| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 81.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1317 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "racing" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "mosaic" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "glint" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "throb" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "footsteps" | | 15 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1310 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "moment" | | 1 | "might" | | 2 | "looking" | | 3 | "another" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Eva gasped." |
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| 79.11% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1058 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Silas | 6 | | Eva | 7 | | Aurora | 15 | | Isolde | 10 | | Nyx | 8 | | Timex | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Ava | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Ava" | | 7 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.791 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she blinked" | | 1 | "as though steadying a racing heart" | | 2 | "as if answering an unspoken thought" | | 3 | "felt like minutes but might have been h" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.29 | | wordCount | 1310 | | matches | | 0 | "not unpleasant, but bracing, as if the current were measuring her" | | 1 | "not the cavern but a sky of shifting constellations" | | 2 | "not her face, but a shifting image: a vine-choked door, a shadowed figure with" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 29.11 | | std | 21.22 | | cv | 0.729 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 66 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 51 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 14 |
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| 97.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "been woven" |
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| 86.36% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "were leaching" | | 1 | "were measuring" | | 2 | "were vibrating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde had said to follow the path where the wildflowers glowed faintly—a spectacle that should have felt impossible, yet here it was: a carpet of bluebells and starflowers pulsing like bioluminescent veins through the undergrowth." | | 1 | "It was not so much a place as a *moment*—a sliver of reality where the air shimmered with suspended motes of light, like dust particles caught in a beam of moonlight." | | 2 | "The surface rippled with a pattern—a spiraling sigil—that vanished as quickly as it formed." | | 3 | "Aurora checked her own watch—a battered Timex from Cardiff, still ticking in a steady rhythm." | | 4 | "Silas’s jaw was set; he’d agreed to this journey for Silas’s own reasons, ones he’d clammed up about after the bar." | | 5 | "Eva’s eyes held no fear—only curiosity." | | 6 | "Her reflection rippled—not her face, but a shifting image: a vine-choked door, a shadowed figure with violet eyes, a scream that never escaped a throat." | | 7 | "The silver pool rippled, and for a heartbeat, Aurora saw herself reflected there—no, *another* version of herself, standing alone in a space of pure white, holding a dagger toward a figure that dissolved into smoke." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1071 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.026143790849673203 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011204481792717087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 11.39 | | std | 7.85 | | cv | 0.689 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 47.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2782608695652174 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 39.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the archway, a" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at her companions:" | | 1 | "It was not so much" | | 2 | "She stepped forward without a" | | 3 | "she intoned, her voice layered," | | 4 | "She tugged it free, the" | | 5 | "She extended a hand, and" | | 6 | "They took a step back" | | 7 | "It burned now, insistent, as" | | 8 | "She looked to Silas and" | | 9 | "She approached the pool cautiously." | | 10 | "Her reflection rippled—not her face," | | 11 | "They’d reached the edge of" | | 12 | "She turned to Isolde." | | 13 | "She turned to the archway," |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the Heartstone" | | 1 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 2 | "Nyx glided beside her, their" | | 3 | "Isolde had said to follow" | | 4 | "Rory’s boots sank into the" | | 5 | "The rules of gravity here" | | 6 | "She glanced at her companions:" | | 7 | "Nyx, as usual, was unreadable," | | 8 | "The standing stones parted to" | | 9 | "It was not so much" | | 10 | "Trees arched overhead, their leaves" | | 11 | "A stream trickled through the" | | 12 | "Isolde emerged from the shadows," | | 13 | "She stepped forward without a" | | 14 | "she intoned, her voice layered," | | 15 | "Aurora’s pendant pulsed warm against" | | 16 | "She tugged it free, the" | | 17 | "Isolde tilted her head." | | 18 | "She extended a hand, and" | | 19 | "Nyx crouched beside the stream," |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it hummed faintly, the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx glided beside her, their shadowed form half-dissolved, as if the grove itself were leaching into them." | | 1 | "Isolde had said to follow the path where the wildflowers glowed faintly—a spectacle that should have felt impossible, yet here it was: a carpet of bluebells and…" | | 2 | "Trees arched overhead, their leaves a mosaic of colors that had no names: silver-edged greens, dusky purples, a faint glow of phosphorescent gold." | | 3 | "A jolt ran up her arm, not unpleasant, but bracing, as if the current were measuring her." | | 4 | "They took a step back into shadow, then reemerged a dozen feet away, standing in front of a crevice in the earth that hadn’t been there moments ago." | | 5 | "The walls were slick with moss that glistened like crushed emeralds, and the sound of their footsteps was swallowed by the quiet." | | 6 | "The mark on her wrist, small and crescent-shaped, felt as though it were vibrating in time with the Heartstone." | | 7 | "The silver pool rippled, and for a heartbeat, Aurora saw herself reflected there—no, *another* version of herself, standing alone in a space of pure white, hold…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced, the barkeep, muttered under his breath, muttering about" | | 1 | "Isolde said, as if answering an unspoken thought" | | 2 | "Nyx said suddenly, their voice sharp" |
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| 56.25% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva interrupted (interrupt)" | | 2 | "the Shade explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.219 | | leniency | 0.438 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |