| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He reached then [then]" | | 1 | "His cane tapped once [once]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 70 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.107 | | effectiveRatio | 0.086 | |
| 88.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "calculating" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1334 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "us" | | 1 | "escaped" | | 2 | "was" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "watched" | | 5 | "am" | | 6 | "hunting" | | 7 | "want" | | 8 | "me" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 27 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 718 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Malphora | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 6 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" | | 6 | "Lucien" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1334 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 19.91 | | std | 14.33 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened just enough for a sliver of the dim landing light to cut across the cluttered living room—stacks of grimoires teetering beside half-empty mugs, a sari-draped lamp casting amber shadows over sigils sketched in chalk across the floorboards." | | 1 | "One amber eye, one black—one human, one not—fixed on her with that unnerving stillness he’d always had." | | 2 | "A silver cuff glinted on his left wrist—engraved with runes she recognized as warding against truth-spells." | | 3 | "Not Malphora—the name whispered in back-alley covens when they spoke of the girl who’d walked through fire and didn’t burn." | | 4 | "Rory tensed—half expecting a blade, a spell, a contract." | | 5 | "The light hit her face just right—blue eyes bright, hair lifting in the wind." | | 6 | "Her hand rose—slow—fingers brushing the edge of his cuff, the cold metal against her skin." | | 7 | "Silence stretched between them, thick with memory—the nights in hidden rooms, trading spells and secrets, his hands steadying hers as she first drew a true ward, the way he’d held her after Evan’s shadow nearly took her, voice steady as he whispered incantations into her hair." | | 8 | "Rory glanced at the chalk sigils on the floor—weak, fading." |
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| 84.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 734 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "beside half-empty mugs," |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.05040871934604905 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013623978201634877 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 9.74 | | std | 8.43 | | cv | 0.866 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 54.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.35766423357664234 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Still wore that same charcoal" | | 2 | "Instead, he pulled out a" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 11.55% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She already knew." | | 1 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 2 | "His voice had that old" | | 3 | "He stepped forward, not waiting" | | 4 | "He reached, then stopped short" | | 5 | "She pulled her arm back." | | 6 | "His gaze didn’t waver" | | 7 | "Her voice was low, frayed" | | 8 | "She finally stepped back, moving" | | 9 | "His cane tapped once against" | | 10 | "She barked a laugh, sharp" | | 11 | "He moved slowly, unbuttoning his" | | 12 | "She leaned against the counter," | | 13 | "Her voice cracked" | | 14 | "He turned then, fully facing" | | 15 | "He said it softly" | | 16 | "He let out a breath," | | 17 | "She looked at him fully" | | 18 | "He reached into his inner" | | 19 | "She didn’t take it." |
| | ratio | 0.521 | |
| 51.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain rattled twice before" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t ask who it" | | 2 | "She already knew." | | 3 | "Ptolemy hissed from under the" | | 4 | "The door opened just enough" | | 5 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 6 | "His voice had that old" | | 7 | "Rory didn’t move from the" | | 8 | "A flicker in his expression." | | 9 | "He stepped forward, not waiting" | | 10 | "The door closed behind him" | | 11 | "Ptolemy bolted, claws clicking against" | | 12 | "Rory crossed her arms." | | 13 | "He reached, then stopped short" | | 14 | "She pulled her arm back." | | 15 | "His gaze didn’t waver" | | 16 | "Her voice was low, frayed" | | 17 | "She finally stepped back, moving" | | 18 | "The kettle still held water." | | 19 | "His cane tapped once against" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Silence stretched between them, thick with memory—the nights in hidden rooms, trading spells and secrets, his hands steadying hers as she first drew a true ward…" |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped, not waiting for invitation" | | 1 | "His hand hovered, not touching" |
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| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She barked (bark)" | | 1 | "he continued (continue)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 70 | | tagDensity | 0.229 | | leniency | 0.457 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |