Moved in above the Nest six months ago. Didn’t know it was yours.” “You didn’t know?” “I knew Silas Blackwood owned a bar in Soho. Didn’t know it was *this* bar. Didn’t know you were still alive.” “Funny,” he said. “I heard you were in Berlin. Art dealer. Going by Laila Voss.” “That was a cover. For six weeks.” “For?” She stared at him. “You really don’t know?” “I wouldn’t ask if I did.” She exhaled through her nose. “Eva was taken.” His stillness was immediate. Absolute. Like a switch flipped. “When?” “Nine months ago. Vanished leaving her flat in Kreuzberg. Surveillance footage shows a van. No plates. Clean grab.” “Agency?” “They denied involvement. Buried the inquiry.” “You think it was us?” “I think someone doesn’t want her talking.” She paused. “She knew about Prague. Knew I wasn’t just a courier. Knew *you* pulled me in.” Silas’ hand tightened on his glass. The faint tremor in his left knee made the stool creak. “So you’ve been hunting.” “Not hunting. Waiting. Looking. Delivering noodles for a Chinese restaurant because it keeps me invisible and moving. Yu-Fei lets me use her back alley for dead drops. Pays me in cash. No records.” He studied her—the set of her shoulders, the way her eyes flicked to the exit, then to the bookshelf in the back. *The secret room.* He saw her see it. “You’re using my bar.” “I didn’t know it was yours.” “Convenient.” “It’s not a favor.” “No,” he said. “It’s not.” The silence stretched. The music shifted—piano now, slower, like breath held too long. “You changed,” he said. “We both did.” “No. You’re not the girl who cried in the safehouse because she stole a passport. You’re not the one who argued ethics in training like it was a philosophy class.” “I grew up.” “Or gave up something to survive.” She met his gaze. “Maybe both.” He reached into his jacket. Not for a weapon. A photograph. Slid it across the bar. Black and white. Grainy. Two figures on a bridge. A younger Silas, coat flapping, hand gripping a woman’s arm—small, dark-haired, face turned away. “That’s Elise,” he said. “My handler. My… everything. They said she betrayed us. Said she sold Prague to Moscow. But the file was altered. I know it. I’ve spent eight years proving it. She didn’t. She was protecting *you*.” Rory’s breath stilled. “She took the fall so they wouldn’t dig deeper into your recruitment. So they’d think it a simple leak. Not a pattern.” He looked at her. “You were never supposed to be in Prague, Rory. You were bait. And I let them use you.” The bar seemed to tilt. The neon buzzed. The scar on her wrist throbbed. “You knew?” “I suspected. Too late.” She pushed the photo back. “So what now?” “I’ve been waiting,” he said. “For you. Or for her. Or for someone to ask the right questions.” “And?” “And you just walked in.” She picked up her glass. Took a long drink. The ice clinked. “You limped into this life,” she said. “I walked into mine.” “And?” he asked. “And I’m not leaving until I find her.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.047
80.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1277
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"lightly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1277
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"fractured"
3"etched"
4"flicked"
5"familiar"
6"silence"
7"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords21
totalWords1264
ratio0.017
matches
0"“You’re better than this world, Rory. Get out while you still can.”"
1"that’s his work"
2"this"
3"you"
4"The secret room."
5"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount671
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Soho1
Laila1
Rory4
Cardiff1
Prague-era1
Silas4
Lyon1
Ten2
Luc1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Laila"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Luc"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague-era"
3"Lyon"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1264
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean14.53
std18.57
cv1.278
sampleLengths
0121
165
2101
34
411
538
68
715
810
929
106
118
129
136
1412
157
163
171
183
1920
2011
2111
226
2320
247
252
2617
2726
283
2921
3025
317
3211
3328
346
359
366
378
383
3910
4014
4123
423
4321
4415
457
461
478
486
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences167
ratio0.054
matches
0"Downstairs, where the world didn’t know her as Laila—alias for paperwork and paranoia—but as Rory, the girl who used to write mock legal briefs in Cardiff libraries while dreaming of anything else."
1"Inside, the air hung thick with smoke and the low hum of jazz—some brass-heavy trumpet number from the sixties."
2"Just a silhouette—tall, broad in the shoulders even with the slight unevenness in his posture."
3"Hazel eyes—duller now, clouded with time—flicked over her face."
4"The bartender—Luc, thin-faced and watchful—nodded at her."
5"After she broke protocol, took a burner phone, and ghosted the agency before they could turn her into an asset or—worse—a liability."
6"He studied her—the set of her shoulders, the way her eyes flicked to the exit, then to the bookshelf in the back."
7"The music shifted—piano now, slower, like breath held too long."
8"A younger Silas, coat flapping, hand gripping a woman’s arm—small, dark-haired, face turned away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount713
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009817671809256662
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean7.57
std7.03
cv0.929
sampleLengths
016
124
226
33
44
53
613
732
819
929
1017
116
122
1315
146
1517
161
1719
186
194
2025
212
222
2310
241
253
269
276
283
294
306
317
328
3311
344
356
364
3715
3814
393
403
417
421
439
443
453
465
477
483
491
64.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4251497005988024
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners71
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Just a silhouette—tall, broad in"
1"Then he turned, signaling the"
ratio0.027
49.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences75
matches
0"She’d just finished her third"
1"She needed a drink."
2"She didn’t recognize him at"
3"She approached slowly, her boots"
4"His head turned."
5"His throat moved."
6"He said it like a"
7"He gestured to the room"
8"She slid onto the adjacent"
9"He tapped his left knee"
10"She didn’t laugh."
11"He almost smiled."
12"He swirled the amber liquid"
13"His gaze cut to her"
14"She looked down at her"
15"He saw it."
16"His jaw tightened."
17"he said quietly"
18"He trailed off"
19"he said finally"
ratio0.427
86.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Aurora Carter paused on the"
2"She’d just finished her third"
3"She needed a drink."
4"A real one."
5"Downstairs, where the world didn’t"
6"The usual suspects: a couple"
7"She didn’t recognize him at"
8"The ring Silas never took"
9"She approached slowly, her boots"
10"His head turned."
11"Hazel eyes—duller now, clouded with"
12"Recognition came like a delayed"
13"His throat moved."
14"He said it like a"
15"He gestured to the room"
16"She slid onto the adjacent"
17"He tapped his left knee"
18"She didn’t laugh."
19"Neither did he."
ratio0.747
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Even in the hospital."
1"Even in the safehouse outside"
ratio0.027
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Downstairs, where the world didn’t know her as Laila—alias for paperwork and paranoia—but as Rory, the girl who used to write mock legal briefs in Cardiff libra…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.047
91.1448%