Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ88VKFWJ1992XS31H8WRDZ

Run Details

Duration:
40.5s
Cost:
$0.000591
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed like skeletal fingers as Aurora stepped onto the muddy trail, her boots sinking with each uneven stride. She’d left the city two hours ago by her watch, but the landscape had stretched and blurred as she neared Richmond Park. That wasn’t right. The path should have taken forty-five minutes, max. Her phone flickered with a weak signal, the time stubbornly stuck at 10:32 p.m., even though she’d crossed into the grove at midnight. The Fae had never liked watches in this part of the world. Aurora tightened her grip on the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It throbbed warm against her skin, its crimson glow seeping through the silver chain. She’d never been this deep into the Grove alone, but the pendant’s insistence had grown feverish all week. Its heat now pulsed in rhythm with her own heartbeat. Wildflowers the color of rusted iron bloomed in clumps along her path, petals drooping as she passed. Their scent—sweet as decay—clogged the air. She’d read somewhere that the Fae measured worth in secrets, not coins, but today her throat tasted like ash and her mind kept circling the same truth: Evan hadn’t died in the crash he’d staged. No body had ever been found, just his abandoned car at the edge of the M4. "You didn’t fall asleep that night, did you?" Aurora muttered. The words dissolved into the murmur of the trees. Somewhere behind the oaks, a voice might have answered, but she couldn’t turn. The shadows along the bark had sharpened into jagged teeth. The pendant’s warmth spiked. She pushed through a thicket of brambles, her black hair snagging on thorns. The grove widened into a clearing ringed by the standing stones. At its center, a circle of mushrooms glowed faint blue. Aurora had expected something more… monumental. A well? A stone altar? Instead, the ground here was soft and pocked with small, empty husks of shells. "Of course it wouldn’t be simple," she said, kneeling. Her fingers brushed a patch of moss. It shivered away from her touch. The pendant’s glow brightened, the gemstone shifting from crimson to something whiter, a shade that felt wrong in the moonlight. Aurora froze. The temperature had plummeted. Her breath came in visible shivers now, curling above her head like smoke. The mushrooms dimmed to black. Footsteps. Not hers. She spun. The trail back through the trees had vanished. The stones now formed a perfect, unbroken circle around her—higher than before, their tops lost in a fog that hadn’t been there moments ago. Aurora’s pulse thumped in her ears. She turned again, hands brushing the pendant’s edges. “Hello?” The word cracked midair. Her reflection stared back from the Heartstone’s surface. But her eyes in the glass were silver. A flicker of movement—something large crossing the fog beyond the stones. Not crossing. Crawling. Aurora backed toward a stone, pressing her spine to its rough surface. The pendant flared. The fog parted. Between the oaks, a shape waited. Tall. Too tall. Its body rippled like liquid, a form constantly dissolving. “You shouldn’t be here,” it said, each syllable a vibration in her bones. The voice had no gender, no shape. It simply *was*. Aurora fumbled for the knife in her boot. The blade felt smaller now, dull beside the figure’s shifting outline. It didn’t move closer, but the air thickened as if the world itself were holding its breath. “I’m looking for someone,” she said. Her voice was steady until the final word, which frayed into a whisper. The figure tilted its head. The pendant burned, searing her throat. Aurora yelped, yanking it over her head. The stones on its body now gleamed like fractures in glass, and for the first time, she saw its hands—thin fingers ending in crescent-shaped nails. “She left you a key.” The figure’s head tilted. Its mouth hadn’t moved. “Do you wish to see her?” The question hung in the cold. In her pocket, her phone buzzed once—10:32 a.m., a message from Yu-Fei: *Rory, the tofu is spoiling again. Come straight here after whatever you’re doing.* The words felt distant, as if she’d read them in someone else’s skin. The pendant still throbbed in her palm. She looked down. The ground beneath the mushrooms had shifted, forming a pattern now—parallel lines, straight as scratches. A name surfaced from memory: *helix* carving. Burial sites. The Fae didn’t *keep* bodies here. They folded them into the earth. Aurora’s throat tightened. The figure’s body began to ripple again, its edges dissolving into the fog. If it had spoken again, she didn’t hear it. She stepped back toward the circle’s edge, boots crunching over shells. The pendant’s glow dipped, then flared as she reached the standing stone. The world *pinched*, a pressure behind her eyes— —and suddenly her knees were digging into gravel. The air smelled of salt, not rot. Sunrise glinted on the Thames. Her phone read 10:33 a.m. The pendant in her palm was dark. But on the curb, an empty shell clattered where a trashcan had hit it. And the scar on her wrist—the one from the childhood fall, not Evan—itched as if someone had drawn a line of fire across her skin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.857
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount877
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount877
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"flickered"
2"throbbed"
3"pulsed"
4"measured"
5"warmth"
6"footsteps"
7"perfect"
8"pulse"
9"flicker"
10"whisper"
11"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords17
totalWords868
ratio0.02
matches
0"was"
1"Rory, the tofu is spoiling again. Come straight here after whatever you’re doing."
2"helix"
3"keep"
4"pinched"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount834
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora10
Richmond1
Park1
Fae3
Heartstone2
Grove1
Evan2
Yu-Fei1
Thames1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Fae"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"Grove"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Thames"
globalScore0.9
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like ash and her mind kept circlin"
84.79% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.152
wordCount868
matches
0"not coins, but today her throat tasted like ash"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean36.17
std20.85
cv0.577
sampleLengths
091
153
274
342
463
522
644
71
82
948
105
1130
1236
1323
1436
1519
1643
1719
1844
1946
2025
2131
2232
2339
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs137
matches
0"were holding"
1"were digging"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences93
ratio0.097
matches
0"Their scent—sweet as decay—clogged the air."
1"The stones now formed a perfect, unbroken circle around her—higher than before, their tops lost in a fog that hadn’t been there moments ago."
2"A flicker of movement—something large crossing the fog beyond the stones."
3"The stones on its body now gleamed like fractures in glass, and for the first time, she saw its hands—thin fingers ending in crescent-shaped nails."
4"In her pocket, her phone buzzed once—10:32 a.m., a message from Yu-Fei: *Rory, the tofu is spoiling again."
5"The ground beneath the mushrooms had shifted, forming a pattern now—parallel lines, straight as scratches."
6"The world *pinched*, a pressure behind her eyes—"
7"—and suddenly her knees were digging into gravel."
8"And the scar on her wrist—the one from the childhood fall, not Evan—itched as if someone had drawn a line of fire across her skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02955082742316785
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004728132387706856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean9.33
std6.52
cv0.698
sampleLengths
023
122
23
38
423
512
611
714
818
910
1017
116
1235
1316
1410
159
1613
1710
184
1913
2011
2110
225
231
242
253
2614
279
287
296
3020
312
324
3313
345
351
362
372
388
3924
406
418
425
438
448
4511
462
471
4812
493
54.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3655913978494624
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners34
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Somewhere behind the oaks, a"
1"Instead, the ground here was"
ratio0.025
98.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences79
matches
0"She’d left the city two"
1"Her phone flickered with a"
2"It throbbed warm against her"
3"She’d never been this deep"
4"Its heat now pulsed in"
5"Their scent—sweet as decay—clogged the"
6"She’d read somewhere that the"
7"She pushed through a thicket"
8"she said, kneeling"
9"Her fingers brushed a patch"
10"It shivered away from her"
11"Her breath came in visible"
12"She turned again, hands brushing"
13"Her reflection stared back from"
14"Its body rippled like liquid,"
15"it said, each syllable a"
16"It simply *was*."
17"It didn’t move closer, but"
18"Her voice was steady until"
19"Its mouth hadn’t moved."
ratio0.304
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences79
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"She’d left the city two"
2"That wasn’t right."
3"The path should have taken"
4"Her phone flickered with a"
5"The Fae had never liked"
6"Aurora tightened her grip on"
7"It throbbed warm against her"
8"She’d never been this deep"
9"Its heat now pulsed in"
10"Wildflowers the color of rusted"
11"Their scent—sweet as decay—clogged the"
12"She’d read somewhere that the"
13"The words dissolved into the"
14"The shadows along the bark"
15"The pendant’s warmth spiked."
16"She pushed through a thicket"
17"The grove widened into a"
18"Aurora had expected something more…"
19"A stone altar?"
ratio0.848
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"If it had spoken again,"
1"—and suddenly her knees were"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones loomed like skeletal fingers as Aurora stepped onto the muddy trail, her boots sinking with each uneven stride."
1"The pendant’s glow brightened, the gemstone shifting from crimson to something whiter, a shade that felt wrong in the moonlight."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"it said, each syllable a vibration in her bones"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
84.4996%