Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ83RW4QQ6TN79XPTJ59ZDM

Run Details

Duration:
28.8s
Cost:
$0.000723
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The metal reek of blood lingered heavier than it should have in the damp air of the abandoned Tube station. Quinn’s flashlight beam carved a jagged line across the graffiti-scarred walls as she crouched beside the body. The victim lay sprawled at the base of a shattered handrail, throat slit, a ring of clumsily chalked sigils fanning out from their fingers like cracked frost. DS Elliot’s voice buzzed from across the crime scene. “I told you, this reeks of ritual magic. They’re not even *real* symbols, just—” he kicked a half-carved glyph with the toe of his boot, “—a kid’s scribbles. Whoever did this, they’re trying to *look* occult.” Quinn didn’t look up. Her gloved fingers traced the chalked lines. The pigment had a grit to itnot just powder, but ash. Human? Too fine. The back of her neck prickled, that old static ache that used to precede thunderstorms before she stopped paying attention to weather reports. She flicked her gaze to the violin case slung by the victim’s hand. Inside, her flashlight revealed a brass compass nestled among crumpled train maps. *The Veil Compass*, the ledger photo in her mind supplied. Shade craftsmanship—if the rumors were true, this model had sold for three times the price of a flat in Islington. “Where’d you find this?” She angled the case toward Elliot. “Tucked in their coat. Thought it was a gimmick.” He frowned at the compass needle, which spun lazily. “Though I’ll admit, the lack of northwest winds down here is *odd*. Maybe a lithium battery?” “Elliot.” Quinn’s voice was steel sheathed in sandpaper. She popped the case open wider, let the flashlight slice across the protective sigils etched into the face. The patina was fresh. The compass hadn’t been used recently—*that* would’ve worn the verdigris smooth at the points of contact. Yet the glass was smudged with something darker than chalk. A flicker of movement in her periphery. Quinn’s head swiveled as a shadow slithered between the pillarstoo fluid for a person, too precise for a trick of light. Her military posture stiffened, but she kept her hand steady as she gestured to the smear on the glass. “Those printslook at the shape. Not finger tips. A *palm*. Recent. And someone’s been dusting the edges to cover ’em.” Elliot stepped closer, squinting. “You think this was a robbery gone south?” “No.” Quinn stood, the spring in her tactical boots flattening with the weight of a dozen bad memories. “This was a theft. The knife used is gone. The *real* prize was taken.” Her flashlight dipped toward the compass. “And it wasn’t this.” She circled the body, her salt-and-pepper hair slicing the beam into sharp angles as she scanned the station. The Veil Market’s merchandisetalisms, tinctures, contrabandwasn’t carried here willy-nilly. Staged exits, transmutation circles, magical traffic followed ley lines like commuters on the Circle Line. But this place*—*the iron tang in the air, the oppressive silence that had swallowed their radiosfelt wrong. A shift in the stillness made her thumb ghost the lugs of her watch. Three missed ticks confirmed it: the pocket watch in her jacket matched the rhythm of the compass needle’s spin. “Elliot. Check the platform.” She marched toward the third rail, ignoring the colder slide of sweat under her flannel. Something in the way the chalk had bled from the victim’s handsmore than gravity could explain. More than this idiot’s ‘northwest winds’ could explain. At the edge of the tracks, she found it: a scrape in the concrete, a corner of something supple wedged in the seam. Her fingers closed around a leather satchel strap. Not the kind a violinist carried, but the worn, book-encrusted specimen that clung to the hip of one Miss Kowalski. *Eva.* Quinn’s grip tightened. If the redhead had tripped in her usual oblivious stampede through ancient history into the present, it would be a hell of a coincidence. Still, the case made sense. Kowalski knew the Market moved with the moons, that the compasses sold here were frauds. Or worsegenuine pointers to things that shouldn’t have been followed. Back at the crime scene, Elliot swore. “There’s a tunnel here we didn’t see on the scans.” “Of course there is.” Quinn caught the flicker of motion again, real this timea ripple in the access door at the station’s far end. She closed the distance in three strides, her badge catching the cobalt glint of a *bone token* clamped between rusted bolts. “This is a first-night-of-the-month market.” She yanked the token free, the artifact’s jagged edge scraping her palm. “Someone brought the wrong shop to town.” The compass needle suddenly snapped north, right past Elliot’s bulk and toward the tunnel. Quinn didn’t follow. Let the DS play hero. She’d had enough of chasing shadows into wrongfully prosecuted occultists. Tonight, the real hunt started with a satchel, a compass, and the memory of Morris’s last breaththe sulfur taste he’d tried to hide. The Market would move on Friday. Quinn would find her in *one* piece.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount842
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount842
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"traced"
2"flicked"
3"etched"
4"flicker"
5"weight"
6"scanned"
7"oppressive"
8"silence"
9"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords14
totalWords831
ratio0.017
matches
0"real"
1"look"
2"The Veil Compass"
3"odd"
4"that"
5"palm"
6"real"
7"—"
8"Eva."
9"bone token"
10"one"
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Back at the crime scene, Elliot swore."
85.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount695
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Elliot5
Quinn9
Veil2
Islington1
Market3
Circle1
Line1
Miss1
Kowalski2
Morris1
Friday1
persons
0"Elliot"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Miss"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
places
0"Islington"
globalScore0.853
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.407
wordCount831
matches
0"not just powder, but ash"
1"Not the kind a violinist carried, but the worn, book-encrusted specimen"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean43.74
std27.07
cv0.619
sampleLengths
073
136
2103
310
434
556
667
712
842
992
1043
1151
121
1357
1417
1545
1624
1755
1813
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences57
matches
0"been used"
1"was smudged"
2"been followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs105
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences63
ratio0.159
matches
0"The pigment had a grit to it—not just powder, but ash."
1"Shade craftsmanship—if the rumors were true, this model had sold for three times the price of a flat in Islington."
2"The compass hadn’t been used recently—*that* would’ve worn the verdigris smooth at the points of contact."
3"Quinn’s head swiveled as a shadow slithered between the pillars—too fluid for a person, too precise for a trick of light."
4"The Veil Market’s merchandise—talisms, tinctures, contraband—wasn’t carried here willy-nilly."
5"But this place*—*the iron tang in the air, the oppressive silence that had swallowed their radios—felt wrong."
6"Something in the way the chalk had bled from the victim’s hands—more than gravity could explain."
7"Or worse—genuine pointers to things that shouldn’t have been followed."
8"“Of course there is.” Quinn caught the flicker of motion again, real this time—a ripple in the access door at the station’s far end."
9"Tonight, the real hunt started with a satchel, a compass, and the memory of Morris’s last breath—the sulfur taste he’d tried to hide."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount492
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.018292682926829267
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008130081300813009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean13.19
std7.36
cv0.558
sampleLengths
020
117
227
39
436
54
67
711
81
92
1023
1113
1212
1310
1420
1510
1618
1716
188
1918
204
2116
2210
237
2421
2519
2620
274
288
2918
3020
314
3218
339
3415
3517
3614
3719
3819
3916
408
4123
428
4320
441
453
4624
475
4815
4910
98.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6190476190476191
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners39
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"More than this idiot’s"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences54
matches
0"he kicked a half-carved glyph"
1"Her gloved fingers traced the"
2"She flicked her gaze to"
3"She angled the case toward"
4"He frowned at the compass"
5"She popped the case open"
6"Her military posture stiffened, but"
7"Her flashlight dipped toward the"
8"She circled the body, her"
9"She marched toward the third"
10"Her fingers closed around a"
11"She closed the distance in"
12"She yanked the token free,"
13"She’d had enough of chasing"
ratio0.259
80.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences54
matches
0"The metal reek of blood"
1"Quinn’s flashlight beam carved a"
2"The victim lay sprawled at"
3"DS Elliot’s voice buzzed from"
4"he kicked a half-carved glyph"
5"Quinn didn’t look up."
6"Her gloved fingers traced the"
7"The pigment had a grit"
8"The back of her neck"
9"She flicked her gaze to"
10"*The Veil Compass*, the ledger"
11"Shade craftsmanship—if the rumors were"
12"She angled the case toward"
13"He frowned at the compass"
14"Quinn’s voice was steel sheathed"
15"She popped the case open"
16"The patina was fresh."
17"The compass hadn’t been used"
18"A flicker of movement in"
19"Quinn’s head swiveled as a"
ratio0.759
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"If the redhead had tripped"
ratio0.019
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The back of her neck prickled, that old static ache that used to precede thunderstorms before she stopped paying attention to weather reports."
1"But this place*—*the iron tang in the air, the oppressive silence that had swallowed their radios—felt wrong."
2"Not the kind a violinist carried, but the worn, book-encrusted specimen that clung to the hip of one Miss Kowalski."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0129%