Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ84Y2FNRFQKCGWZV0J6P5M

Run Details

Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.001068
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain rattled like a warning. Rory didn’t answer right away. She stood barefoot on the warped floorboard just behind the door, the chill from the hallway seeping into her ankles. Three deadbolts. She’d installed the third herself, late one night with trembling hands and a screwdriver. Ptolemy sat three feet away, tail twitching, green eyes fixed on the peephole. A shadow darkened the fisheye. She undid the chain. The door opened to Lucien Moreau. He hadn’t changed. Not really. Still the same razor-sharp jawline, the way his charcoal suit hugged his frame like a second skin, the platinum hair slicked back as if he’d just stepped from a Parisian courtroom. But something in his stance—tighter, guarded—made her pause. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, locked onto hers. Not cold. Not warm. Assessing. “You cut your hair,” he said. Rory’s fingers instinctively brushed the ends of her black hair. Shorter than the last time he’d seen her—shoulder-length now, not past her collar. “Three years ago,” she said. A beat passed. The hum of the curry house kitchen rose through the floorboards beneath them. Ptolemy crept forward, sniffing the cuff of Lucien’s trousers. “You going to let me in?” She didn’t move. “You shouldn’t be here.” “I wouldn’t be if it wasn’t urgent.” “Urgent.” She let the word linger. “You disappear for twenty-six months—no calls, no messages, not even a ghost in the Black Circuit—and now it’s *urgent*?” Lucien exhaled through his nose. “I sent word through Silas.” “Silas said you’d left. Said you’d gone back to Marseille. Permanently.” “I did. Then I came back.” He shifted his weight. The ivory handle of his cane caught the dim hallway light. “May I come in, Aurora? Or are we doing this in the stairwell?” She stepped aside. He entered with the grace of someone who’d never needed permission, folding his cane and leaning it against the wall. The flat smelled of old paper, turmeric, and the faint metallic tang of enchanted ink. Books sprawled across the coffee table—*Ley Lines of the British Isles*, *Ceremonial Sigils of the Avarosian Court*—stacked beside empty takeout containers. Her laptop glowed faintly, paused on a decryption algorithm. Lucien didn’t sit. “Still researching the Avaros breach,” he observed. “You’ve been watching me.” “No. I paid Silas for your address. And your habits. He mentioned you’ve been working late nights, chasing old threads.” His voice dropped. “You shouldn’t be digging into that.” “That’s what you came back to say?” Her voice cracked slightly. “You vanished after Blackwater Docks. Left me to handle the fallout with the Watchers. I was *arrested*, Lucien. For *your* operation.” His jaw tightened. “I know.” “And you didn’t come.” “I couldn’t.” “Convenient.” “I was protecting you.” He turned to face her fully. The amber eye caught the light—warm, almost human. The other remained shadowed. “After what happened on the docks—after *we* happened—you were a liability. To me. To my father’s network. The Court wanted you silenced. I made them believe you were no longer useful. That we were done.” Rory’s mouth went dry. “You let them think that?” “I *told* them that.” His fingers flexed at his sides. “I told them you meant nothing to me.” Silence. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, tail swishing. “That’s rich,” she said, forcing a laugh that didn’t reach her eyes. “Because you kissed me behind the warehouse an hour before you boarded that train to Calais. Told me you’d send for me. That we’d work something out.” “I lied.” His voice was flat. “You were good at it.” “I still am.” He took a step forward. “But I’m not lying now. You’re in danger.” She crossed her arms. “From who?” “The Court sent an enforcer. Two nights ago, a tracker was spotted near Silas’ bar. Then at the Golden Empress. Watching. Not for me. For *you*. They’ve been monitoring your research. They know you’re close to locating the breach.” Rory stiffened. The scar on her left wrist—crescent-shaped, pale—tingled in the cold air. She remembered the docks. The way Lucien’s hand had felt against the small of her back, pulling her into the dark. The way his breath had warmed her neck when he whispered, *Wait for me.* She hadn’t. “I don’t need your protection.” “No,” he agreed. “You never did. But you need the truth. And I’m the only one who can give it to you.” “Why now?” “Because the enforcer’s name is Valrik. He served with my father. If he finds you, he won’t just kill you—he’ll make sure I know it was my doing.” His voice cracked on the last word. Rory saw it then—the shadow behind the mask. The tightness around his eyes not from calculation, but from something raw. Guilt, maybe. Fear. She stepped past him, toward the kitchenette. Filled the kettle. Her hands were steady. “You always were dramatic.” “Drama keeps you alive in my world.” “I’m not in your world.” “You’ve been in it since the night you followed me into the East Tunnel.” The kettle clicked. She didn’t pour. Without turning, she said, “I loved you.” Three words. Heavy as stone. Lucien didn’t move. “I know.” “You never said it back.” “I couldn’t. Not then. Not with what I was.” “And now?” Now. The word hung between them. He stepped closer. Close enough that she could smell the faint ozone beneath his cologne, the subtle otherness that clung to half-demons. His hand hovered near her elbow, didn’t touch. “Now,” he said, voice low, “I’m standing in your flat. I broke every rule to come back. I risked war with my father’s Court. And if Valrik corners you, I’ll burn every bridge I’ve ever built to keep you breathing.” He turned her gently by the shoulders. His eyes—mismatched, foreign, familiar—held hers. “I’m here, Rory. That should tell you something.” She searched his face—the sharp angles, the controlled tension in his mouth, the faint scar above his left eyebrow she’d stitched with trembling fingers after a fight in Covent Garden. “I don’t trust you,” she said. “I don’t expect you to.” “You hurt me.” “I know.” “And you’re still standing here.” “Try and make me leave.” She didn’t. The kettle cooled. The flat filled with silence, thick and charged. Outside, rain began to fall on Brick Lane. Ptolemy settled onto the couch, curling into a patch of moonlight. Rory exhaled. “Start from the beginning,” she said. “And don’t leave anything out.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.034
86.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1085
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1085
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"tension"
5"eyebrow"
6"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords21
totalWords1068
ratio0.02
matches
0"urgent"
1"Ley Lines of the British Isles"
2"Ceremonial Sigils of the Avarosian Court"
3"arrested"
4"your"
5"we"
6"told"
7"you"
8"Wait for me."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount590
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien6
Moreau1
Parisian1
Rory6
Lines1
British1
Sigils1
Avarosian1
Silence1
Three2
Covent1
Garden1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Parisian"
1"Covent"
2"Garden"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.992
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.936
wordCount1068
matches
0"not from calculation, but from something raw"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean14.24
std15.49
cv1.088
sampleLengths
060
15
24
36
459
56
628
725
86
97
107
1125
1210
1311
1434
153
1665
173
187
194
2029
2132
225
234
242
251
2657
279
2818
291
307
3139
326
335
3416
356
3639
3748
382
395
4022
412
4228
437
4423
4518
467
475
4814
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences129
ratio0.062
matches
0"But something in his stance—tighter, guarded—made her pause."
1"Shorter than the last time he’d seen her—shoulder-length now, not past her collar."
2"Books sprawled across the coffee table—*Ley Lines of the British Isles*, *Ceremonial Sigils of the Avarosian Court*—stacked beside empty takeout containers."
3"The amber eye caught the light—warm, almost human."
4"The scar on her left wrist—crescent-shaped, pale—tingled in the cold air."
5"Rory saw it then—the shadow behind the mask."
6"His eyes—mismatched, foreign, familiar—held hers."
7"She searched his face—the sharp angles, the controlled tension in his mouth, the faint scar above his left eyebrow she’d stitched with trembling fingers after a fight in Covent Garden."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount604
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same razor-sharp jawline,"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.029801324503311258
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009933774834437087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean8.28
std7.73
cv0.934
sampleLengths
06
15
220
32
414
513
65
74
86
93
102
1131
128
1310
142
152
161
176
1810
1913
205
213
2213
239
246
253
264
277
286
2919
305
315
3211
3310
3411
3513
363
3720
3815
3921
409
413
427
434
4423
456
4611
4721
483
492
48.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3178294573643411
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences68
matches
0"She stood barefoot on the"
1"She’d installed the third herself,"
2"She undid the chain."
3"He hadn’t changed."
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
5"She didn’t move."
6"She let the word linger"
7"He shifted his weight"
8"She stepped aside."
9"He entered with the grace"
10"Her laptop glowed faintly, paused"
11"His voice dropped"
12"Her voice cracked slightly"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"He turned to face her"
15"His fingers flexed at his"
16"she said, forcing a laugh"
17"His voice was flat"
18"He took a step forward"
19"She crossed her arms."
ratio0.456
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences68
matches
0"The chain rattled like a"
1"Rory didn’t answer right away."
2"She stood barefoot on the"
3"She’d installed the third herself,"
4"Ptolemy sat three feet away,"
5"A shadow darkened the fisheye."
6"She undid the chain."
7"The door opened to Lucien"
8"He hadn’t changed."
9"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
10"Rory’s fingers instinctively brushed the"
11"A beat passed."
12"The hum of the curry"
13"Ptolemy crept forward, sniffing the"
14"She didn’t move."
15"She let the word linger"
16"Lucien exhaled through his nose."
17"He shifted his weight"
18"The ivory handle of his"
19"She stepped aside."
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Still the same razor-sharp jawline, the way his charcoal suit hugged his frame like a second skin, the platinum hair slicked back as if he’d just stepped from a…"
1"He entered with the grace of someone who’d never needed permission, folding his cane and leaning it against the wall."
2"Close enough that she could smell the faint ozone beneath his cologne, the subtle otherness that clung to half-demons."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.155
leniency0.31
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.069
79.2239%