| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1185 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1185 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "jaw clenched" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "porcelain" | | 14 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 176 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 1214 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "He’s in the grove." | | 1 | "grove" | | 2 | "sagged" | | 3 | "response" | | 4 | "You shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "He found you." | | 6 | "He always finds you." | | 7 | "rippled" | | 8 | "screamed" | | 9 | "Unfolding" | | 10 | "slid" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1195 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Followed | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | One | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Followed" |
| | globalScore | 0.998 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 44.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like breathing, then a click" | | 1 | "as if shielding from light" | | 2 | "as if waiting to receive" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.295 | | wordCount | 1214 | | matches | | 0 | "not like a place, but like a plea" | | 1 | "not a pulse, but a sustained warmth, almost hot" | | 2 | "not with blood, but with something slow" | | 3 | "not from her mouth, but from the space around her, as if the air itself spoke" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 17.85 | | std | 19.05 | | cv | 1.067 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 63 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 52 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 99.07% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "been padded" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | 0 | "was breathing" | | 1 | "were surrounding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 29 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 23 | | totalSentences | 176 | | ratio | 0.131 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the absence of sound — that would’ve been relief — but a thick, muffled hush, as if the air itself had been padded." | | 1 | "She’d only seen the grove twice before — once in a fever dream two nights after Eva vanished, once from a blurred photo on a burner phone left outside her flat." | | 2 | "The pendant around her neck pulsed once — a dull, inner heat, warm as a fingertip pressed to a pulse point." | | 3 | "Rory had memorized the way Eva had said *grove* — not like a place, but like a plea." | | 4 | "Her left wrist stung — the old scar, the crescent moon thin and pale against her skin, itched as though alive." | | 5 | "Wildflowers lined the path — snowdrops and foxgloves blooming side by side, their colours too bright, their scent cloying, like rotting fruit doused in perfume." | | 6 | "Then — a whisper of movement to her left." | | 7 | "But the flowers near the base of the nearest stone — a cluster of white violets — now faced away from her, their heads bowed as if shielding from light." | | 8 | "She unzipped her coat just enough to see the gemstone — crimson, deep as clotting blood." | | 9 | "A woman’s voice, low and tuneless, singing a lullaby Rory knew — one her mother used to sing during thunderstorms." | | 10 | "Then — a single, clear note, whistled from behind her." | | 11 | "The pendant flared — not a pulse, but a sustained warmth, almost hot." | | 12 | "Leading from the fallen stone — into the space between two others — and then vanishing, as though whoever left them had stepped off the world." | | 13 | "And there — in the centre — sat a stone bench." | | 14 | "Her eyes were open — wide — but unseeing, fixed on the sky." | | 15 | "Her lips didn’t move, but words came — not from her mouth, but from the space around her, as if the air itself spoke." | | 16 | "Then — a shift." | | 17 | "Not like water — like something beneath the bark was breathing." | | 18 | "And then — movement everywhere." | | 19 | "She felt it before she heard it — a low, wet click, deep in its neck." | | 20 | "Then — a single, perfect note from the far side of the ring." | | 21 | "Not a hand — fingers long and tapered, ending in points like needles." | | 22 | "The pendant flared once — blinding — then went dark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1170 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.035897435897435895 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005128205128205128 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 176 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 176 | | mean | 6.9 | | std | 6.38 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 47.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3352272727272727 | | totalSentences | 176 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a bruised purple vault," | | 1 | "Then — a whisper of" | | 2 | "Then — a single, clear" | | 3 | "Then — a shift." | | 4 | "Then — a single, perfect" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged, though it" | | 1 | "She’d only seen the grove" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 3 | "Her left wrist stung —" | | 4 | "She flexed her hand, ignoring" | | 5 | "She took another step." | | 6 | "She reached the ring’s centre." | | 7 | "Her lungs worked harder." | | 8 | "Her voice didn’t carry" | | 9 | "It died an inch from" | | 10 | "She turned slowly, hand drifting" | | 11 | "She hadn’t noticed them before." | | 12 | "She unzipped her coat just" | | 13 | "It glowed faintly from within," | | 14 | "It came from the west" | | 15 | "She didn’t remember stepping on" | | 16 | "Her shoulders brushed the black" | | 17 | "It looked carved from the" | | 18 | "It was Eva." | | 19 | "Her eyes were open —" |
| | ratio | 0.27 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain bit into her" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the moss-eaten" | | 2 | "The next, silence." | | 3 | "Her breath fogged, though it" | | 4 | "The standing stones stood in" | | 5 | "She’d only seen the grove" | | 6 | "Neither had prepared her for" | | 7 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 8 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 9 | "Rory had memorized the way" | | 10 | "A dry rustle came from" | | 11 | "Her left wrist stung —" | | 12 | "She flexed her hand, ignoring" | | 13 | "She took another step." | | 14 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 15 | "Each footfall swallowed sound, as" | | 16 | "Wildflowers lined the path —" | | 17 | "Another pulse from the pendant." | | 18 | "She reached the ring’s centre." | | 19 | "The air thickened." |
| | ratio | 0.635 | |
| 39.68% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they seemed to tremble." |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped over the moss-eaten root that curled like a sleeping serpent across the threshold." | | 1 | "Her left wrist stung — the old scar, the crescent moon thin and pale against her skin, itched as though alive." | | 2 | "Wildflowers lined the path — snowdrops and foxgloves blooming side by side, their colours too bright, their scent cloying, like rotting fruit doused in perfume." | | 3 | "But the flowers near the base of the nearest stone — a cluster of white violets — now faced away from her, their heads bowed as if shielding from light." | | 4 | "Leading from the fallen stone — into the space between two others — and then vanishing, as though whoever left them had stepped off the world." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |