Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ86CSXQPY1Q5AKHAWR1SC0

Run Details

Duration:
30.9s
Cost:
$0.001167
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain tapped steadily against the grimy windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the green neon glow of the sign into smears of emerald across the wet pavement. Inside, the air was thick with the warmth of old wood, damp coats, and the low hum of a jazz record cycling through its worn grooves. The usual Friday crowd hadn't yet arrived—just a couple hunched over pints near the back, and the bartender, a wiry man with a limp and a ring that caught the lamplight every time he reached for a glass. Silas poured himself a finger of Lagavulin, watching the door. It opened with a gust of wind and a woman stepped in, shaking water from her black leather jacket. Her hair clung to her neck in wet strands, but her posture was straight, practiced—like someone used to scanning rooms before settling. She unzipped her jacket just enough to reveal the faded logo of a delivery service across her chest. “Yu-Fei’s again?” Silas said without turning. Rory didn’t answer right away. She hung her jacket on one of the empty hooks by the door—hooks that always felt like they belonged to people who no longer came around. “You remember?” “Hard not to. You show up soaked twice a week with dumplings and secrets wrapped in greaseproof paper.” She almost smiled. Almost. The kind of expression that started in the eyes but got lost halfway. Then she walked to the bar, pulling herself onto a stool with the quiet ease of someone who’d done it a thousand times before. Her left wrist brushed the edge of the counter. The crescent scar caught the light—pale, thin, something only a careful observer would notice. Silas slid a glass toward her. “Same as always?” “Whiskey. Neat.” He arched an eyebrow. “Used to beg me for ginger ale with a cherry when you were hungover.” “That was years ago.” He poured. She drank. The silence sat between them like an old argument neither wanted to reopen. Outside, a siren wailed down Wardour Street. The couple in the back booth laughed at something too quiet to hear. Rory traced the rim of her glass. “Still got the maps?” Silas followed her gaze. The walls were lined with them—yellowed, pinned at the corners, stained with decades of cigarette smoke and spilled liquor. Berlin, 1961. Tehran, 1979. Prague, 1985. His fingers twitched near the signet ring on his right hand. “Some things don’t age. Others do.” She looked at him then, really looked. Her blue eyes sharp, assessing. “You walk better.” “Still walk.” “That’s not what I asked.” He exhaled through his nose. “The knee gives in rain. Always will.” She nodded, slow. Like she’d expected that answer. Like she’d been bracing for it. “Eva said you were living above the bar now.” “Saves rent. And stairs.” “You never liked stairs.” “No. I didn’t.” Another silence. Longer this time. The record ended with a soft click. He didn’t get up to change it. “You look different,” he said finally. “So do you.” “That’s not what I meant.” Her fingers stilled. “People change, Silas.” “You vanished.” “I left.” “Same difference, when it’s done without a word.” She didn’t flinch. That was new. The old Rory—the one who used to stammer through apologies, who’d curl her wrist under her opposite hand when nervous—would have looked away. Would have twisted the fabric of her sleeves between her fingers. Now she held his gaze like a dare. “I had to.” “And now?” “Now I deliver dumplings.” He studied her. The straight black hair. The lean arms. The way her shoulders sat higher than they used to, like they carried weight. The scar on her wrist. The way her eyes didn’t waver. “You weren’t followed.” “No.” “You sure?” She tilted her head slightly. “If I wasn’t, you’d already know.” A flicker in his expression. Approval. Maybe pride. He reached under the bar, pressed a hidden latch. A section of the bookshelf behind him slid open with a quiet grind of gears, revealing a dim corridor beyond. “Come on.” She didn’t ask why. Didn’t hesitate. Just stood, left her glass half-full, and followed. The hidden room was small, windowless. Fitted with a steel table bolted to the floor and a single overhead bulb that buzzed. No maps here. No jazz. Just a locked cabinet, a burner phone, and a shelf of files stamped with red ink. Rory stood just inside the doorway. “Still playing spymaster.” “Still got people who need hiding.” She turned to him. “Why show me this?” “Because you’re not here for a drink.” Her breath caught—just once. Then smoothed. “No,” she said. “I’m not.” He leaned against the table, arms crossed. “You changed your name.” “Only the one I use.” “Rory. Aurora. Laila. Malphora. How many others?” She didn’t answer. “You think hiding in plain sight works,” he said. “On a delivery bike. Above a bar. Under my roof.” “I’m not hiding.” “No?” He took a step closer. “Then why come back?” Her eyes dropped—not in submission, but in thought. “I got a package today. Address was a shell company. No return. Just a name on the invoice.” “And?” “It was mine. The one before Rory.” Silas went very still. “What did it say?” She pulled a crumpled receipt from her back pocket. Handed it to him. The ink was smudged, but clear enough. **Recipient: Laila Malphora** **Contents: One antique clock movement, 19th century** **Note: *For the hands that stopped time.*** He handed it back. Said nothing. “I didn’t open it,” she said. “Left it with Yu-Fei. But I know who it’s from.” “You don’t know anything.” “I know he’s looking.” Silas turned away. Ran a hand over his face, the stubble catching under his fingers. “You should’ve come to me sooner.” “I didn’t know if you’d help.” “I took you in once. Gave you a name. A flat. Food. You slept for two days straight the first week. Do you remember that?” She did. The muffled voices. The way the ceiling cracked in the shape of a river delta. How she’d woken gasping, thinking the rain on the roof was him at the door. “I was broken then.” “You’re harder now.” She looked down at her hands. “Had to be.” He faced her. “You think you’re protecting others by staying away.” “I am.” “No. You’re protecting yourself.” She flinched. The word hung there, sharp as a blade. “You were never weak,” he said, quieter now. “But you ran like you were. Like disappearing made you safe. Like silence was armor.” “I kept quiet.” “To who? Me? Eva? The world? Or yourself?” She turned her head. Stared at the locked cabinet. “Evan’s dead.” Silas didn’t react. “Is he?” “Report said suicide. Two years ago. Gun in a Brighton hotel room.” “And you believe it?” She hesitated. “No,” she whispered. The word was so small, it almost vanished in the hum of the light. Silas closed the distance between them. Not threatening. Not comforting. Just present. “You don’t get to outrun ghosts by changing your name ten times,” he said. “You face them. Or they wear your face instead.” She looked at him—really looked—and for the first time in years, the mask slipped. Her breath trembled. “I didn’t know how.” He placed a hand on her shoulder. Not heavy. Just there. “You do now.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.237
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.026
83.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"scanning"
2"eyebrow"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"comforting"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords17
totalWords1222
ratio0.014
matches
0"Recipient: Laila Malphora"
1"Contents: One antique clock movement, 19th century"
2"Note: *For the hands that stopped time."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount825
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Friday1
Lagavulin1
Rory4
Wardour1
Street1
Laila1
One1
Silas8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Lagavulin"
3"Rory"
4"Laila"
5"Silas"
places
0"Wardour"
1"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like they belonged to people who n"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.818
wordCount1222
matches
0"not in submission, but in thought"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences181
matches
0"expected that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean11.98
std14.21
cv1.186
sampleLengths
091
110
259
36
431
52
618
764
89
92
1018
114
1217
1320
1411
1540
166
1715
182
195
2012
2114
229
234
244
253
2619
276
283
295
306
312
322
338
3448
353
362
374
3835
393
401
412
4211
438
4429
452
4614
4743
489
496
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"were lined"
1"was smudged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.79% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences181
ratio0.05
matches
0"The usual Friday crowd hadn't yet arrived—just a couple hunched over pints near the back, and the bartender, a wiry man with a limp and a ring that caught the lamplight every time he reached for a glass."
1"Her hair clung to her neck in wet strands, but her posture was straight, practiced—like someone used to scanning rooms before settling."
2"She hung her jacket on one of the empty hooks by the door—hooks that always felt like they belonged to people who no longer came around."
3"The crescent scar caught the light—pale, thin, something only a careful observer would notice."
4"The walls were lined with them—yellowed, pinned at the corners, stained with decades of cigarette smoke and spilled liquor."
5"The old Rory—the one who used to stammer through apologies, who’d curl her wrist under her opposite hand when nervous—would have looked away."
6"Her breath caught—just once."
7"Her eyes dropped—not in submission, but in thought."
8"She looked at him—really looked—and for the first time in years, the mask slipped."
98.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.041866028708133975
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007177033492822967
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean6.75
std6.01
cv0.891
sampleLengths
027
126
238
310
419
522
618
76
85
926
102
1118
123
131
1413
1524
169
1714
186
193
202
214
2214
234
242
252
2613
277
2813
297
304
314
3219
332
342
352
3611
376
387
395
403
412
425
435
447
453
465
476
489
494
54.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.36464088397790057
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then she walked to the"
1"Just stood, left her glass"
2"Just a locked cabinet, a"
ratio0.034
60.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences88
matches
0"It opened with a gust"
1"Her hair clung to her"
2"She unzipped her jacket just"
3"She hung her jacket on"
4"She almost smiled."
5"Her left wrist brushed the"
6"He arched an eyebrow."
7"His fingers twitched near the"
8"She looked at him then,"
9"Her blue eyes sharp, assessing."
10"He exhaled through his nose."
11"She nodded, slow."
12"He didn’t get up to"
13"he said finally"
14"Her fingers stilled."
15"She didn’t flinch."
16"He studied her."
17"She tilted her head slightly."
18"He reached under the bar,"
19"She didn’t ask why."
ratio0.398
62.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rain tapped steadily against the"
1"The usual Friday crowd hadn't"
2"Silas poured himself a finger"
3"It opened with a gust"
4"Her hair clung to her"
5"She unzipped her jacket just"
6"Silas said without turning"
7"Rory didn’t answer right away."
8"She hung her jacket on"
9"She almost smiled."
10"The kind of expression that"
11"Her left wrist brushed the"
12"The crescent scar caught the"
13"Silas slid a glass toward"
14"He arched an eyebrow."
15"The silence sat between them"
16"The couple in the back"
17"Rory traced the rim of"
18"Silas followed her gaze."
19"The walls were lined with"
ratio0.795
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now she held his gaze"
ratio0.011
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The usual Friday crowd hadn't yet arrived—just a couple hunched over pints near the back, and the bartender, a wiry man with a limp and a ring that caught the l…"
1"The old Rory—the one who used to stammer through apologies, who’d curl her wrist under her opposite hand when nervous—would have looked away."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.026
88.6665%