| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.446 | | leniency | 0.893 | | rawRatio | 0.08 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 85.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigating" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "cascading" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "tinged" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 170 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 25 | | totalWords | 1380 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "Ah. You’re here." | | 2 | "She leaves no footprints when she walks." | | 3 | "they" | | 4 | "unbecame" | | 5 | "here" | | 6 | "alive" | | 7 | "black" | | 8 | "called" | | 9 | "memory" | | 10 | "remembered" | | 11 | "You are needed. You are chosen." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 73 | | wordCount | 1003 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Sheen | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Ahead | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Eva | 11 | | Earth | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 13 | | Fae | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Gluttony" | | 6 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Sheen" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.503 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like old wine and scorched sugar" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.725 | | wordCount | 1380 | | matches | | 0 | "not heard but *remembered*: *You are needed" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 82 | | mean | 16.83 | | std | 15.13 | | cv | 0.899 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 46 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was navigating" | | 1 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 170 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "One second, she was navigating the familiar gravel path near Sheen, the next—a breath, a blink—and the world had softened at the edges." | | 1 | "Her scar—the crescent on her left wrist—tingled, warm and insistent." | | 2 | "Amber light spilled through the canopy above, though the sky wasn't amber—hadn’t been all day." | | 3 | "At the center of the ring, the air wavered—like heat off pavement, but cold, and shimmering with impossible colors." | | 4 | "She gasped, pulling back, but the silver pollen flared—and then settled." | | 5 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible arrangements—carnations the size of dinner plates unfurling in spirals, their centers filled with tiny, star-like pinpricks of light." | | 6 | "And there—half-hidden behind a curtain of willow-like branches dripping with silver leaves—stood a figure." | | 7 | "Her eyes—lavender, like frost on stone—settled first on Rory, then flicked to Nyx, then Eva, then back." | | 8 | "“The keybearer,” she said, her voice layered—like wind, water, and distant bells." | | 9 | "Further in the grove, something moved—a flicker between trees." | | 10 | "In the shifting light, they looked more fragile than usual—less shadow, more absence." | | 11 | "The Heartstone flared—warm, urgent." | | 12 | "The amber light returned—but sharper, denser." | | 13 | "Beyond, terraced gardens of citrus and figs, orchards of trees bearing fruit no Earth orchard could produce—pomegranates split open to reveal tiny pulsing flames inside, peaches with skins like polished opals." | | 14 | "The scent was overwhelming—rich, intoxicating, and beneath it, just slightly, the tang of something *alive* still." | | 15 | "Not dark—*black*, like pits." | | 16 | "Then she felt it—the tug." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1025 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tall, ageless, silver hair" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.0351219512195122 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007804878048780488 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 170 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 170 | | mean | 8.12 | | std | 5.97 | | cv | 0.735 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 54.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.35294117647058826 | | totalSentences | 170 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe they were." | | 1 | "Just a quiet realignment, as" | | 2 | "Further in the grove, something" | | 3 | "Then she felt it—the tug." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Her scar—the crescent on her" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 2 | "they whispered, the sound like" | | 3 | "It was colder than usual." | | 4 | "She gasped, pulling back, but" | | 5 | "They stepped into the circle." | | 6 | "They stood in a grove." | | 7 | "She was tall, ageless, silver" | | 8 | "Her feet hovered an inch" | | 9 | "Her eyes—lavender, like frost on" | | 10 | "she said, her voice layered—like" | | 11 | "Her gaze rested on Eva" | | 12 | "Her eyes dropped to the" | | 13 | "It hadn’t been there before." | | 14 | "They stepped out of the" | | 15 | "His face was gaunt, hollowed" | | 16 | "He looked up." | | 17 | "His eyes were black." | | 18 | "he said, voice a croak" | | 19 | "His gaze slid to Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.219 | |
| 91.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "One second, she was navigating" | | 2 | "The air tasted different: sweeter," | | 3 | "Eva started, voice hushed, her" | | 4 | "Rory didn’t answer." | | 5 | "Her scar—the crescent on her" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant at her" | | 7 | "Amber light spilled through the" | | 8 | "The sun, if it existed" | | 9 | "Nyx stepped beside her, their" | | 10 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 11 | "they whispered, the sound like" | | 12 | "Rory touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 13 | "It was colder than usual." | | 14 | "Eva reached for the nearest" | | 15 | "Nyx murmured, but it was" | | 16 | "The vine wound around Eva’s" | | 17 | "She gasped, pulling back, but" | | 18 | "The vine released her." | | 19 | "Eva stared at her skin." |
| | ratio | 0.737 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it was damp, tinged" | | 1 | "To the pendant." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees of Richmond Park thinned behind them as Rory stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into dew-heavy moss that hadn’t been there a moment ago." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed in response, a slow, rhythmic warmth that matched the beat of her pulse." | | 2 | "The sun, if it existed here, sat low and heavy, casting long, liquid shadows that didn't behave like natural ones." | | 3 | "Between them, stone pillars rose from the earth, covered in vines that shimmered with silver pollen." | | 4 | "The moss underfoot glowed faintly, a pale green pulse beneath their feet, as though the earth itself had a heartbeat." | | 5 | "Crystal goblets, silver platters piled with food that steamed with its own light." |
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| 65.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva started, voice hushed, her fingers tightening around Rory’s wrist" | | 1 | "Rory said, dread pooling in her stomach" | | 2 | "Nyx corrected, voice tight" |
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| 42.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |