| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.118 | | leniency | 0.237 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.026 | |
| 83.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "eyebrow" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 181 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1222 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Recipient: Laila Malphora" | | 1 | "Contents: One antique clock movement, 19th century" | | 2 | "Note: *For the hands that stopped time." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 825 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Friday | 1 | | Lagavulin | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Wardour | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | One | 1 | | Silas | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Lagavulin" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Laila" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like they belonged to people who n" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.818 | | wordCount | 1222 | | matches | | 0 | "not in submission, but in thought" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 102 | | mean | 11.98 | | std | 14.21 | | cv | 1.186 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 99.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "were lined" | | 1 | "was smudged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.79% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 181 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual Friday crowd hadn't yet arrived—just a couple hunched over pints near the back, and the bartender, a wiry man with a limp and a ring that caught the lamplight every time he reached for a glass." | | 1 | "Her hair clung to her neck in wet strands, but her posture was straight, practiced—like someone used to scanning rooms before settling." | | 2 | "She hung her jacket on one of the empty hooks by the door—hooks that always felt like they belonged to people who no longer came around." | | 3 | "The crescent scar caught the light—pale, thin, something only a careful observer would notice." | | 4 | "The walls were lined with them—yellowed, pinned at the corners, stained with decades of cigarette smoke and spilled liquor." | | 5 | "The old Rory—the one who used to stammer through apologies, who’d curl her wrist under her opposite hand when nervous—would have looked away." | | 6 | "Her breath caught—just once." | | 7 | "Her eyes dropped—not in submission, but in thought." | | 8 | "She looked at him—really looked—and for the first time in years, the mask slipped." |
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| 98.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 836 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.041866028708133975 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007177033492822967 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 181 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 181 | | mean | 6.75 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.891 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 54.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36464088397790057 | | totalSentences | 181 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she walked to the" | | 1 | "Just stood, left her glass" | | 2 | "Just a locked cabinet, a" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 60.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "It opened with a gust" | | 1 | "Her hair clung to her" | | 2 | "She unzipped her jacket just" | | 3 | "She hung her jacket on" | | 4 | "She almost smiled." | | 5 | "Her left wrist brushed the" | | 6 | "He arched an eyebrow." | | 7 | "His fingers twitched near the" | | 8 | "She looked at him then," | | 9 | "Her blue eyes sharp, assessing." | | 10 | "He exhaled through his nose." | | 11 | "She nodded, slow." | | 12 | "He didn’t get up to" | | 13 | "he said finally" | | 14 | "Her fingers stilled." | | 15 | "She didn’t flinch." | | 16 | "He studied her." | | 17 | "She tilted her head slightly." | | 18 | "He reached under the bar," | | 19 | "She didn’t ask why." |
| | ratio | 0.398 | |
| 62.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain tapped steadily against the" | | 1 | "The usual Friday crowd hadn't" | | 2 | "Silas poured himself a finger" | | 3 | "It opened with a gust" | | 4 | "Her hair clung to her" | | 5 | "She unzipped her jacket just" | | 6 | "Silas said without turning" | | 7 | "Rory didn’t answer right away." | | 8 | "She hung her jacket on" | | 9 | "She almost smiled." | | 10 | "The kind of expression that" | | 11 | "Her left wrist brushed the" | | 12 | "The crescent scar caught the" | | 13 | "Silas slid a glass toward" | | 14 | "He arched an eyebrow." | | 15 | "The silence sat between them" | | 16 | "The couple in the back" | | 17 | "Rory traced the rim of" | | 18 | "Silas followed her gaze." | | 19 | "The walls were lined with" |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual Friday crowd hadn't yet arrived—just a couple hunched over pints near the back, and the bartender, a wiry man with a limp and a ring that caught the l…" | | 1 | "The old Rory—the one who used to stammer through apologies, who’d curl her wrist under her opposite hand when nervous—would have looked away." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.105 | | leniency | 0.211 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.026 | |