| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "tapestry" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1171 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 953 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | January | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Dymas | 1 | | Monday | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Half | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.713 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to breathe under the brittle January light" | | 1 | "as if shooing away wasps" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.854 | | wordCount | 1171 | | matches | | 0 | "not her own, but a condensation of centuries" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.91% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 48.79 | | std | 23.36 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 112 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 76 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the scent of it clung to the air—rich, oily, almost sentient." | | 1 | "The warmth had shifted—now it throbbed against her palm like a trapped bird." | | 2 | "Aurora couldn’t see them, but she could hear the fraying of reality where they moved—like someone plucking thread through a tapestry." | | 3 | "Its mouth yawned dark, but within it, something pulsed in green and gold—roots, but alive, their tendrils braided with luminescent spores." | | 4 | "The spores flared, and the answer came in a wave of memory—not her own, but a condensation of centuries." | | 5 | "The spores in the hollow’s mouth gathered into a shape—arcane symbols, ancient and jagged, flickering in and out of sight along the roots." | | 6 | "Every surface now gleamed with something sharp and watchful—a thousand bored eyes in the wildflowers, the press of unseen weight in the soil." | | 7 | "The grove swallowed them, but for a heartbeat, the darkness twisted into a shape that almost resembled a dozen other forms at once—figures glimpsed and gone, choices made and unmade." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 966 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "against frost-wilded grass" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.023809523809523808 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005175983436853002 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 11.83 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 63.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.41414141414141414 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the trees began to" | | 1 | "Then a second, slicing through" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks twisted into cursive" | | 1 | "She tugged at the Heartstone" | | 2 | "Their voice brushed the air" | | 3 | "Their pollen misted in the" | | 4 | "She jerked back." | | 5 | "they said, frozen mid-transformation" | | 6 | "She gestured to the horizon," | | 7 | "She turned, vanishing backward into" | | 8 | "Her laughter was the chime" | | 9 | "Its mouth yawned dark, but" | | 10 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 11 | "They steadied their friend as" | | 12 | "She pointed to the roots" | | 13 | "They traced the nearest sigil" | | 14 | "She stopped short, her breath" | | 15 | "Her voice was honey and" |
| | ratio | 0.198 | |
| 27.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boots crunched against frost-wilded" | | 1 | "Their trunks twisted into cursive" | | 2 | "She tugged at the Heartstone" | | 3 | "The crimson stone pulsed faintly," | | 4 | "Isolde drifted forward, her lavender" | | 5 | "The world around them seemed" | | 6 | "The others hadn’t noticed, but" | | 7 | "Nyx tilted their head." | | 8 | "Their voice brushed the air" | | 9 | "The grove unfolded ahead in" | | 10 | "Flowers burned through the dead" | | 11 | "Their pollen misted in the" | | 12 | "A stream cut through the" | | 13 | "Aurora knelt, fingers hovering above" | | 14 | "She jerked back." | | 15 | "Isolde leaned beside her, her" | | 16 | "A vial of bluebells dangled" | | 17 | "Aurora’s throat tightened." | | 18 | "Nyx inhaled sharply." | | 19 | "they said, frozen mid-transformation" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 76.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx hovered in near-invisibility, their silhouette thinning at the edges as though the air itself objected to their presence." | | 1 | "When she reappeared, she stood atop a moss-loud boulder that hadn’t existed moments ago." | | 2 | "Aurora stood, her boots leaving footprints in the frost that lingered far too long." | | 3 | "Isolde offered a half-smile, her hand brushing the air as if shooing away wasps." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.192 | | leniency | 0.385 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |