| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1199 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1199 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "marble" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "desire" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1177 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "was" | | 1 | "kitchen" | | 2 | "alive" | | 3 | "Want" | | 4 | "need" | | 5 | "taste" | | 6 | "Weak" | | 7 | "things" | | 8 | "Evan’s" | | 9 | "crave" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She focused on the memory—the chipped mug, the thin steam, Eva laughing at how she used three sugars even then." |
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| 65.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1002 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae | 2 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.652 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like fossilized spice: cinnamon sw" | | 1 | "looked like dough, hardened and gilded" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 18.68 | | std | 19.43 | | cv | 1.04 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 85 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 67 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "It just *was*—a constant, smoldering twilight that painted the world in gold and rust." | | 1 | "Their form flickered, edges bleeding into the long shadows cast by the orchard trees—trees that bent at impossible angles, their bark black and smooth as obsidian, their fruit swollen and luminous, glowing faintly from within." | | 2 | "It came from ahead—beyond the orchard, where marble columns rose between rows of cultivated vines heavy with grapes the color of bruises." | | 3 | "Her pendant—a tiny crimson stone on a silver chain—pressed warm against her collarbone." | | 4 | "The ground changed underfoot—lush moss gave way to polished flagstones veined with streaks of something that looked like fossilized spice: cinnamon swirls, crushed saffron, veins of dried paprika embedded in the stone." | | 5 | "A shape flickered at the edge of vision—an outline in the distance, moving between the trees." | | 6 | "A feast hall sprawled ahead—long tables carved from petrified fig trees, set with plates that shimmered like oil on water." | | 7 | "Their hands—when Rory caught a glimpse—were too many, too long, fingers clicking like tongs." | | 8 | "Smoke curled from a hundred chimneys, each trail different—some smelled of chocolate, others of burnt hair, of wet moss, of something metallic and old." | | 9 | "Something scuttled behind a tree—small, fast, its limbs ending in tiny ladles." | | 10 | "A slice of warm bread, slathered in butter—she could *taste* it, sudden and sharp." | | 11 | "She focused on the memory—the chipped mug, the thin steam, Eva laughing at how she used three sugars even then." | | 12 | "Rory noticed now—some plates held *things* that moved." | | 13 | "A door stood at the back of the hall—tall, wide, its surface carved with scenes of feasting, each figure’s face distorted, mouths stretched too wide, eyes rolled back in ecstasy or agony." | | 14 | "The sweetness receded, replaced by something older—dust, ink, the metallic tang of preserved things." | | 15 | "Another held eyes—dozens, floating in a golden brine, some still blinking." | | 16 | "But then—further in—a section untouched by grotesquery." | | 17 | "The script on the pages shifted as she looked at it—letters forming, dissolving, rearranging into languages she almost recognized." | | 18 | "Instead, it showed her kneeling in a kitchen, sobbing, a man’s voice—*Evan’s*—hissing behind her." | | 19 | "Then—her flat above Silas’ bar, empty." | | 20 | "And the book on the pedestal—its pages had begun to turn on their own." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 972 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03806584362139918 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00205761316872428 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 7.69 | | std | 6.88 | | cv | 0.895 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 61.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.39215686274509803 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 93.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it showed her kneeling" | | 1 | "Then it shifted: her hand" | | 2 | "Then—her flat above" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn’t set, Rory realized." | | 1 | "It just *was*—a constant, smoldering" | | 2 | "She shifted the worn satchel" | | 3 | "she said, voice tight" | | 4 | "She stood a few paces" | | 5 | "Their form flickered, edges bleeding" | | 6 | "She didn’t touch it." | | 7 | "It came from ahead—beyond the" | | 8 | "Her pendant—a tiny crimson stone" | | 9 | "It had flared when the" | | 10 | "They moved on." | | 11 | "Her lungs worked harder." | | 12 | "It soaked in." | | 13 | "They passed under an archway" | | 14 | "Their hands—when Rory caught a" | | 15 | "Its walls looked made of" | | 16 | "She blinked hard." | | 17 | "She pressed it into Rory’s" | | 18 | "It was cool." | | 19 | "She focused on the memory—the" |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 76.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky of Dymas" | | 1 | "It didn’t set, Rory realized." | | 2 | "It just *was*—a constant, smoldering" | | 3 | "The air tasted thick, sweet" | | 4 | "She shifted the worn satchel" | | 5 | "she said, voice tight" | | 6 | "Eva didn’t flinch." | | 7 | "She stood a few paces" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted between them, a" | | 9 | "Their form flickered, edges bleeding" | | 10 | "She didn’t touch it." | | 11 | "Nyx whispered, the sound barely" | | 12 | "A low chime echoed through" | | 13 | "It came from ahead—beyond the" | | 14 | "Her pendant—a tiny crimson stone" | | 15 | "It had flared when the" | | 16 | "Eva said, stepping forward" | | 17 | "They moved on." | | 18 | "The ground changed underfoot—lush moss" | | 19 | "The air thickened further." |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground changed underfoot—lush moss gave way to polished flagstones veined with streaks of something that looked like fossilized spice: cinnamon swirls, crus…" | | 1 | "A feast hall sprawled ahead—long tables carved from petrified fig trees, set with plates that shimmered like oil on water." | | 2 | "A structure of crooked angles and balconies that folded into themselves, towers spiraling like roasted filaments." | | 3 | "One dish bubbled, forming a tiny face that mouthed silence before dissolving." |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice tight" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, the sound barely more than air brushing stone" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Eva snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |