| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1103 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1103 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "chilled" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 200 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 200 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 202 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1071 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Laila" | | 1 | "run" | | 2 | "they’re wearing your name" | | 3 | "Dymas remembers." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1060 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.28 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Petersham | 1 | | English | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to close around something" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.934 | | wordCount | 1071 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 100 | | mean | 10.71 | | std | 13.87 | | cv | 1.295 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 35 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 26 | | totalSentences | 202 | | ratio | 0.129 | | matches | | 0 | "But she’d felt the tug three nights ago when delivering a special order to a house near Petersham—chilled silence beneath the clink of takeaway containers, that faint hum in her bones she’d learned not to ignore." | | 1 | "And last night, the dream: a woman with eyes like cracked mirrors, standing beneath ancient oaks, whispering a name—*Laila*—that wasn’t hers." | | 2 | "She found the path almost by instinct—off the designated trail, through a split in the hawthorn where the air tasted thick, like swallowing old velvet." | | 3 | "Each one carved with symbols that shifted if she looked too long—a spiral became a mouth, a line became a hand—then settled back into meaningless grooves." | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colour—scarlet pinks, impossible blues—though the ground was bare and hard." | | 5 | "But the dream had been too real—*run*, the woman with fractured eyes had said, *they’re wearing your name*." | | 6 | "Then—sound." | | 7 | "A rustle, sharp and close—right beside her left ear." | | 8 | "Then—again." | | 9 | "But now—the flowers." | | 10 | "The pendant flared—warmth like a small coal." | | 11 | "She spun, elbow up, heart slamming—nothing there." | | 12 | "But the air—thicker now." | | 13 | "And the silence—wrong." | | 14 | "Then—movement in the trees." | | 15 | "It pointed—not at her." | | 16 | "But the flowers—all at once—closed." | | 17 | "Just the sense—solid, undeniable—that something paced her, just beyond sight, just inside the tree line." | | 18 | "The crescent-shaped scar—faint, old—was hot." | | 19 | "The pendant flared—hot against her chest." | | 20 | "And then, a name—not hers, but known—whispered on the air." | | 21 | "Hollows opened in the trunk—eyes, dark and wet." | | 22 | "It turned its head—too far, too wrong—and looked at the others." | | 23 | "The pendant burned now—hot enough to sting." | | 24 | "The city’s distant hum—just beyond." | | 25 | "But the air between them shimmered—once—like heat off asphalt." |
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| 74.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1095 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay cool against her" | | 1 | "close—right beside her" |
| | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.05570776255707763 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005479452054794521 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 202 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 202 | | mean | 5.3 | | std | 5.02 | | cv | 0.946 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 53.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3613861386138614 | | totalSentences | 202 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the park rangers didn’t" | | 1 | "Then, the standing stones." | | 2 | "Even the rain stopped at" | | 3 | "Just that faint, floral stench" | | 4 | "Just the oaks, their bark" | | 5 | "Then, from the edge of" | | 6 | "Too many limbs." | | 7 | "Even her own breath sounded" | | 8 | "Then—movement in the trees." | | 9 | "Too many joints." | | 10 | "Then opened again." | | 11 | "Just the sense—solid, undeniable—that something" |
| | ratio | 0.084 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her collar higher," | | 1 | "She knew the Grove wasn’t" | | 2 | "It was the third time" | | 3 | "She found the path almost" | | 4 | "They were oak, impossibly tall," | | 5 | "It took her breath." | | 6 | "She counted her breaths." | | 7 | "Her torchlight cut a weak" | | 8 | "She didn’t need to be" | | 9 | "She could turn back." | | 10 | "She moved deeper." | | 11 | "She took out her phone." | | 12 | "She’d been here five minutes." | | 13 | "She flinched, hand flying up." | | 14 | "Her breath came faster." | | 15 | "She forced it slow." | | 16 | "She stepped toward the centre" | | 17 | "She turned, slow, scanning the" | | 18 | "They hadn’t been facing her" | | 19 | "They were now." |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had started just as" | | 1 | "She pulled her collar higher," | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cool" | | 3 | "She knew the Grove wasn’t" | | 4 | "The pendant had pulsed once," | | 5 | "It was the third time" | | 6 | "Aurora didn’t believe in coincidences." | | 7 | "She found the path almost" | | 8 | "The trees here bent oddly," | | 9 | "They were oak, impossibly tall," | | 10 | "Each one carved with symbols" | | 11 | "It took her breath." | | 12 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colour—scarlet" | | 13 | "The air smelled sweet, cloying," | | 14 | "Time had gone quiet." | | 15 | "The distant hum of the" | | 16 | "Aurora stepped through." | | 17 | "The pendant warmed against her" | | 18 | "She counted her breaths." | | 19 | "The silence pressed in, dense" |
| | ratio | 0.573 | |
| 69.93% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left." | | 1 | "Now the petals were different" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees here bent oddly, trunks spiralling inward as if trying to close around something." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |