| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "It pulsed again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 81.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1087 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sweetly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1087 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "tapestry" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "predator" | | 14 | "sentinel" | | 15 | "glinting" | | 16 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1078 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "ask" | | 1 | "see" | | 2 | "changes" | | 3 | "now" | | 4 | "Changeling sentinel" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 865 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 10 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 19 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Blade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.402 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing the air itself" | | 1 | "looked like molten bronze croaked in rhyt" | | 2 | "as if tugging her toward that unseen threshold" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.783 | | wordCount | 1078 | | matches | | 0 | "not writing, but something older, something" | | 1 | "Not quite the Fae Courts,” Isolde mused, “but close enough to borrow their games" | | 2 | "not the sky but scenes" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 28.37 | | std | 15.28 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 59 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "were waiting" | | 1 | "were already shifting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The others—Nyx, their silhouette wavered at the edge of the tree line, and Isolde, who had already begun humming a tune without words—were waiting." | | 1 | "The sky—was it sky?—hung low, a tapestry of stars unmarred by moon or sun." | | 2 | "Aurora caught the flicker of movement from the corner of her eye—something darting between the trees." | | 3 | "Aurora felt the weight of her Fae-Forged Blade at her hip—a cold, unyielding presence." | | 4 | "The surface rippled, showing not the sky but scenes—a banquet under blood-red vines, a woman with Aurora’s jawline screaming into shadow, a child laughing as she vanished into light." | | 5 | "It grew hot, then cold, then warm—a metronome against her throat." | | 6 | "The mist curled like smoke, and in its center, a doorway stood—arched and wrought of bone-white stone." | | 7 | "A shape materialized in the fog—sleek and feline, with too many eyes and a tail that split like ivy." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 885 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "under blood-red vines," |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.0384180790960452 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007909604519774011 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 10.57 | | std | 6.12 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 56.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3627450980392157 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, she lowered her blade." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form flickered, solid then" | | 1 | "She stepped past the threshold," | | 2 | "she asked, voice soft so" | | 3 | "She reached down to touch" | | 4 | "They pressed deeper." | | 5 | "Their shadow peeled from their" | | 6 | "Its eyes glowed molten gold," | | 7 | "It watched them from a" | | 8 | "Its edge had not cut" | | 9 | "They followed a winding path" | | 10 | "She dipped a finger and" | | 11 | "She jerked back." | | 12 | "She reached for her pendant" | | 13 | "It grew hot, then cold," | | 14 | "They pointed to a patch" | | 15 | "It pulsed again, brighter now," | | 16 | "Its silver edge caught the" | | 17 | "They were already shifting, their" | | 18 | "It was half predator, half" | | 19 | "She felt the Fae blade" |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 11.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter traced her fingers" | | 1 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 2 | "The others—Nyx, their silhouette wavered" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, stepping forward" | | 4 | "Their form flickered, solid then" | | 5 | "A gust of wind passed" | | 6 | "Aurora heard a low, resonant" | | 7 | "Isolde tilted her head, pale" | | 8 | "She stepped past the threshold," | | 9 | "The Grove unfolded like a" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed through the roots" | | 11 | "The sky—was it sky?—hung low," | | 12 | "Aurora inhaled, catching the scent" | | 13 | "she asked, voice soft so" | | 14 | "Isolde’s laughter was a soundless" | | 15 | "Nyx knelt to examine a" | | 16 | "She reached down to touch" | | 17 | "The Heartstone Pendant thrummed in" | | 18 | "They pressed deeper." | | 19 | "The ground became uneven, layered" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form flickered, solid then insubstantial, as if testing the air itself." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed through the roots of trees that should not have stood so close to one another, their petals iridescent as mother-of-pearl." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant thrummed in response, as if it recognized something in the air." | | 3 | "Strange etchings spiraled across the stone: not writing, but something older, something that made Aurora’s teeth ache when she looked at it too long." | | 4 | "Its eyes glowed molten gold, and its pelt shimmered with constellations that shifted as it moved." | | 5 | "Its edge had not cut anything yet, but she could feel the magic in it, a hum that prickled her skin." | | 6 | "Above them, a chandelier of bioluminescent moths clung to branches twisted into shapes that resembled hands." | | 7 | "But it reformed, circling the group, its eyes glinting with hunger." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, voice soft so as not to break the hush" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice suddenly solemn" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.241 | | leniency | 0.483 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |