| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn stepped around [around]" | | 1 | "Reynolds asked dryly [dryly]" | | 2 | "Quinn said coldly [coldly]" | | 3 | "Quinn finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |
| 82.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "coldly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "furrowed" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "aligned" | | 8 | "practiced ease" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "grave" | | 11 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1125 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "away" | | 1 | "drawn" | | 2 | "this" | | 3 | "targeted" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.99% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 846 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.3 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Thames | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Reynolds | 4 | | Compass | 5 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Market" | | 1 | "Detective" | | 2 | "Harlow" | | 3 | "Quinn" | | 4 | "Camden" | | 5 | "Reynolds" | | 6 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.85 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if it had been plucked from existence entirely" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.667 | | wordCount | 1125 | | matches | | 0 | "not physically but" | | 1 | "not written, not etched, but *drawn* in motion" | | 2 | "not etched, but *drawn* in motion" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 37.5 | | std | 25.98 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 78 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 70 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 48 |
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| 91.41% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "been torn" | | 1 | "been dragged" | | 2 | "been plucked" | | 3 | "was attuned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.124 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden felt frozen in a half-remembered dream—dust motes caught in shafts of moonlight through cracked tiles, the acrid tang of mildew thick enough to choke on." | | 1 | "His collar had been torn open, revealing a series of parallel slashes—shallow but precise—as if something sharp had been dragged down his sternum before he died." | | 2 | "She noticed other oddities now—how clean the floor was around the corpse, despite the grime coating everything else." | | 3 | "And something about the cut—the angle—felt different." | | 4 | "The Market had left no signs of having moved on yet—no broken glass, no crushed crates, no lingering scents of alchemical smoke or exotic incense." | | 5 | "She hadn’t thought to use it since arriving, but curiosity had its limits—or rather, patience did." | | 6 | "Yet now, Quinn could almost see the energy curling off the body like heat haze—faint, but definitely there." | | 7 | "She flipped open her case notes—hadn’t the last victim also shown a slight pull from the Compass?" | | 8 | "If anything, the lines mimicked sigils—not written, not etched, but *drawn* in motion." | | 9 | "A memory surfaced unbidden—DS Morris’s last case." | | 10 | "Time to chase shadows—and maybe, just maybe, catch them before they caught her instead." |
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| 85.15% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 860 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.056976744186046514 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019767441860465116 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 12.64 | | std | 8.59 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 89.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5617977528089888 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a look of confusion" | | 1 | "Too precise for anything human." | | 2 | "Instead, she reached into her" | | 3 | "Then there was the absence" |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots echoed against the" | | 1 | "His collar had been torn" | | 2 | "she said, brushing her gloved" | | 3 | "He’d always been quicker to" | | 4 | "She noticed other oddities now—how" | | 5 | "She crouched again, tracing a" | | 6 | "They weren’t quite even." | | 7 | "It wasn't just blood on" | | 8 | "His brow furrowed slightly." | | 9 | "He exhaled slowly." | | 10 | "It was as if it" | | 11 | "She hadn’t thought to use" | | 12 | "It had marked him." | | 13 | "She flipped open her case" | | 14 | "She ignored him." | | 15 | "It had claimed he'd bled" | | 16 | "He leaned forward." | | 17 | "She let that sit for" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil Market had vanished" | | 1 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 2 | "Her boots echoed against the" | | 3 | "Quinn knelt beside the body." | | 4 | "A man, late thirties, lying" | | 5 | "His collar had been torn" | | 6 | "Quinn didn’t move for a" | | 7 | "she said, brushing her gloved" | | 8 | "Reynolds tilted his head, arms" | | 9 | "He’d always been quicker to" | | 10 | "Quinn stepped around the body," | | 11 | "She noticed other oddities now—how" | | 12 | "She crouched again, tracing a" | | 13 | "They weren’t quite even." | | 14 | "It wasn't just blood on" | | 15 | "Reynolds asked dryly" | | 16 | "His brow furrowed slightly." | | 17 | "Quinn said coldly" | | 18 | "He exhaled slowly." | | 19 | "Reynolds didn't argue." |
| | ratio | 0.556 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "As if something within the" | | 1 | "If anything, the lines mimicked" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "His collar had been torn open, revealing a series of parallel slashes—shallow but precise—as if something sharp had been dragged down his sternum before he died…" | | 1 | "Kneeling closer this time, she took careful measurements of the distance from each wound to the nearest edge of the corpse’s torso, noting the exact angles each…" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn finally said, voice calm but clipped" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |