| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 689 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 689 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "churning" | | 7 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 85.06% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "Its face was a shifting blur,五官 dissolving and reforming like a film projector out of sync." | | 1 | "When they reopened, they were her own: bright blue,虹膜 ringed with gold." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 684 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "No" | | 1 | "like a heartbeat" | | 2 | "shuddered" | | 3 | "her scar" | | 4 | "Not a trace of Evan’s blood on this" | | 5 | "I" | | 6 | "him" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 633 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.947 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though wading through syrup" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 684 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 40.24 | | std | 29.35 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 118 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d expected the grove to feel ancient, maybe even eerie—its reputation as a sanctuary between realms wasn’t whispered about for nothing—but the air here tasted newer, sharper, as though it had been freshly carved from some deeper world." | | 1 | "A bead splattered against her wrist—*her scar*—and burned." | | 2 | "The pendant chirped—a sound like a moth’s wings rasping against glass." | | 3 | "The gemstone’s glow deepened, and the air rippled—a heatwave mirage just beyond the oak to her left." | | 4 | "It had no mouth, only a crescent scar bisecting its left eye—the same scar that curled like a half-moon on her own wrist." | | 5 | "The figure reached, and the air split—" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 641 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same bruise-purple flowers." |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.028081123244929798 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0062402496099844 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 9.12 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.664 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 56.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3466666666666667 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 51.28% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a yawning hole, its" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze, hand instinctively brushing" | | 1 | "Her own matched it in" | | 2 | "She’d expected the grove to" | | 3 | "They bloomed in dense clusters," | | 4 | "It should’ve been brittle, out" | | 5 | "She jerked back." | | 6 | "Her voice carried flat, swallowed" | | 7 | "She stood, pulse thrumming in" | | 8 | "Her watch, borrowed from Silas’s" | | 9 | "She’d entered the grove just" | | 10 | "It echoed from the trees," | | 11 | "She stepped toward it, boots" | | 12 | "Her breath hitched." | | 13 | "It had no mouth, only" | | 14 | "She stumbled back." | | 15 | "She crashed through undergrowth, the" | | 16 | "She vaulted over a root" | | 17 | "Its face was a shifting" | | 18 | "She tore the chain over" |
| | ratio | 0.292 | |
| 52.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The heel of Aurora Carter’s" | | 1 | "She froze, hand instinctively brushing" | | 2 | "The glow had gone from" | | 3 | "Her own matched it in" | | 4 | "She’d expected the grove to" | | 5 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 6 | "The wildflowers hadn’t lied." | | 7 | "They bloomed in dense clusters," | | 8 | "Aurora crouched, fingers curling around" | | 9 | "It should’ve been brittle, out" | | 10 | "She jerked back." | | 11 | "A bead splattered against her" | | 12 | "A branch cracked behind her." | | 13 | "Her voice carried flat, swallowed" | | 14 | "The pendant chirped—a sound like" | | 15 | "She stood, pulse thrumming in" | | 16 | "The stones circled the clearing" | | 17 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 18 | "Her watch, borrowed from Silas’s" | | 19 | "She’d entered the grove just" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d expected the grove to feel ancient, maybe even eerie—its reputation as a sanctuary between realms wasn’t whispered about for nothing—but the air here tast…" | | 1 | "It had no mouth, only a crescent scar bisecting its left eye—the same scar that curled like a half-moon on her own wrist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The figure’s eyes snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |