| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.359 | | leniency | 0.718 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 81.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1384 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1384 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "echo" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "the air was heavy with" | | 2 | "A wave of nausea" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 21 | | markdownWords | 32 | | totalWords | 1362 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "deepened" | | 2 | "sang" | | 3 | "off" | | 4 | "unfolds" | | 5 | "hungers" | | 6 | "active" | | 7 | "Dymas." | | 8 | "felt" | | 9 | "feed, more, taste, take" | | 10 | "plip" | | 11 | "feed" | | 12 | "craving" | | 13 | "the light bled from it" | | 14 | "Stay. Eat. You’ve earned it." | | 15 | "elsewhere" | | 16 | "settled" | | 17 | "always" | | 18 | "hunger" | | 19 | "gone" | | 20 | "remembers" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Aurora | 18 | | Eva | 8 | | Nyx | 10 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Blade" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.631 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as though breathing" | | 1 | "felt like carpet" | | 2 | "silk that seemed to shift with each breath, though no wind stirred" | | 3 | "seemed larger now, the edges blurred" | | 4 | "appeared beside them, silent as a thought" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.937 | | wordCount | 1362 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gone, but *deepened*" | | 1 | "neither day nor" | | 2 | "not just natural shade, but something *active*" | | 3 | "not from the grove, but from *elsewhere*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 24.32 | | std | 17.9 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 89 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 27 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.149 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, the air was heavy with the damp musk of Richmond Park—wet leaves, distant rain, the breath of horses in the meadow—and the next, the world *shifted*." | | 1 | "The flowers here didn’t just bloom—they *sang*." | | 2 | "The blade gave no sign—no chill, no hum—but her scar tingled, the old crescent on her left wrist pulsing like a second, slower heartbeat." | | 3 | "Their trunks rose higher than any tree Aurora had ever seen—so high the crowns dissolved into a sky that was neither day nor night, but a bruised twilight shot through with ribbons of shifting silver light." | | 4 | "No footprints marred its velvet surface—except, she noticed, their own." | | 5 | "Hers, Eva’s—but not Nyx’s." | | 6 | "And ahead—there she stood." | | 7 | "It warmed suddenly, a faint, steady pulse—like a heartbeat in time with the standing stones." | | 8 | "Shadows pooled deeper between the trees—not just natural shade, but something *active*." | | 9 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed once, twice—bright as a coal pulled from fire—then pointed, like a compass, toward the northwest arc of the circle." | | 10 | "Through it—brief, nauseating flashes." | | 11 | "And then—voices." | | 12 | "Words in languages Aurora didn’t know, but *felt*—*feed, more, taste, take*." | | 13 | "She clapped a hand over her mouth, but what came up wasn’t bile—it was a single, perfect grape, plump and dark as blood." | | 14 | "The blade didn’t just glow—*the light bled from it*, pale and cold as moonlight on ice." | | 15 | "A shriek—not from the grove, but from *elsewhere*—ripped through the air." | | 16 | "Then—slowly—the grove *settled*." | | 17 | "The pendant had cooled, but the echo of that *hunger*, that deep, gnawing pull—it lingered." | | 18 | "And then she was gone—no movement, no vanish." | | 19 | "Just—*gone*." | | 20 | "Above them, the twilight sky pulsed once—like a slow, dark heart." | | 21 | "And then, step by silent step, they walked back through the trees—into the world that remembered how to be real." |
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| 93.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1061 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.0471253534401508 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011310084825636193 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 9.2 | | std | 6.92 | | cv | 0.752 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 57.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3783783783783784 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the pendant flared." | | 1 | "Then—slowly—the grove *settled*." | | 2 | "Only the moss, the stones," |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She halted, hand instinctively going" | | 1 | "Her knuckles were white." | | 2 | "Their shadow-form elongated, stretching across" | | 3 | "They stepped forward through what" | | 4 | "Their trunks rose higher than" | | 5 | "They pulsed faintly, as though" | | 6 | "Hers, Eva’s—but not Nyx’s." | | 7 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 8 | "She wore a gown of" | | 9 | "Her gaze flickered to Aurora’s" | | 10 | "It warmed suddenly, a faint," | | 11 | "She’d woken each night for" | | 12 | "Her eyes narrowed" | | 13 | "She yanked it free." | | 14 | "She moved toward the rift," | | 15 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 16 | "She clapped a hand over" | | 17 | "It fell to the moss" | | 18 | "It trembled once, then split" | | 19 | "You’ve earned it.*" |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 53.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees ended without warning." | | 1 | "Aurora felt it before she" | | 2 | "The scent changed too." | | 3 | "The flowers here didn’t just" | | 4 | "Lavender, honeysuckle, and something else," | | 5 | "She halted, hand instinctively going" | | 6 | "The blade gave no sign—no" | | 7 | "Eva whispered from behind her," | | 8 | "Her knuckles were white." | | 9 | "Their shadow-form elongated, stretching across" | | 10 | "They stepped forward through what" | | 11 | "The grove unfolded in a" | | 12 | "Their trunks rose higher than" | | 13 | "They pulsed faintly, as though" | | 14 | "Nyx said, hovering near one" | | 15 | "Eva turned in a slow" | | 16 | "Aurora stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 17 | "Hers, Eva’s—but not Nyx’s." | | 18 | "The shade moved without impression," | | 19 | "Isolde Varga stood beneath the" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 49.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Nyx flinched back slightly." |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks rose higher than any tree Aurora had ever seen—so high the crowns dissolved into a sky that was neither day nor night, but a bruised twilight shot …" | | 1 | "Between the trees stood ancient oaken stones, moss-draped and carved with symbols that made her eyes itch if she stared too long." | | 2 | "Isolde Varga stood beneath the largest oak, silver hair unbound and pooling on the moss, stirring as though underwater." | | 3 | "She wore a gown of woven ivy and moon-dappled silk that seemed to shift with each breath, though no wind stirred." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, voice steady despite the flutter in her chest" |
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| 98.72% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |