| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.395 | | leniency | 0.791 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |
| 82.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1113 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1098 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "outside" | | 1 | "under" | | 2 | "live" | | 3 | "thrive" | | 4 | "it" | | 5 | "detect" | | 6 | "anchors" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could respond, Nyx hissed—a sound like wind through teeth." |
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| 65.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 770 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 8 | | Rory | 13 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.656 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 8.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though listening to something distant" | | 1 | "not quite" | | 2 | "felt like packed loam, but springy, ali" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.643 | | wordCount | 1098 | | matches | | 0 | "not with cold, but with something golden" | | 1 | "not with hunger, but with something sharper" | | 2 | "not with insects, but with a low, resonant tone, like a bell struck long ago" | | 3 | "not by chains, but by desire" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 19.61 | | std | 17.22 | | cv | 0.878 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was shaped" | | 2 | "was layered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged not with cold, but with something golden—particles drifting through the light like dust in temple beams." | | 1 | "Behind her, the ivy-choked stone arch they’d passed through still stood, though the park beyond—Richmond Park—was gone." | | 2 | "One second solid, tall and shadowed with the faint violet gleam of their eyes; the next, dissolving into smoke that curled along the ground before pulling itself back upright." | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant, resting against her collarbone, pulsed once—warm, insistent." | | 4 | "Ahead, the land sloped gently, revealing an orchard—trees heavy with fruit that glistened unnaturally, colors shifting between purple and gold as the light touched them." | | 5 | "Not just fruit—something deeper, richer." | | 6 | "The air hummed—not with insects, but with a low, resonant tone, like a bell struck long ago and still vibrating." | | 7 | "“The trees are bound with the spirits of gluttons. They feed the land. In return, they taste eternity in a single bite.” They reached out, ghost fingers brushing a low-hanging fruit—round, black as ink, gleaming like oil." | | 8 | "A figure stood between two trees—one who hadn’t been there a second before." | | 9 | "Before she could respond, Nyx hissed—a sound like wind through teeth." | | 10 | "They wore robes of stitched leaves and flame-colored silk, their faces obscured by masks carved from fruitwood—some grinning, others weeping, mouths open wide." | | 11 | "When it spoke, its voice was layered—dozens of whispers stacked like pages." | | 12 | "Something about the shape—too sharp, too deliberate—tugged at her memory." |
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| 92.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 789 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Tall, slender, silver hair" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04182509505703422 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008871989860583017 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 8.45 | | std | 6.91 | | cv | 0.818 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 76.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.47692307692307695 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Just amber sky and silence," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged not with" | | 1 | "Their voice was dry, like" | | 2 | "She touched it." | | 3 | "It felt like packed loam," | | 4 | "Her stomach twisted, not with" | | 5 | "They moved forward, boots sinking" | | 6 | "Their bark pulsed faintly, in" | | 7 | "They reached out, ghost fingers" | | 8 | "It came from nowhere." | | 9 | "She wore a gown of" | | 10 | "she said, her voice melodic," | | 11 | "She gestured toward the orchard," | | 12 | "They wore robes of stitched" | | 13 | "She touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 14 | "She looked at the Heartstone." | | 15 | "It pulsed again." |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 74.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "The next, warmth wrapped around" | | 2 | "Rory’s fingers uncurled from the" | | 3 | "Her breath fogged not with" | | 4 | "Eva cursed under her breath." | | 5 | "Rory glanced at her." | | 6 | "Eva stood rigid, eyes wide," | | 7 | "Nyx stepped forward, their form" | | 8 | "One second solid, tall and" | | 9 | "Their voice was dry, like" | | 10 | "Rory lifted her hand." | | 11 | "The Heartstone Pendant, resting against" | | 12 | "She touched it." | | 13 | "The crimson gem glowed faintly" | | 14 | "Nyx murmured, turning their head" | | 15 | "Rory stepped forward." | | 16 | "The ground wasn’t earth, not" | | 17 | "It felt like packed loam," | | 18 | "The scent hit her next." | | 19 | "Her stomach twisted, not with" |
| | ratio | 0.77 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could respond, Nyx" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the land sloped gently, revealing an orchard—trees heavy with fruit that glistened unnaturally, colors shifting between purple and gold as the light touc…" | | 1 | "Beyond it, a low stone wall, overgrown with vines that slithered like they were breathing." |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice melodic, each word curling like steam" | | 1 | "She gestured, but her hand kept moving, past the trees, past the wall, toward the distant smoke of chimneys and spires rising beyond the valley" |
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| 80.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.326 | | leniency | 0.651 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |