| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1003 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1003 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "quivered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "synthetic" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 991 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "love philters." | | 1 | "under the skin." | | 2 | "with a blade made of smoke." | | 3 | "binding glyph." | | 4 | "unmade." | | 5 | "through" | | 6 | "hungry." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 693 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Hale | 11 | | Tube | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Compass | 8 | | Grice | 1 | | Eva | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Market" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Hale" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Compass" | | 6 | "Grice" | | 7 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.418 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like mildew and something sharper—" | | 1 | "as if chasing something invisible just out of reach" |
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| 99.09% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.009 | | wordCount | 991 | | matches | | 0 | "not at the body, but at Eva’s satchel" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 29.15 | | std | 19.33 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t pointing" | | 1 | "was pointing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted like mildew and something sharper—burnt herbs, maybe, or charred bone." | | 1 | "Underneath the synthetic material, the concrete was smooth—unnatural smooth." | | 2 | "Quinn noted the book clutched in her left hand—spine cracked, pages warped from moisture." | | 3 | "She opened it again—needled steadied, pointing not at the body, but at Eva’s satchel." | | 4 | "The Compass wavered in her hand, the needle twitching in a direction it hadn’t pointed before—toward the stairwell, where the broken railing bent at odd angles." | | 5 | "The sigils framing it were familiar—identical to the ones on the Compass’s face." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 700 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.024285714285714285 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 10.54 | | std | 6.65 | | cv | 0.63 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 50.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.32978723404255317 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots thudded against rubble." | | 1 | "He stood under a flickering" | | 2 | "His throat had been slit" | | 3 | "Her leather watch gleamed under" | | 4 | "His gloved finger jabbed at" | | 5 | "Her eyes tracked the edges:" | | 6 | "She pulled the Veil Compass" | | 7 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 8 | "She crouched lower, ignoring Hale’s" | | 9 | "She snatched a glove off" | | 10 | "She tilted the corpse’s hand," | | 11 | "Her eyes narrowed at the" | | 12 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 13 | "She sliced open the tarp" | | 14 | "She wore no gloves, her" | | 15 | "She opened it again—needled steadied," | | 16 | "She followed the vibration, her" | | 17 | "She didn’t move." | | 18 | "It was pointing *through* them," |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil Market stank of" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s flashlight carved" | | 2 | "Her boots thudded against rubble." | | 3 | "The air tasted like mildew" | | 4 | "He stood under a flickering" | | 5 | "The corpse lay on a" | | 6 | "His throat had been slit" | | 7 | "Quinn said, crouching near the" | | 8 | "Her leather watch gleamed under" | | 9 | "Hale didn’t respond." | | 10 | "His gloved finger jabbed at" | | 11 | "Quinn didn’t look." | | 12 | "Her eyes tracked the edges:" | | 13 | "The Market shifted monthly, but" | | 14 | "She pulled the Veil Compass" | | 15 | "The needle quivered, then spun" | | 16 | "Hale’s laugh held no warmth." | | 17 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 18 | "The Compass hadn’t pointed at" | | 19 | "She crouched lower, ignoring Hale’s" |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "As if someone had polished" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Compass needle spun faster now, as if chasing something invisible just out of reach." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.25% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Hale muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Eva continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.281 | | leniency | 0.563 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |