| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.565 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.038 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |
| 88.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1300 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1300 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "synchronized" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "fragmented" | | 12 | "unraveling" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "f in fear" | | 1 | "e with fear" | | 2 | "t with urgency" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1279 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "in" | | 1 | "breathing" | | 2 | "her" | | 3 | "real" | | 4 | "one of Nyx" | | 5 | "Dymas" | | 6 | "something" | | 7 | "calls" | | 8 | "moved" | | 9 | "Dymas" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the edge of the grove, Eva shouted." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 930 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 12 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Ahead | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Rory | 6 | | Isolde | 11 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae-forged | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.747 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when looked at directly, like fish darting beneath dark water" | | 1 | "as if recognizing something—warding, or warning" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.782 | | wordCount | 1279 | | matches | | 0 | "not with heat, but with urgency" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 20.97 | | std | 16.66 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a gust or a breeze—just a sudden stillness that made the breath catch in Aurora’s throat, as if the world had exhaled and forgotten to inhale again." | | 1 | "It pulsed once—soft, insistent—like a heartbeat pressed against her sternum." | | 2 | "The trees still stood—oaks and beeches, ancient and thick-barked—but their colors were wrong." | | 3 | "And the air—thick with the scent of wild thyme and something metallic, like cold iron and starlight—clung to the back of the throat." | | 4 | "Their violet eyes—glowing faintly in the half-light—scanned the perimeter." | | 5 | "The path, if it could be called that, was defined only by a faint shimmer in the air—like heat haze over pavement, but cold to the touch." | | 6 | "Beyond, the forest opened into a grove ringed by standing stones—massive oaks, their trunks wider than cars, their branches twisted into arcs above, forming a living dome." | | 7 | "The flowers crowding the ground bloomed in impossible colors—petals of molten gold, blossoms that pulsed with inner light like captured fireflies." | | 8 | "The woman—Isolde—smiled faintly." | | 9 | "A second figure materialized from the shadows between two stones—tall, formless, a silhouette made of moving darkness." | | 10 | "It was Nyx again, but different—this shadow carried weight, intent, a gravity all its own." | | 11 | "It was cold, always cold, but now it seemed to vibrate, as if recognizing something—warding, or warning." | | 12 | "For a moment, Rory saw her outlined in flickering afterimages—Eva at ten, at sixteen, at thirty—the ghost of a life unfolding, then sealing shut." | | 13 | "There, nestled in the moss, was a shallow pool of black water—still as glass, reflective, yet depthless." | | 14 | "Faces formed—fragmented, shifting." | | 15 | "Then—Eva, bleeding." | | 16 | "Their voice was louder now, layered—whispers on whispers." | | 17 | "Water ran from her fingers, but it wasn’t water—it was light, golden and thick, like melted honey." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 958 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.032359081419624215 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009394572025052192 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 10.15 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 60.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3968253968253968 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 76.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Rory saw *her*." | | 1 | "Then, from the edge of" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a gust or" | | 1 | "It pulsed once—soft, insistent—like a" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes—glowing faintly in" | | 3 | "they said, their voice like" | | 4 | "They moved forward cautiously." | | 5 | "She wasn’t old, Rory realized," | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes turned" | | 7 | "It was Nyx again, but" | | 8 | "It was cold, always cold," | | 9 | "She pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 10 | "It glowed crimson now, a" | | 11 | "She extended a hand toward" | | 12 | "Her mother’s eyes, wide with" | | 13 | "Her father’s hands slamming a" | | 14 | "Their voice was louder now," | | 15 | "It burned now, not with" | | 16 | "She pressed a single drop" | | 17 | "It stung, then cooled." |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 57.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "It wasn’t a gust or" | | 2 | "The next, silence fell like" | | 3 | "Aurora said, her fingers instinctively" | | 4 | "It pulsed once—soft, insistent—like a" | | 5 | "Eva looked around." | | 6 | "The trees still stood—oaks and" | | 7 | "The bark shimmered faintly, as" | | 8 | "The moss carpeting the ground" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes—glowing faintly in" | | 10 | "they said, their voice like" | | 11 | "Aurora said before Nyx could" | | 12 | "The pendant warmed again, a" | | 13 | "They moved forward cautiously." | | 14 | "The path, if it could" | | 15 | "The flowers crowding the ground" | | 16 | "Bees the size of moths" | | 17 | "A woman stood at the" | | 18 | "She wasn’t old, Rory realized," | | 19 | "Her pale lavender eyes turned" |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, she was stepping over a gnarled root at the edge of Richmond Park, the crunch of frost-laced leaves under her boots fading behind her." | | 1 | "Between them stood slabs of weathered stone, etched with symbols that seemed to shift when looked at directly, like fish darting beneath dark water." | | 2 | "It was cold, always cold, but now it seemed to vibrate, as if recognizing something—warding, or warning." | | 3 | "A banquet hall stretching into infinity, tables groaning under roasted beasts with eyes still blinking, dishes steaming with things that *moved*." | | 4 | "Something with too many joints, too many teeth, and fingers that ended in tiny, grasping mouths." | | 5 | "Nyx stepped in front of Aurora, their form expanding, swallowing the light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora replied, her voice steady despite the tightness in her chest" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 25 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 5 | "Aurora admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.543 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.32 | | effectiveRatio | 0.32 | |