| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "flicked" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "maw" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.29% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 23 | | markdownWords | 53 | | totalWords | 1032 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Warmth, not light. A warning, not a map." | | 1 | "Traitor to your blood," | | 2 | "between" | | 3 | "roots" | | 4 | "snap" | | 5 | "squelch" | | 6 | "it was watching her through veils" | | 7 | "Her mother’s lullaby" | | 8 | "a vine? A hand?" | | 9 | "Same oak." | | 10 | "LAYLA" | | 11 | "answered" | | 12 | "Counterclockwise." | | 13 | "Aurora. Rory. Laila." | | 14 | "Rory." | | 15 | "carved" | | 16 | "DYMAS" | | 17 | "touched" | | 18 | "Eva’s voice, her ex’s voice, her own." | | 19 | "caught." | | 20 | "inverted" | | 21 | "always" | | 22 | "pushed back" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.90% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1026 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | October | 1 | | Birdsong | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Groves | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Birdsong" | | 2 | "Brendan" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Groves" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.769 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.969 | | wordCount | 1032 | | matches | | 0 | "not in sound but in scent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 39.69 | | std | 23.35 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 79 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 38.38% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "were tilting" | | 1 | "was swaying" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "were turning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove exhaled around her—moth-wing shadows, the scent of petrichor masking something older and sweetly metallic." | | 1 | "That alone made her laugh—a brittle huff of air." | | 2 | "The Grove’s flora stood unmoving—yellow gorse, white campion, crocuses the color of bruises." | | 3 | "A twig snapped—not a snap, a *snap* and a *squelch*." | | 4 | "The grove wasn’t full dark—*it was watching her through veils* of colorless hue." | | 5 | "A shape coiled itself beneath the leaves—*a vine?" | | 6 | "No—another oak." | | 7 | "But here, now—the pendant *answered*, and that was leverage." | | 8 | "Her face stared back—hair strung with spider-silk, eyes too wide, too bright." | | 9 | "The faces coalesced into one—her mother, smiling through a crown of gorse, her throat split." | | 10 | "The moss glowed now, electric, spelling out a name across the stone—*DYMAS*." | | 11 | "Its maw split open, not in sound but in scent—decaying apples and Brendan Carter’s pipe smoke." | | 12 | "The fox thing’s laughter rang in her ears, layered—*Eva’s voice, her ex’s voice, her own.* She dodged a boulder that hadn’t been there." | | 13 | "The Groves *always*—" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1041 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same silver-green moss." |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.01921229586935639 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002881844380403458 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 6.83 | | std | 4.27 | | cv | 0.624 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 40.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.2582781456953642 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Their gnarled limbs curved inward" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched on dried" | | 2 | "She paused, chest tight." | | 3 | "It hung in the air," | | 4 | "She checked her wrist." | | 5 | "She’d bled into the hems" | | 6 | "She swallowed and adjusted the" | | 7 | "Her phone inside wouldn’t work" | | 8 | "She took another step." | | 9 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 10 | "Her voice cracked" | | 11 | "She tasted iron." | | 12 | "She tilted her head." | | 13 | "She brushed it away." | | 14 | "Her fingers came back wet." | | 15 | "Her eyes adjusted." | | 16 | "*Her mother’s lullaby*?" | | 17 | "She found the gorse thicker" | | 18 | "Her breath tore through her." | | 19 | "She dove over it, knees" |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind died as Aurora" | | 1 | "Their gnarled limbs curved inward" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove exhaled around" | | 3 | "Her boots crunched on dried" | | 4 | "She paused, chest tight." | | 5 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 6 | "*Warmth, not light." | | 7 | "A warning, not a map.*" | | 8 | "Birdsong had gone silent." | | 9 | "A breath of fog escaped" | | 10 | "It hung in the air," | | 11 | "She checked her wrist." | | 12 | "The crescent scar pulsed in" | | 13 | "That alone made her laugh—a" | | 14 | "The last time that happened," | | 15 | "She’d bled into the hems" | | 16 | "A rustle to the left." | | 17 | "The Grove’s flora stood unmoving—yellow" | | 18 | "She swallowed and adjusted the" | | 19 | "Her phone inside wouldn’t work" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 75.19% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the sky sagged in" | | 1 | "To her left." |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The fox thing’s laughter rang in her ears, layered—*Eva’s voice, her ex’s voice, her own.* She dodged a boulder that hadn’t been there." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |