| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.733 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 69.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 817 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 817 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 814 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 534 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Vancouver | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "Vancouver" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like old leather and lavender ince" | | 1 | "appeared newly printed modern copies of works on magic systems and cross-realm treaties" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 814 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 71.81% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 28.07 | | std | 11.26 | | cv | 0.401 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 27 |
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| 98.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 98 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "A sliver of light cut through the alley’s usual dimness, revealing enough for her to see that silhouetted frame leaning against the threshold—sleek curves and a cigarette between his fingers." | | 1 | "His chuckle carried a note of amusement, but also something else—something edged, like a blade kept just inside someone’s ribs." | | 2 | "It hung between them like smoke—this history neither could erase or pretend never existed." | | 3 | "There was always hesitation with him—like he weighed his words in gold coins before handing them back, afraid of their weight." |
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| 94.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 538 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.046468401486988845 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013011152416356878 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 11 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 86.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5405405405405406 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere offscreen, Ptolemy chose that" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice was low, smoky" | | 1 | "She stepped around him, pushing" | | 2 | "His chuckle carried a note" | | 3 | "He flicked ash into the" | | 4 | "he asked, nodding toward the" | | 5 | "She crossed her arms." | | 6 | "He let out a slow" | | 7 | "Her voice was steady, but" | | 8 | "His eyes drifted briefly to" | | 9 | "It was older than that." | | 10 | "He cleared his throat." | | 11 | "It hung between them like" | | 12 | "It lived under their ribs," | | 13 | "she pressed, shifting closer" | | 14 | "He took a deep breath." | | 15 | "he corrected, stepping into her" | | 16 | "She lifted her chin." | | 17 | "She hated when he did" | | 18 | "he shot back" | | 19 | "Her hands went to her" |
| | ratio | 0.56 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open before" | | 1 | "A sliver of light cut" | | 2 | "Smoke curled in the still" | | 3 | "Lucien said, not moving from" | | 4 | "His voice was low, smoky" | | 5 | "Rory didn’t answer right away." | | 6 | "She stepped around him, pushing" | | 7 | "The deadbolt clicked into place" | | 8 | "His chuckle carried a note" | | 9 | "He flicked ash into the" | | 10 | "Eva’s flat smelled like old" | | 11 | "That hadn’t changed." | | 12 | "Neither had the way the" | | 13 | "Others were stacked so high" | | 14 | "Lucien took a deliberate step" | | 15 | "Some appeared newly printed, modern" | | 16 | "he asked, nodding toward the" | | 17 | "She crossed her arms." | | 18 | "He let out a slow" | | 19 | "Her voice was steady, but" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien said, not moving from the doorway" | | 1 | "she repeated, her eyes flashing with fire" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she pressed (press)" | | 1 | "he corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "she repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |