| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 842 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 842 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "glint" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 831 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "real" | | 1 | "look" | | 2 | "The Veil Compass" | | 3 | "odd" | | 4 | "that" | | 5 | "palm" | | 6 | "real" | | 7 | "—" | | 8 | "Eva." | | 9 | "bone token" | | 10 | "one" |
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| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Back at the crime scene, Elliot swore." |
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| 85.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 695 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Elliot | 5 | | Quinn | 9 | | Veil | 2 | | Islington | 1 | | Market | 3 | | Circle | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Miss | 1 | | Kowalski | 2 | | Morris | 1 | | Friday | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Elliot" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Miss" | | 4 | "Kowalski" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.853 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.407 | | wordCount | 831 | | matches | | 0 | "not just powder, but ash" | | 1 | "Not the kind a violinist carried, but the worn, book-encrusted specimen" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 43.74 | | std | 27.07 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 103 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 92 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 13 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "been used" | | 1 | "was smudged" | | 2 | "been followed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "The pigment had a grit to it—not just powder, but ash." | | 1 | "Shade craftsmanship—if the rumors were true, this model had sold for three times the price of a flat in Islington." | | 2 | "The compass hadn’t been used recently—*that* would’ve worn the verdigris smooth at the points of contact." | | 3 | "Quinn’s head swiveled as a shadow slithered between the pillars—too fluid for a person, too precise for a trick of light." | | 4 | "The Veil Market’s merchandise—talisms, tinctures, contraband—wasn’t carried here willy-nilly." | | 5 | "But this place*—*the iron tang in the air, the oppressive silence that had swallowed their radios—felt wrong." | | 6 | "Something in the way the chalk had bled from the victim’s hands—more than gravity could explain." | | 7 | "Or worse—genuine pointers to things that shouldn’t have been followed." | | 8 | "“Of course there is.” Quinn caught the flicker of motion again, real this time—a ripple in the access door at the station’s far end." | | 9 | "Tonight, the real hunt started with a satchel, a compass, and the memory of Morris’s last breath—the sulfur taste he’d tried to hide." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 492 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.018292682926829267 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008130081300813009 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 13.19 | | std | 7.36 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 98.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.6190476190476191 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 61.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "More than this idiot’s" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "he kicked a half-carved glyph" | | 1 | "Her gloved fingers traced the" | | 2 | "She flicked her gaze to" | | 3 | "She angled the case toward" | | 4 | "He frowned at the compass" | | 5 | "She popped the case open" | | 6 | "Her military posture stiffened, but" | | 7 | "Her flashlight dipped toward the" | | 8 | "She circled the body, her" | | 9 | "She marched toward the third" | | 10 | "Her fingers closed around a" | | 11 | "She closed the distance in" | | 12 | "She yanked the token free," | | 13 | "She’d had enough of chasing" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 80.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The metal reek of blood" | | 1 | "Quinn’s flashlight beam carved a" | | 2 | "The victim lay sprawled at" | | 3 | "DS Elliot’s voice buzzed from" | | 4 | "he kicked a half-carved glyph" | | 5 | "Quinn didn’t look up." | | 6 | "Her gloved fingers traced the" | | 7 | "The pigment had a grit" | | 8 | "The back of her neck" | | 9 | "She flicked her gaze to" | | 10 | "*The Veil Compass*, the ledger" | | 11 | "Shade craftsmanship—if the rumors were" | | 12 | "She angled the case toward" | | 13 | "He frowned at the compass" | | 14 | "Quinn’s voice was steel sheathed" | | 15 | "She popped the case open" | | 16 | "The patina was fresh." | | 17 | "The compass hadn’t been used" | | 18 | "A flicker of movement in" | | 19 | "Quinn’s head swiveled as a" |
| | ratio | 0.759 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "If the redhead had tripped" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The back of her neck prickled, that old static ache that used to precede thunderstorms before she stopped paying attention to weather reports." | | 1 | "But this place*—*the iron tang in the air, the oppressive silence that had swallowed their radios—felt wrong." | | 2 | "Not the kind a violinist carried, but the worn, book-encrusted specimen that clung to the hip of one Miss Kowalski." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |