Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ88RDRT6NWF0F1NAD5E0T8

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Duration:
34.5s
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$0.001494
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AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung in, not pushed. It caught the edge of a thick stack of notes and sent them fluttering to the floor like startled birds. Eva didn’t move. She stood in her doorway, arms folded across her chest, eyes narrowing as she took in the figure who had entered without waiting for an invitation. Lucien Moreau adjusted his cuff, the ivory grip of his cane gleaming faintly under the dim hallway light. His gaze flicked over the cluttered flat—books splayed open on every surface, maps tacked haphazardly to the walls, and that familiar scent of old paper and something slightly bitter lingering in the air. "It's been a while," he said coolly, stepping around the fallen papers as if they meant nothing. "You still researching things you can't hope to control?" Eva’s jaw tightened. “Get out.” His smirk widened. “And miss the chance to see what you're working on? After all this time?” He turned slowly, letting his eyes scan the room, his fingers trailing lightly along the spines of books stacked precariously on a side table. A cat meowed at his feet, then darted off with its tail high in the air. “Still think too highly of yourself,” Eva murmured, pushing past him to retrieve the scattered papers. Her voice was quiet but edged with steel. “Thought I’d moved on by now.” Lucien paused by the small sofa, lifting a scroll from the end table. “You haven’t changed much, Eva.” She looked up sharply. “Neither have you.” They studied each other for a long moment, the silence stretching between them more than words ever could. Then Lucien let the scroll fall with a soft *thud* and turned to face her fully. “What are you doing here, Luc?” she asked, folding her arms again. “This isn’t about information brokering or half-Demon errands. You're never this bold unless you want something specific—and it doesn’t involve me.” He tilted his head. “You know me too well.” “I know your history with me. And the last time we crossed paths, it ended with broken glass and worse.” She gestured vaguely to the window above the kitchen sink. “Literally.” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes flickered with something unreadable, a mix of regret and something else—something dangerously close to longing. “You left under your own terms this time,” he said. “Back then, there wasn’t time for explanations.” Eva’s shoulders tensed. “And now? What explanation do you bring now, years later, barging into my life unannounced?” “I have something for you,” he said simply, pulling a small velvet pouch from his coat pocket. “From the Black Bazaar. I tracked it down after—some recent events made me think again about that night. About us.” Eva hesitated only a heartbeat before glancing down at the pouch, her fingers brushing it. “What is it?” He let her take it, watching closely as she untied the delicate knot. Fine golden threads spilled into her palm, shimmering like liquid sunlight despite the drab London lighting. Her eyes went wide. “This shouldn’t exist.” Lucien nodded. “It should’ve been destroyed. But someone kept it. Someone important.” The weight of the moment pressed between them. The air thickened with implications neither spoke aloud. “You could’ve just sent it,” Eva said quietly, gripping the material like it might vanish. “And risk it arriving in the wrong hands? This isn’t just an object. It’s a key,” he replied. “To the truth about what happened that night.” Eva met his eyes, and for once, there was no deflection in his expression. Only honesty. “Why now?” “Because it's becoming clear the world isn’t ready for what you’re trying to uncover—not yet. But I am.” A beat of silence passed. Then another. “What do you mean by ‘the world’?” she challenged, though her voice wavered slightly. Lucien stepped closer, closing the space between them until she could barely smell anything but him—the musk of smoke and ink, the faint scent of something old and dangerous. “The same thing you do.” He paused, his hand hovering over hers. “Except I understand the cost of knowing the truth.” Eva swallowed hard. “And you think I don’t.” “I think you carry it every day,” he murmured. “Just like I did. Just like I still do.” The cat returned, curling softly near her feet. Incongruously gentle in the middle of a charged conversation. Eva looked up, catching the way his eyes searched hers—not for answers, but for trust. For something beyond transactional. For something real. “You should go, Lucien,” she said softly, her voice betraying none of the storm beneath it. For the first time, he looked uncertain. “Say it again. Tell me to go.” She opened her mouth—and closed it almost immediately. Lucien smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. Instead, he dipped his hand into his coat one last time and placed a fresh envelope on the table. “My contact has an address for you. One name. That’s all I could get.” Without another word, he turned toward the door. Eva waited until the sound of retreating steps faded. Until the key turned in the lock. Then she knelt beside the cat and ran her fingers through the golden threads once more, whispering a name only the shadows knew. But the silence, heavy now with absence, was all she heard in return.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he said coolly [coolly]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"he said simply [simply]"
3"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.286
54.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount888
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"coolly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"coolly"
2"slowly"
3"lightly"
4"sharply"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount888
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"flicked"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"flickered"
5"unreadable"
6"velvet"
7"weight"
8"wavered"
9"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords880
ratio0.001
matches
0"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount591
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva10
Lucien7
London1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.654
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
86.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.136
wordCount880
matches
0"not for answers, but for trust"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
99.75% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean20.47
std10.21
cv0.499
sampleLengths
026
129
251
326
45
517
640
730
818
97
1034
1133
129
1331
1435
1518
1637
1718
1829
197
2012
2116
2215
2326
2418
2518
267
2714
2829
2921
308
3118
3217
3322
3416
3514
368
3727
3814
398
4016
4123
4213
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences80
ratio0.063
matches
0"His gaze flicked over the cluttered flat—books splayed open on every surface, maps tacked haphazardly to the walls, and that familiar scent of old paper and something slightly bitter lingering in the air."
1"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes flickered with something unreadable, a mix of regret and something else—something dangerously close to longing."
2"Lucien stepped closer, closing the space between them until she could barely smell anything but him—the musk of smoke and ink, the faint scent of something old and dangerous."
3"Eva looked up, catching the way his eyes searched hers—not for answers, but for trust."
4"She opened her mouth—and closed it almost immediately."
62.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount596
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.06543624161073826
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.03859060402684564
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean11
std7.26
cv0.66
sampleLengths
06
120
23
326
418
533
617
79
83
92
103
1114
1224
1316
1416
158
166
1713
185
194
203
2118
2216
2312
2421
254
265
2730
281
2918
3010
317
323
3315
3417
3520
3615
373
3813
3916
404
413
422
4310
448
458
4615
4718
488
4914
76.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.475
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences51
matches
0"Then Lucien let the scroll"
1"Incongruously gentle in the middle"
2"Instead, he dipped his hand"
3"Then she knelt beside the"
ratio0.078
70.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences51
matches
0"It caught the edge of"
1"She stood in her doorway,"
2"His gaze flicked over the"
3"he said coolly, stepping around"
4"His smirk widened."
5"He turned slowly, letting his"
6"Her voice was quiet but"
7"She looked up sharply."
8"They studied each other for"
9"she asked, folding her arms"
10"He tilted his head."
11"She gestured vaguely to the"
12"he said simply, pulling a"
13"He let her take it,"
14"Her eyes went wide."
15"she challenged, though her voice"
16"He paused, his hand hovering"
17"she said softly, her voice"
18"She opened her mouth—and closed"
ratio0.373
67.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences51
matches
0"The door swung in, not"
1"It caught the edge of"
2"Eva didn’t move."
3"She stood in her doorway,"
4"Lucien Moreau adjusted his cuff,"
5"His gaze flicked over the"
6"he said coolly, stepping around"
7"Eva’s jaw tightened."
8"His smirk widened."
9"He turned slowly, letting his"
10"A cat meowed at his"
11"Eva murmured, pushing past him"
12"Her voice was quiet but"
13"Lucien paused by the small"
14"She looked up sharply."
15"They studied each other for"
16"she asked, folding her arms"
17"He tilted his head."
18"She gestured vaguely to the"
19"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes flickered with"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She stood in her doorway, arms folded across her chest, eyes narrowing as she took in the figure who had entered without waiting for an invitation."
1"He turned slowly, letting his eyes scan the room, his fingers trailing lightly along the spines of books stacked precariously on a side table."
2"Eva hesitated only a heartbeat before glancing down at the pouch, her fingers brushing it."
3"Fine golden threads spilled into her palm, shimmering like liquid sunlight despite the drab London lighting."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she challenged, though her voice wavered slightly"
1"He paused, his hand hovering over hers"
2"she said softly, her voice betraying none of the storm beneath it"
64.29% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.171
72.6976%