Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ8TW4AA46K3YSMZRZ3N7SR

Run Details

Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.000701
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the threshold of the abandoned Tube station, her boot heel echoing against the grime-smeared tiles. The Veil Market reeked of damp concrete and something sharper—burnt sage, perhaps, or the acrid tang of alchemical residue. She adjusted her leather watch, its cracked face flickering as a neon sign above the entrance sputtered to life, casting jagged light over the throng of shadow-clad traders. A bone token hung from her belt, cold against her side; she’d traded a half-sentence of classified police protocol to gain entry. “Quinn,” came a voice laced with equal parts relief and trepidation. Eva Kowalski emerged from a stall draped in tattered velvet, her round glasses glinting as she tucked a loose curl behind her left ear. “You’re early. The rift’s still unstable.” “Dead bodies don’t wait for stable rifts,” Quinn shot back, already scanning the scene beyond the market’s chaos. A white van was parked haphazardly near the escalator stairs, its sides scuffed with symbols that made her stomach tighten. Forensics had declared the victim’s cause of death “undetermined,” but the official report missed the faint shimmer along the corpse’s collarbone—an energy signature she’d seen before, the night her partner had stepped through an invisible threshold and vanished. Eva fell into step beside her, her worn satchel slapping against her hip. “DS Reynolds’ team closed off the area. They think it’s a mugging gone wrong.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. Reynolds—promoted two years ago, ever since she’d refused to sign off on his botched investigation into the Holloway Road teleportation case. “Show me.” The van’s doors swung open to reveal a figure slumped against the back wall, their face obscured by a sheet. Quinn’s boots crunched over shattered glass as she approached, her eyes catching on the floor. No blood. Not a single drop. The victim had been wrapped in a thick, dark fabric stitched with spiral patterns that seemed to pulse under the flickering van lights. Reynolds leaned against the doorframe, his tie loosened, face pinched. “Quinn. There’s no need to gawk.” “The cause of death?” she asked, ignoring him as she knelt. Her gloves brushed the edge of the fabric, and a ripple of static climbed her arm. Supernatural—definitely. The sigils weren’t just decorative. They were containment. “Blunt force trauma. Concussion.” Reynolds gestured to the lump beneath the sheet. “Witnesses say he argued with someone near the escalator, then collapsed.” Eva crouched opposite her, peering at the material. “This is a Shade weave. They use it to mask residual energy. Someone didn’t want this body found, or at least not understood.” Quinn ignored the prickle of pride in Eva’s tone. Her friend had spent years buried in the British Museum’s archives, but tonight her expertise was needed here. “Who was it?” Reynolds hesitated. “A trader. Romano Vex. Sold banned alchemical compounds.” He cleared his throat. “We think he had enemies in the Market.” “Or he stumbled onto something he wasn’t supposed to.” Quinn’s fingers traced the hem of the fabric, noting how the threads frayed unevenly—like they were being eaten from the inside. She reached for her belt, unclipping the Veil Compass. The brass casing was warm in her palm, its needle spinning wildly before locking toward the van’s left wall. Eva inhaled sharply. “There’s a rift near the escalator. I thought it was a trick of the light earlier…” Quinn stood abruptly, the compass still humming against her palm. “The body wasn’t abandoned here. It was left *after* the rift closed.” She turned to Reynolds, who was already shaking his head. “We’ve processed the scene. No anomalies.” “And the lack of blood?” Eva pressed. “The weave? The fact that your victim was arguing with someone who vanished mid-sentence, according to two witnesses?” Reynolds’s jaw tightened. “Superstitions.” Quinn’s hand closed around his wrist, cold steel pressing into his flesh. Her voice dropped to a whisper. “You think this is a mugging, you’ll miss the next body. Or the one after that.” She released him and strode toward the escalator, the compass needle quivering ahead. The air grew colder as she climbed the abandoned stairs, each step groaning beneath her. Eva followed, her breath visible now, the satchel swinging like a pendulum. At the landing, Quinn stopped. The graffiti on the wall had changed since her last visit—swirling patterns overlaid with fresh red paint. A map. “There,” Eva said, pointing to a smear beneath the third stair. “A handprint. Partial, but…” She pulled a tissue from her pocket, gently lifting the imprint. “This isn’t human. See the ridges? They’re too dense. Probably Shade—same species that made your compass.” Quinn’s mind raced. Shade artisans were reclusive, their crafts forbidden by the Metropolitan Police’s Unexplained Phenomena Division. If someone had access to their work, they weren’t just a rogue trader. They were someone with deep ties to the Veil. Her watch beeped—a text from forensics. She scanned the message, her stomach sinking. No trace of Romano Vex’s DNA on the van’s interior. As if he’d disintegrated mid-air. “Eva,” she said, voice taut. “You said the rift was near the escalator?” “Right where the handprint is. It’s tiny, almost invisible unless you’re looking for it.” Quinn crouched, her eyes adjusting to the dimness. There. A hairline fracture in the air, shimmering like heat haze. She held the compass steady. The needle shuddered, then pointed into the void. “It’s not closed,” she murmured. “It’s *holding*.” Eva crouched beside her. “Like a trapdoor?” “Or a prison.” Quinn’s mind reeled. The spirals on the van’s body, the containment weave, the Shade craftsmanship—someone had been trying to lock something in, and the rift was the key. But if the rift was still active, then Romano hadn’t died from a fall or a hit to the head. He’d been *pulled* through. Reynolds’s voice crackled behind them. “Enough, Quinn. We’ve got this.” She turned slowly, her hand brushing the cold wall. “You’ve got a corpse and a mystery you don’t understand. I’ve got a pattern. Romano didn’t kill himself, Reynolds. He was bait.” The silence that followed was broken only by the distant hum of the compass, its needle trembling as if listening to a voice only it could hear. Eva reached into her satchel, pulling out a notebook. “The next full moon is in three days. The Market moves then. If the Weave’s still active, the Shade might come for it.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “Or someone else will. We need to find out who left the trap open.” Reynolds stepped forward, his face flushed. “You’re speculating.” “I’m deducing,” she snapped. “And if you don’t want your next report to include a serial supernatural murderer, you’ll let me run this.” For a moment, Reynolds hesitated. Then, with a stiff nod, he turned on his heel. When he was gone, Eva exhaled. “You’re scared, aren’t you?” Quinn’s hand closed around her watch, the leather worn to nothing between her fingers. “Scared?” “You lost Morris to this. You think every missing piece is another step toward that door.” Quinn didn’t answer. Instead, she pressed the compass against the rift, watching as the needle jerked violently, tracing a path down the stairs and into the Market’s depths. “Then we go deeper,” she said. “And we close it ourselves.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"trepidation"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"processed"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"trepidation"
2"velvet"
3"glinting"
4"scanning"
5"stomach"
6"shattered"
7"pulse"
8"traced"
9"processed"
10"whisper"
11"raced"
12"scanned"
13"silence"
14"tracing"
15"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
72.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1203
ratio0.002
matches
0"after"
1"holding"
2"pulled"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount850
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tube1
Veil3
Market2
Eva11
Kowalski1
Holloway1
Road1
British1
Museum1
Compass1
Reynolds9
Metropolitan1
Police1
Unexplained1
Phenomena1
Division1
Romano2
Vex1
Shade2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Museum"
5"Compass"
6"Reynolds"
7"Police"
8"Romano"
9"Vex"
places
0"Veil"
1"Market"
2"Holloway"
3"Road"
4"British"
globalScore0.618
windowScore0.833
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to pulse under the flickering van lights"
1"as if listening to a voice only it could hear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1203
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean27.98
std18.96
cv0.678
sampleLengths
089
141
276
327
426
564
616
736
823
931
1030
1122
1258
1319
1432
156
1625
174
1847
1951
2042
2139
2228
2313
2414
2532
267
277
2851
294
3010
3131
3227
3332
3417
358
3623
3715
3810
3915
4016
4128
4211
79.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences81
matches
0"was parked"
1"been wrapped"
2"being eaten"
3"been *pulled"
4"was broken"
5"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was already shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences108
ratio0.083
matches
0"The Veil Market reeked of damp concrete and something sharper—burnt sage, perhaps, or the acrid tang of alchemical residue."
1"A bone token hung from her belt, cold against her side; she’d traded a half-sentence of classified police protocol to gain entry."
2"Forensics had declared the victim’s cause of death “undetermined,” but the official report missed the faint shimmer along the corpse’s collarbone—an energy signature she’d seen before, the night her partner had stepped through an invisible threshold and vanished."
3"Reynolds—promoted two years ago, ever since she’d refused to sign off on his botched investigation into the Holloway Road teleportation case."
4"Supernatural—definitely."
5"“Or he stumbled onto something he wasn’t supposed to.” Quinn’s fingers traced the hem of the fabric, noting how the threads frayed unevenly—like they were being eaten from the inside."
6"The graffiti on the wall had changed since her last visit—swirling patterns overlaid with fresh red paint."
7"Her watch beeped—a text from forensics."
8"The spirals on the van’s body, the containment weave, the Shade craftsmanship—someone had been trying to lock something in, and the rift was the key."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount861
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.0313588850174216
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011614401858304297
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.14
std7.88
cv0.708
sampleLengths
020
119
228
322
411
524
66
718
820
938
1013
1114
123
1321
142
1520
1615
172
184
1923
2010
216
2211
2316
241
255
263
2712
2811
298
3023
319
3218
333
342
3512
368
3730
389
3919
403
4116
4210
4322
446
457
4618
473
481
4912
63.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3888888888888889
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners42
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then, with a stiff nod,"
1"Instead, she pressed the compass"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences72
matches
0"She adjusted her leather watch,"
1"she asked, ignoring him as"
2"Her gloves brushed the edge"
3"They were containment."
4"Her friend had spent years"
5"He cleared his throat"
6"She reached for her belt,"
7"She turned to Reynolds, who"
8"Her voice dropped to a"
9"She released him and strode"
10"She pulled a tissue from"
11"They were someone with deep"
12"Her watch beeped—a text from"
13"She scanned the message, her"
14"she said, voice taut"
15"She held the compass steady."
16"He’d been *pulled* through."
17"She turned slowly, her hand"
ratio0.25
36.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences72
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
1"The Veil Market reeked of"
2"She adjusted her leather watch,"
3"A bone token hung from"
4"Eva Kowalski emerged from a"
5"Quinn shot back, already scanning"
6"A white van was parked"
7"Forensics had declared the victim’s"
8"Eva fell into step beside"
9"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
10"Reynolds—promoted two years ago, ever"
11"The van’s doors swung open"
12"Quinn’s boots crunched over shattered"
13"The victim had been wrapped"
14"Reynolds leaned against the doorframe,"
15"she asked, ignoring him as"
16"Her gloves brushed the edge"
17"The sigils weren’t just decorative."
18"They were containment."
19"Reynolds gestured to the lump"
ratio0.847
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"If someone had access to"
1"As if he’d disintegrated mid-air."
2"When he was gone, Eva"
ratio0.042
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A white van was parked haphazardly near the escalator stairs, its sides scuffed with symbols that made her stomach tighten."
1"The victim had been wrapped in a thick, dark fabric stitched with spiral patterns that seemed to pulse under the flickering van lights."
2"The brass casing was warm in her palm, its needle spinning wildly before locking toward the van’s left wall."
3"The silence that followed was broken only by the distant hum of the compass, its needle trembling as if listening to a voice only it could hear."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She released, the compass needle quivering ahead"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Forensics had (have)"
1"Eva pressed (press)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
82.7200%