Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ8JTDYE32STRZR5YGYZ9PM

Run Details

Duration:
23.3s
Cost:
$0.000575
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter froze with her hand on the doorknob, the scent of old paper and spicy curry wafting from the landing behind her. Eva’s flat was a tomb of unanswered questions, its shelves groaning with occult tomes and half-written theories about the veil between worlds. The tabby cat Ptolemy flicked his tail from the windowsill, unimpressed by the tension coiling in her shoulders. She’d expected a delivery. Maybe Yu-Fei’s latest “special order” box of questionable ingredients. Not the man standing on her threshold in a tailored charcoal suit, his slicked-back platinum hair catching the winter light like a blade. Lucien Moreau. Five years since he’d vanished without a word. Five years since he’d left her with bruised ribs and a whisper of “*Je t’aime*” that tasted like ash. His eyes locked onto hers—amber and obsidian, always uncanny, always wrong. The scar on her left wrist itched, a useless reminder of childhood fractures. She swallowed. “You’ve got the wrong address.” The lie curdled in the air. He tilted his head, cane tapping once against the warped floorboards. “Darling. You still don’t know how to lie.” His French accent had always been a velvet glove over steel. Now it felt like a noose. “Let me in before your roommate notices the tremor in your hands.” Ptolemy leapt down, purring as he weaved between her legs. Aurora crossed her arms, swallowing the tremor he’d identified. “I don’t need your help, Lucien.” “No.” He stepped closer, the cold seeping through his coat like a living thing. “You need me to explain why your ex-boyfriend’s body was found in an alley last night, his chest split open like a ripe fruit.” The door slammed shut behind her with a thud. “I told you,” she said, too sharp, pacing away from him toward the cluttered coffee table. Stained teacups stacked like sarcophagi. “I cut ties with Evan. That part of my life is over.” Lucien’s cane pressed against her back, gentle but insistent, turning her to face him. His nearness was a physical thing—cologne she couldn’t place, the flicker of something *other* in his gaze. She’d forgotten how he made her pulse stutter. “You think I’d come here if it weren’t urgent?” His thumb brushed her scar, slow as a benediction. “He was marked, Rory. A demon’s brand. The same one that nearly killed me in Marseille.” She flinched away. “You left me for *dead* after that. No note. No *explanation*.” Her voice cracked. “You think I’d trust you now?” His jaw tightened. For a moment, the illusion of the charming fixer cracked—raw hunger in his expression, the faintest ripple of inhuman energy in his stance. “I had no choice. Avaros would have killed us both if I’d stayed.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the only one you’ll get.” He gestured to the scrolls on the table, their edges fraying with age. “You’ve been digging into this world again. The same world that turned your boyfriend into roadkill. You think your little Eurasian warlock friend can protect you from what’s coming?” Aurora’s chin lifted. “Eva’s smarter than you think.” “Eva’s brilliant. But she doesn’t know the half of it.” His cane snapped open with a flick, the ivory handle splitting to reveal a blade’s edge. “I’m offering you a choice. Join me, or watch London burn.” The absurdity of it made her laugh, bitter and short. “You think a knife and dramatics will make this easier?” His mouth quirked. “You always did hate my dramatics.” She turned toward the window, staring at the fog-cloaked street below. Brick Lane’s neon signs flickered like dying stars. Somewhere, a car alarm wailed. “Why now?” she asked. “Why drag me back into this?” “Because you’re the only one who can read the damn scrolls.” His voice softened, and for a heartbeat, she remembered the man who’d held her after her mother’s funeral, who’d recited *Les Misérables* to her in the dark. “You spoke Welsh to that banshee in Cardiff. You saw the veil thinner than anyone. You’re not just some human bystander, Rory. You *belong* here.” “And what about *you*?” Her voice wavered. “You call yourself my friend, but you vanish when it gets real? You let me believe you were dead?” He stepped closer, the blade of his cane retracting with a hiss. His hands framed her face, calloused and cool. “I *lied* to protect you. Do you think demons care about your *feelings*?” Aurora wrenched free. “You don’t get to play the hero now.” “I’m not playing anything.” His eyes darkened. “The Brand is hunting you, Rory. They know about the scar. About your mother’s blood.” She stiffened. “My mother was a teacher.” “Who taught you to see beyond the veil.” He reached for her wrist, fingers trembling as they traced the crescent scar. “This isn’t just a childhood accident. It’s a key.” Ptolemy hissed, arching his back between them. Aurora stepped back, heart hammering. “You’re wrong.” “Am I?” Lucien’s smile was razor-thin. “Or are you just afraid to find out?” The silence stretched, heavy with all the things left unsaid—the night he’d vanished, the letters she’d burned, the way her body still responded to his touch like a wound reopening. Finally, she exhaled. “If you’re lying, I’ll feed you to Ptolemy.” “Deal.” He bowed, cane offered like a peace offering. “Where do we start?” Aurora glanced at the scrolls, then at the man who’d haunted her dreams for years. The smell of curry and ink filled the room. Somewhere below, the clatter of a delivery truck echoed through the street. She took the cane. “First, you’re going to tell me about Avaros.” Lucien’s eyes gleamed. “And you’ll listen?” “And you’ll *answer*?” He stepped back, offering a hand. “A truce, then?” Aurora hesitated. The scar on her wrist burned. Then, slowly, she took it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His French accent had always [always]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.043
94.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount970
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount970
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"uncanny"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"tension"
2"whisper"
3"uncanny"
4"reminder"
5"velvet"
6"flicker"
7"pulse"
8"flickered"
9"wavered"
10"traced"
11"silence"
12"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords12
totalWords966
ratio0.012
matches
0"Je t’aime"
1"other"
2"dead"
3"explanation"
4"Les Misérables"
5"belong"
6"you"
7"lied"
8"feelings"
9"answer"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount584
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Ptolemy3
Yu-Fei1
Moreau1
French1
Stained1
Aurora7
Lane1
Lucien4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Lane"
globalScore0.901
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like ash"
1"felt like a noose"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount966
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean24.15
std16.15
cv0.669
sampleLengths
063
136
22
327
431
554
625
738
89
933
1039
1134
1223
1339
144
1548
168
1737
1820
199
2034
2163
2226
2333
2411
2522
267
2730
2814
2914
3030
3111
3213
3336
3412
356
363
379
388
395
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs101
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences92
ratio0.043
matches
0"His eyes locked onto hers—amber and obsidian, always uncanny, always wrong."
1"His nearness was a physical thing—cologne she couldn’t place, the flicker of something *other* in his gaze."
2"For a moment, the illusion of the charming fixer cracked—raw hunger in his expression, the faintest ripple of inhuman energy in his stance."
3"The silence stretched, heavy with all the things left unsaid—the night he’d vanished, the letters she’d burned, the way her body still responded to his touch like a wound reopening."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount593
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.0387858347386172
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003372681281618887
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean10.5
std7.42
cv0.707
sampleLengths
023
122
218
34
49
523
62
78
819
911
1013
112
125
136
1411
1519
166
1712
1810
199
206
2114
2224
239
2416
255
2612
2714
2817
298
3018
3116
323
3314
346
353
3623
3713
384
3919
4029
413
425
4326
4411
4510
4610
473
486
4911
63.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41304347826086957
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences57
matches
0"Maybe Yu-Fei’s latest box of"
1"Somewhere, a car alarm wailed."
2"Finally, she exhaled."
3"Somewhere below, the clatter of"
4"Then, slowly, she took it."
ratio0.088
44.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences57
matches
0"She’d expected a delivery."
1"His eyes locked onto hers—amber"
2"He tilted his head, cane"
3"His French accent had always"
4"He stepped closer, the cold"
5"she said, too sharp, pacing"
6"His nearness was a physical"
7"She’d forgotten how he made"
8"His thumb brushed her scar,"
9"She flinched away."
10"Her voice cracked"
11"His jaw tightened."
12"He gestured to the scrolls"
13"His cane snapped open with"
14"His mouth quirked."
15"She turned toward the window,"
16"His voice softened, and for"
17"Her voice wavered"
18"He stepped closer, the blade"
19"His hands framed her face,"
ratio0.439
56.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences57
matches
0"Aurora Carter froze with her"
1"Eva’s flat was a tomb"
2"The tabby cat Ptolemy flicked"
3"She’d expected a delivery."
4"His eyes locked onto hers—amber"
5"The scar on her left"
6"The lie curdled in the"
7"He tilted his head, cane"
8"His French accent had always"
9"Ptolemy leapt down, purring as"
10"Aurora crossed her arms, swallowing"
11"He stepped closer, the cold"
12"The door slammed shut behind"
13"she said, too sharp, pacing"
14"Lucien’s cane pressed against her"
15"His nearness was a physical"
16"She’d forgotten how he made"
17"His thumb brushed her scar,"
18"She flinched away."
19"Her voice cracked"
ratio0.807
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He gestured, their edges fraying with age"
1"His cane snapped, the ivory handle splitting to reveal a blade’s edge"
2"He reached, fingers trembling as they traced the crescent scar"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"His cane snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.043
84.3857%