Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ90038GBQQZC1J6VMB5JV7

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Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.001708
Provider:
Groq

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green glow of The Raven’s Nest sign buzzed above the soot-streaked street, its faded letters bleakening under the London mist. Aurora Carter hesitated at the threshold, her shoulder-length black hair slicked by the rain. She tugged her Golden Empress delivery jacket tighter, the embroidered golden dragon pressing into her collarbone like a brand. Inside, the bar was a sanctuary of wood and low light—oak beams, amber lanterns, the clatter of ice in a cocktail shaker. She’d passed this place every night since moving into the flat above, yet had never stepped inside until now. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with the precision of a man accustomed to waiting. His grey-streaked auburn hair was combed back, the limp in his left leg barely perceptible as he shifted weight onto his right. His gaze flicked up from the glass, settling on Aurora with a slow recognition that made her throat tighten. He set the glass down. “Rory Carter.” She stepped inside before she could second-guess. “Silas Blackwood.” The name felt like a key turning in a lock she’d forgotten existed. He gestured to a stool at the bar, his silver signet ring catching the light as he did. The stool was worn leather, stained by years of spilled pints. She sat, the barkeep sliding her a whiskey she hadn’t ordered. Silas lowered himself into the adjacent seat, his knee giving a faint hitch as he landed. “You were supposed to be a solicitor,” he said. Not an accusation—curiosity, the kind that aged like fine brandy. Aurora traced the rim of her glass. The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked out from her sleeve. “Cardiff Uni said I had potential. Dad said the same. Mom just kept making tea, like that’d make it all better.” She laughed, sharp and quick. “Turned out my potential was better suited to dodging taxis in the dead of night.” Silas didn’t smile. He studied her instead, the way she kept her hands still, the way her right shoulder shifted when she exhaled. She’d always hated that people read too much into little things. “You ran,” he said. “I walked. Took a lot of stairs.” Aurora gestured outside, where the rain had begun to ebb. “You should’ve named the place *The Escalator*.” The ghost of a smile touched Silas’s lips. He ordered another whiskey, though he never raised the tumbler to his mouth. “You didn’t come here for small talk.” She leaned in, the bar’s scent of bourbon and cigar smoke thick between them. “I came because Silas Blackwood used to be a spy. And Aurora Carter is trying to disappear. Seemed like a good place to ask questions.” The silence stretched. Somewhere upstairs, a floorboard groaned. Silas’s fingers drummed the edge of the bar. “You’re not disappearing very well.” Aurora tilted her head. “You think I’m still visible?” She nodded at his knee, at the way he compensated, rolling his weight forward. “You got that walking wound when you were in Prague, yeah? Bet they didn’t train you for this.” She gestured at the bar, the quiet clink of crystal. “Owner of a *very* nice bar. Not exactly a ghost.” He let out a dry laugh. “You’ve been researching.” “I’ve been surviving.” Aurora’s voice dropped. “Eva got me out, but she couldn’t stay. Evan had friends. Too many of them. So here I am.” Her knuckles whitened on the tumbler. “And you, Blackwood? You retire gracefully or did someone push you?” Silas’s gaze didn’t waver. “You remember the day you moved in above this bar?” She did. The flat was colder than the streets, the pipes creaking like old ghosts. “You wouldn’t even look at me for three weeks.” “Gave you time to stop burning things.” Her mouth twitched. “That wasn’t my style.” “No, it wasn’t.” He set his untouched whiskey down. “You were always more of a *fix it* girl.” “I tried to fix mine.” Her voice caught, then steadied. “Didn’t work. Doesn’t work. Evan was a barrister’s son. Same as your dad.” She paused, the irony too barbed to flinch away. “Turns out some people don’t like being saved.” Silas’s fingers brushed the signet ring on his right hand. It was heavy, solid, the kind of thing agents used to pass messages. “You think about the old days a lot?” Aurora glanced at the bar’s back wall, at the bookshelf that led to the secret room. She’d never been inside, but she’d wondered. “When I’m stuck on these bloody delivery routes.” Her eyes sharpened. “But I don’t think I can go back there.” He watched the storm shift in her face. “That’s not what I’d fight to save if I were you.” “Maybe there’s nothing left to fight for.” Silas stood slowly, his chair scraping the floor. “You’re wrong about that.” He reached into his jacket, producing a silver keyring with a single tag: *Golden Empress—Storage Room. YFC.* The same dragon motif was embossed on it, the same shade as her jacket. “How—” “Cards on the table, Carter. You’re not invisible. That kitchen you work in? It’s one floor above a warehouse where three people disappeared last year. Evan’s old mates, if I had to guess.” Aurora’s glass clinked as she set it down. “You’re saying my boss is a criminal.” “I’m saying Yu-Fei Cheung paid me to keep an eye on you.” His voice softened. “She’s not your enemy—but the people she’s tied to, they might need you alive for reasons that won’t stay quiet. You’re the only one who can untangle it.” The key felt like a second heartbeat in her hand. “And you’ve been waiting for me to show up?” “I told you. You’re the fix-it girl.” Silas turned toward the secret room’s bookshelf. “Come see what I’ve got on Evan’s family.” The bookshelf was colder than it should have been, the air thick with the dust of old papers. Silas flipped a switch—flickering lights revealed files stacked in a grid: maps, bank records, a photograph of a younger Aurora laughing beside Brendan Carter at a graduation ceremony. “Your father never left the law. He’s been trying to build a case against Evan’s father.” Silas tapped a name in a dossier. “Darius Holloway. Owns half this city’s security contracts. He’s the one funding the men who hurt you.” Aurora stared at the face of a boy she once trusted, a face that had twisted into something else. “I used to think I could just move past it.” Silas closed the file gently. “You don’t get to outrun this, Rory.” She turned back toward the bar, the key burning in her pocket. Rain pattered outside, steady as a metronome. She paused at the door, her back to him. “I don’t know if I’m brave like you.” Silas’s voice followed her into the mist. “No one’s braver than someone with nothing left to lose.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The name felt like [like]"
1"Her voice caught then [then]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.723
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.085
82.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"potential"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"traced"
4"potential"
5"silence"
6"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords9
totalWords1147
ratio0.008
matches
0"The Escalator"
1"very"
2"fix it"
3"Golden Empress—Storage Room. YFC."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount690
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Carter2
Golden2
Empress2
Blackwood1
Aurora10
Silas13
Storage1
Room1
Brendan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
5"Brendan"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Empress"
3"Storage"
4"Room"
globalScore0.558
windowScore0.667
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a key turning in a lock she’d"
1"felt like a second heartbeat in her han"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1147
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"hated that people"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean27.98
std19.63
cv0.702
sampleLengths
096
159
27
322
456
519
660
734
84
924
1028
1139
128
1313
1461
159
1642
1714
1824
197
207
2118
2240
2331
2443
2519
267
2743
281
2933
3015
3143
3219
3322
3446
3540
3629
3712
3828
398
4017
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"was combed"
1"was embossed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"Inside, the bar was a sanctuary of wood and low light—oak beams, amber lanterns, the clatter of ice in a cocktail shaker."
1"Not an accusation—curiosity, the kind that aged like fine brandy."
2"“You’re wrong about that.” He reached into his jacket, producing a silver keyring with a single tag: *Golden Empress—Storage Room."
3"Silas flipped a switch—flickering lights revealed files stacked in a grid: maps, bank records, a photograph of a younger Aurora laughing beside Brendan Carter at a graduation ceremony."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount698
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.025787965616045846
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004297994269340974
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.95
std6.9
cv0.577
sampleLengths
022
114
219
322
419
518
622
719
85
92
107
1115
1218
1311
1411
1516
169
1710
187
1912
2026
2115
223
2320
2411
254
2617
277
288
2913
307
3114
3225
333
345
358
365
374
3819
3928
4010
416
423
436
4425
4511
464
4710
482
4913
56.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3541666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners34
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Somewhere upstairs, a floorboard groaned."
ratio0.016
35.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences63
matches
0"She tugged her Golden Empress"
1"She’d passed this place every"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"His gaze flicked up from"
4"He set the glass down."
5"She stepped inside before she"
6"He gestured to a stool"
7"She sat, the barkeep sliding"
8"She laughed, sharp and quick"
9"He studied her instead, the"
10"She’d always hated that people"
11"He ordered another whiskey, though"
12"She leaned in, the bar’s"
13"She nodded at his knee,"
14"She gestured at the bar,"
15"He let out a dry"
16"Her knuckles whitened on the"
17"Her mouth twitched."
18"He set his untouched whiskey"
19"Her voice caught, then steadied"
ratio0.46
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences63
matches
0"The neon green glow of"
1"Aurora Carter hesitated at the"
2"She tugged her Golden Empress"
3"She’d passed this place every"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"His gaze flicked up from"
7"He set the glass down."
8"She stepped inside before she"
9"The name felt like a"
10"He gestured to a stool"
11"The stool was worn leather,"
12"She sat, the barkeep sliding"
13"Silas lowered himself into the"
14"Aurora traced the rim of"
15"The crescent scar on her"
16"She laughed, sharp and quick"
17"Silas didn’t smile."
18"He studied her instead, the"
19"She’d always hated that people"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She paused, the irony too barbed to flinch away"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.064
leniency0.128
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.043
80.3043%