Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ8AJF6KRFVTJNF140FKDYM

Run Details

Duration:
43.2s
Cost:
$0.002046
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had turned Soho’s streets to slick puddles by the time Aurora pushed through the Raven’s Nest entrance, her motorbike helmet dripping onto her shoulder. The bar’s green neon glowed like a wound through the downpour, its haze drawing her inside like a promise of warmth. A bell jangled overhead, and she shrugged off the damp, scanning the room. Yu-Fei’s restaurant was a five-minute ride away, but her delivery was a listless pretext—she’d been craving the flat’s heat, the stale solitude above the bar. Silas sat in a corner booth, his knee elevated on a stool, a half-empty glass of whiskey in one hand. The dim light had always flattered him, but tonight it seemed to etch the lines around his mouth deeper, like cracks in old brick. He glanced up, and for a heartbeat, his eyes locked onto the door, not her. She adjusted her black jacket, the cotton stiff from the rain, and froze. The old habit: *pretend you’re invisible*. But the stool creaked as his gaze dragged toward her, and she caught the flicker when he recognized her—a shadow in the ribs, a hesitation that made the knot of his scarf tighten against his collar. “Aurora Carter.” His voice, when he spoke, was low and gravelled, like a foghorn through a storm. She crossed the room, her boots echoing faintly over the clink of bottles and murmur of half-conversations. The bar had its usual rhythm: the tap of knuckles on mahogany, the glint of whiskey in brass glasses. But Silas’ knuckles were inked with cigarette burns now, and he tapped one absently, a habit he never had when she was a teenager, all restless energy and clean nails. “Silas.” She set her keys on the table’s worn surface, careful not to drip. Their greetings were clipped, the weight of years settling already. He gestured to the seat across from him, his right hand brushing the silver ring she remembered catching glances of as a girl. Back when he used it as a signature, a flourish when he’d hand back case reports after her father’s late-night meetings. Now that hand trembled slightly, the ring swaying like a pendulum. “Laila?” He leaned forward, the question softening his voice. Her throat tightened. The name she’d cobbled together from old babysitters and a street in Brixton now tasted like a stranger’s. “I told you, call me Rory now.” He studied her wrist, bare beneath her jacket. The scar there—once a thumb’s breadth of puckered skin after she split it climbing the old chestnut in her parents’ yard—was hidden. “So you’ve settled on a name at last.” He lifted his glass, the amber liquid catching the glint of a photograph on the wall. A black-and-white shot of a different bar, years ago in Prague, him in a crisp suit, standing beside someone whose face was blurred out. She’d once asked him about that, and he’d changed the subject. “You didn’t say you were coming back.” She slid into the seat, the vinyl creaking beneath her. Her father had always disliked this bar’s smell—burnt wood and tobacco, the latter outlawed now, but the ghost of it clung stubbornly. Silas took a sip. “You didn’t say you were leaving.” His eyes narrowed at her, not unkindly. “Cardiff’s legal faculty, I thought you’d be buried in textbooks by now, not—” He waved a hand vaguely at her delivery vest folded on her lap. “—painting your bike red.” Rory’s smile was sharp. “Law’s less poetic than it sounds. Boring old statutes don’t pay for rent.” She glanced at the secret room’s bookshelf, its titles dust-cloaked. “I heard the Ivy League’s got a thing for spies in the Eighties, though.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. For years, he’d let those rumors drift—his late-night phone calls, coded bar receipts passed to shadowed figures. She never questioned the myths. But now he leaned on the table, his left knee shifting with a dull, wet groan. “Spies? No.” But his fingers traced the rim of the glass. “Smugglers, perhaps. Or very persistent grocers. This place has hosted all of them.” “I meant you.” Silas chuckled, though the sound was more rattle than humor. His gaze flickered to the window, the rain slashing against the glass. “You used to think I ran a book club.” “I thought you were my neighbor.” She tilted her head. “A guy who liked to drink and complain about noise from his upstairs flat. Until I noticed the maps.” His chuckle died. A photograph on the wall shifted in its frame—the Prague one. He reached for it once, long ago, showing her how the city’s canals once doubled as smuggling routes. She’d been twelve, enthralled by stories that smelled of danger. Now the air between them felt like that, the memory of something half-truths built on. “I was glad to hear you moved to London.” The glass shook as he set it down. “Your father’s letters got... thinner. After Evan.” Rory’s pulse quickened. The name still had teeth. “He stopped.” Silas’ silence was a door shutting. A hand slipped across the table, warm despite his injury. She noted the signet ring: the same, but heavier now, its wear thicker like he’d spent time picking at it. “They say time mellows things. Makes the bad parts distant, like a bad song you forget the tune to.” He nodded at her left hand, ringless. “But not always.” “I stopped answering calls.” The words came out brittle. She traced a water mark on the table, the same color as the scar beneath her jacket. “It was better that way.” Silas’ gaze lingered on the photograph. “You remember when I first moved here? Opened this place with the idea I’d never see another midnight.” He stood, testing his left leg—the limp had grown worse. “Instead, I listen to ghosts. You’d hate it, the quiet between the noise.” “I don’t hate the quiet.” “Do you?” He held the bookshelf door ajar, the hidden room’s stale air spilling out. “The silence when you want to say something? That’s where regret lives. When I left Cardiff, I told myself it gave you space. That you needed fresh eyes to decide your life.” Rory crossed her arms. “You left because of Prague. I left because Evan kept breaking mine.” Her voice lowered. “You think I don’t know what it’s like to run?” Silas’ hand paused on the bookshelf. The room behind him was a cavern of shadows, a place he once told her held a safe, a ledger, a way to forget. Now he seemed to hesitate inside it, the weight of it thicker than ever. “Running’s a skill. I learned it in my bones. But you—” A dry laugh. “You were always too stubborn to master it.” She leaned back, the scar on her wrist itching under her sleeve. “I’m not the one who changed my name to match every cover story I ever had.” His fingers went still. “That wasn’t a joke.” “I wasn’t joking.” She stared at the ring on his finger, the way he turned it occasionally when he wasn’t looking. A habit from the missions, maybe. Or from the lie after. The bell jingled behind her, and a patron’s cough broke the tension. Silas returned slowly, his limp pronounced in this light. “You could’ve trusted me.” The admission was a wound spoken out loud. “To do what? Report my own family?” She shook her head. “You didn’t know. I didn’t know. How was I supposed to fix it?” “You didn’t need to fix anything.” He gestured at the bar’s maps, their edges curled. “You just needed to leave. I’d’ve taken you in.” Rory’s laugh cut sharp. “Like you did with the Ivy League rumors? Or were they just another cover?” He looked at her then, really looked, and for the first time, she saw the man beyond the myth. The man who’d spent decades dodging questions and now faced one in her. “I owned a bar in Prague. The same one here, actually.” His voice was flat, like recounting a grocery list. “They told me the knee was my only ticket out.” “Your knee’s still part of your ticket.” She nodded at his leg. “You couldn’t do what you did before. So you stayed here.” Silas gestured to the bookshelf. “The world’s still small enough for the right kind of man.” His eyes flicked to her flat collar, the way she’d tucked her hair behind her ears. “Did you ever finish that Pre-Law degree?” “I finished the part where I realized the law’s mostly who you know.” She met his gaze. “Unlike restaurants. Yu-Fei doesn’t care about your past.” “You didn’t come in here to talk about Yu-Fei.” He tapped his glass. “You want something. A job? A lead?” “You knew I worked at the restaurant because you needed me to.” Rory’s hand hovered at the vest. “Delivery routes, people I meet. You still running ghosts through this place?” Silas didn’t answer. Instead, he gestured to the rain. “I didn’t know what you’d do with that bike, but it’s a start.” He stood, slow and deliberate. “You’re not like me, Rory. You were never meant to be the Spymaster’s pet.” “Laila Carter’s not interested in games.” His hand hovered where hers met the table—the vest, the name, the unspoken. “Neither is Aurora Carter.” He paused. “But I think that girl would be proud of you.” Rory looked away. The rain had stopped. Distant sirens wailed, London’s breath in the night. She stood, keys in her pocket warm. “You think I’m not still playing one?” She nodded at the door. “Your flat’s above this place, same as I’m above it. Funny how we’re both hiding in the same spot.” Silas watched her leave. The bell didn’t jingle behind her, just the door’s dry hiss. He limped back to the booth, poured more whiskey, and stared at the ring on his hand. Outside, her motorbike’s engine growled, then vanished down a back street, the same one she’d used to sneak out of his flat the night Evan found her phone number scrawled in his guestbook. He traced the map on the wall, fingers brushing Cardiff, then London. Somewhere in between, a name had been lost. Somewhere in between, a secret room stayed empty.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.492
leniency0.984
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1723
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1723
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"etch"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"glint"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"coded"
count1
9
word"traced"
count3
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"scanning"
2"etch"
3"flicker"
4"echoing"
5"glint"
6"weight"
7"trembled"
8"coded"
9"traced"
10"flickered"
11"pulse"
12"quickened"
13"silence"
14"tension"
15"flicked"
16"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1714
ratio0.002
matches
0"pretend you’re invisible"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1109
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Aurora1
Raven1
Nest1
Brixton1
Prague2
Rory6
Silas7
London2
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Brixton"
3"Prague"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like a stranger’s"
1"felt like that, the memory of something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1714
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean38.09
std23.66
cv0.621
sampleLengths
085
1114
217
366
424
555
69
728
889
939
1047
1141
1268
133
1431
1529
1657
1724
1810
1965
2031
2147
225
2347
2429
2566
2628
278
2832
2933
3024
3124
3218
3362
3423
3539
3625
3720
3830
3941
406
4129
4253
4365
4428
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"were clipped"
1"was blurred"
2"been lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs186
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences133
ratio0.06
matches
0"Yu-Fei’s restaurant was a five-minute ride away, but her delivery was a listless pretext—she’d been craving the flat’s heat, the stale solitude above the bar."
1"But the stool creaked as his gaze dragged toward her, and she caught the flicker when he recognized her—a shadow in the ribs, a hesitation that made the knot of his scarf tighten against his collar."
2"The scar there—once a thumb’s breadth of puckered skin after she split it climbing the old chestnut in her parents’ yard—was hidden."
3"Her father had always disliked this bar’s smell—burnt wood and tobacco, the latter outlawed now, but the ghost of it clung stubbornly."
4"For years, he’d let those rumors drift—his late-night phone calls, coded bar receipts passed to shadowed figures."
5"A photograph on the wall shifted in its frame—the Prague one."
6"“You remember when I first moved here? Opened this place with the idea I’d never see another midnight.” He stood, testing his left leg—the limp had grown worse."
7"His hand hovered where hers met the table—the vest, the name, the unspoken."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02877697841726619
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004316546762589928
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.89
std7.33
cv0.569
sampleLengths
026
121
213
325
420
524
615
713
86
936
1017
1117
1219
1330
1414
1510
1623
1721
1811
199
203
2118
227
238
2422
2524
2624
2711
2817
2922
304
3113
3226
334
344
3523
3614
376
3817
395
4016
4111
4213
433
4410
4512
469
4710
4819
493
46.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3082706766917293
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Instead, he gestured to the"
1"Somewhere in between, a name"
2"Somewhere in between, a secret"
ratio0.031
30.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences97
matches
0"He glanced up, and for"
1"She adjusted her black jacket,"
2"His voice, when he spoke,"
3"She crossed the room, her"
4"She set her keys on"
5"Their greetings were clipped, the"
6"He gestured to the seat"
7"He leaned forward, the question"
8"Her throat tightened."
9"He studied her wrist, bare"
10"He lifted his glass, the"
11"She’d once asked him about"
12"She slid into the seat,"
13"Her father had always disliked"
14"His eyes narrowed at her,"
15"He waved a hand vaguely"
16"She glanced at the secret"
17"She never questioned the myths."
18"His gaze flickered to the"
19"She tilted her head"
ratio0.474
27.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences97
matches
0"The rain had turned Soho’s"
1"The bar’s green neon glowed"
2"A bell jangled overhead, and"
3"Yu-Fei’s restaurant was a five-minute"
4"Silas sat in a corner"
5"The dim light had always"
6"He glanced up, and for"
7"She adjusted her black jacket,"
8"The old habit: *pretend you’re"
9"His voice, when he spoke,"
10"She crossed the room, her"
11"The bar had its usual"
12"She set her keys on"
13"Their greetings were clipped, the"
14"He gestured to the seat"
15"Back when he used it"
16"He leaned forward, the question"
17"Her throat tightened."
18"The name she’d cobbled together"
19"He studied her wrist, bare"
ratio0.866
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now that hand trembled slightly,"
1"Now the air between them"
2"Now he seemed to hesitate"
ratio0.031
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But the stool creaked as his gaze dragged toward her, and she caught the flicker when he recognized her—a shadow in the ribs, a hesitation that made the knot of…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He leaned, the question softening his voice"
1"She slid, the vinyl creaking beneath her"
2"His eyes narrowed, not unkindly"
3"He nodded, ringless"
4"He held, the hidden room’s stale air spilling out"
5"He gestured, their edges curled"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he spoke (speak)"
1"flat like recounting (like recount)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.066
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.066
84.2398%