Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ92SQYVFN8S6TTEVWAJT27

Run Details

Duration:
24.8s
Cost:
$0.001088
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moon hung low over Richmond Park, a swollen silver disc that cast more shadow than light. Aurora Carter stepped between two oaks, their gnarled trunks leaning close enough to frame a threshold. The air smelled of wet earth and something sharper—like the tang of burnt sugar. She’d followed the GPS coordinates from the faded envelope, which read "The Grove—Midnight Delivery." Yu-Fei’s part-time gig had her moving boxes of pheasants and veal cutlets, but this one was different. The courier company name had been crossed out, replaced by a hand-scrawled "Golden Empress. Do not delay." She tugged the strap of her bag higher on her shoulder. The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant dug into her palm, its crimson gemstone throbbing faintly. A minute ago, the stone had felt lukewarm, like a charged phone battery. Now it was hot enough to leave a palm print. *Maybe the "delivery" is a trap,* she thought. But the alternative was worse: Evan had started showing up at the flat above Silas’s bar again. That wasn’t his name on the envelope—never would be—but she’d take whatever help came her way. The clearing opened ahead. Where the forest should have thinned, the trees thickened, their boughs weaving a roof so tight the sky vanished. Inside, wildflowers glowed faintly, petals unbruised by winter. A path of moss snaked through them, and in the center of it stood a stone archway. It wasn’t there on any map, wasn’t in the photos she’d Googled. Runic symbols had been carved into the arch’s base, their edges softened by centuries of lichen. Her phone flickered in her pocket—4:43 a.m. She’d crossed the oaks at 4:28. That math didn’t add up. "Time’s a flexible concept here," a voice said. Aurora spun. No one stood behind her. The path was gone. The oaks now loomed directly behind her, their bark peeling into ragged fingers. The runic symbols were on *every* stone, now—roots curling up her ankles like serpents. Her breath fogged the air. *Cold enough for fog.* She told herself that twice, then trudged toward the arch. The pendant pulsed faster, a galloping heartbeat. The air shifted at the archway’s base. A tremor, like the hush before a thunderclap. She stepped over it and into another silence. This one had teeth. Her boots sank into the moss as if it were quicksand. The flowers around her darkened, shadows pooling in their stalks. She pulled out the pendant, its glow dimming. "Nice to see you’re paying attention." The voice came from the trees. A dry chuckle. Aurora’s hand drifted to the kitchen knife in her back pocket. "Who are you?" "Does it matter?" A woman stepped into the light—tall and draped in a moss-green cloak. Her hair was black as the stones, eyes white as milk. "Cards on the table: you’ve been carrying a piece of Hel since Tuesday." Aurora blinked. The pendant had been in her jewelry box for weeks, tucked beside costume necklaces she couldn’t bear to part with. "That’s not possible." "Denial’s a charming first step." The woman tilted her head, a gesture that made her seem older suddenly. "The Heartstones are cursed. You feel it, don’t you—how it burns your touch, whispers your secrets?" Aurora’s knuckles whitened around the pendant. It didn’t whisper. It just burned. The woman took a step closer, and the flowers flared gold again. Aurora noticed her boots didn’t press the moss flat. She backed away until she hit the arch. "I’m not here for a chat," she said. "I’m delivering something. If you want it, take it." She yanked free the chain, letting the stone clatter to the ground. The woman smiled, a perfect row of teeth. "Too late." The ground shuddered. The pendant slid into a crack in the stone. Aurora lunged to retrieve it, but the woman lifted a hand. A tendril of ivy burst from the soil, wrapping around Aurora’s wrist. The crescent scar prickled. She wrenched free, stumbled sideways, and the ivy recoiled. Her reflection in a dewdrop: pale skin mottled gray. Not right. She wiped the leaf, looked again. The woman’s laugh was a rustle of dead leaves. "You think you’re the first escaped pet they’ve sent here? The first to mistake their gifts as protection?" Aurora’s spine hit a tree. A tree she swore hadn’t been there a second ago. The runic symbols now covered the trunk. The woman’s face was dissolving, her features melting into bark, hair into ivy. Aurora’s phone flickered—6:17 a.m. She hadn’t seen the sunrise. "Back the way you came," the tree-woman said. "Or forward. Try telling which." Aurora fled, crashing through undergrowth until the air tasted of smoke instead of moss. She skidded to a halt. The forest was gone. A gravel road stretched at her back, headlights slicing through the predawn dark. The car hadn’t been there earlier. The driver’s window rolled down. Silas. His bar was five miles east. "Get in," he said. "Now." She hesitated. His usual smugness was gone, replaced by something twitchy. The rearview mirror showed the Fae Grove behind her, the oaks now massive as monoliths, their branches clawing at the empty road. Silas slammed the horn. She threw herself into the passenger seat. The engine roared, tires crunched, and the car lurching forward. In the mirror, the Grove shrank. Then expanded. Then vanished. "Are you following me?" she said. "No," he said, but his knuckles whitened on the steering wheel. "You’re following it." She turned. The rear window didn’t open to her flat above the bar. It opened to the dark. A shape loomed in it—a horse with too many legs, its eyes burning the same crimson as the Heartstone. The car skidded to a halt at the next set of oaks. Silas cursed, stepping on the gas. The headlights died. Outside, branches rattled. Not in the wind. "Your benefactor’s clever," Silas muttered. "But Hel’s smarter." Aurora pressed her forehead to the window. The horse’s breath was fog. Its hooves were made of stone. "Where’s the box?" She didn’t remember packing a box. Her hand found it on the passenger seat, tied with golden twine. The label had been chewed to pulp. She undid the knots, but the string unraveled itself. Inside: a mirror. No, a *portal.* The same crimson stone pulsed in its corner. The rear door creaked open. Aurora grabbed the mirror and the pendant, both glowing fiercely now. The figure behind her didn’t have a face, just a smudge of black where it should be. Its hands—were they hands?—were pale and webbed between the fingers. "Give it," it hissed. "Silas. **Drive.**" He didn’t move. She smashed the mirror against the dash. The portal shrieked, a sound that split her skull. The creature hissed again, louder. The car’s dashboard cracked. The tree-woman’s laugh echoed from somewhere deep in the grove. "Did you really think you could un-invite the dead?" Aurora backed out of the car, mirror shards in one hand, pendant raised like a shield. The creature hissed through its nonexistent mouth, and she remembered the scar on her wrist. Evan hadn’t given it to her. He’d bitten her during a fight, his teeth too sharp, his eyes too white. The Grove had swallowed six minutes of her life. Now it wanted the rest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"lurching"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"flickered"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"whisper"
6"perfect"
7"lurching"
8"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords13
totalWords1210
ratio0.011
matches
0"Maybe the \"delivery\" is a trap,"
1"every"
2"Cold enough for fog."
3"portal."
4"Drive."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1069
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Evan2
Silas5
Googled1
Aurora14
Fae1
Grove3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Pendant"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.845
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1210
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean30.25
std25.05
cv0.828
sampleLengths
095
191
294
38
464
556
66
723
839
925
1034
1141
1237
132
1465
1527
1644
1713
1842
1917
2033
2131
226
2314
2437
2528
268
2718
283
296
3042
315
3238
334
342
353
3635
379
3851
3914
85.92% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences127
matches
0"been crossed"
1"been carved"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
5"were made"
6"been chewed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was dissolving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences141
ratio0.057
matches
0"The air smelled of wet earth and something sharper—like the tang of burnt sugar."
1"That wasn’t his name on the envelope—never would be—but she’d take whatever help came her way."
2"Her phone flickered in her pocket—4:43 a.m."
3"The runic symbols were on *every* stone, now—roots curling up her ankles like serpents."
4"\"Does it matter?\" A woman stepped into the light—tall and draped in a moss-green cloak."
5"Aurora’s phone flickered—6:17 a.m."
6"A shape loomed in it—a horse with too many legs, its eyes burning the same crimson as the Heartstone."
7"Its hands—were they hands?—were pale and webbed between the fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1083
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.030470914127423823
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0046168051708217915
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean8.58
std5.28
cv0.615
sampleLengths
017
116
214
331
417
511
616
713
810
98
1017
1116
124
1319
148
1517
1612
1716
187
196
205
218
222
235
244
2513
2614
275
2814
297
307
318
328
334
3411
3510
368
376
386
393
4011
413
4215
4311
4413
452
4620
473
4818
4916
41.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2907801418439716
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners41
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"*Maybe the is a trap,*"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences114
matches
0"She’d followed the GPS coordinates"
1"She tugged the strap of"
2"It wasn’t there on any"
3"Her phone flickered in her"
4"She’d crossed the oaks at"
5"Her breath fogged the air."
6"She stepped over it and"
7"Her boots sank into the"
8"She pulled out the pendant,"
9"Her hair was black as"
10"It didn’t whisper."
11"It just burned."
12"She backed away until she"
13"She yanked free the chain,"
14"She wrenched free, stumbled sideways,"
15"Her reflection in a dewdrop:"
16"She wiped the leaf, looked"
17"She hadn’t seen the sunrise."
18"She skidded to a halt."
19"His bar was five miles"
ratio0.281
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences114
matches
0"The moon hung low over"
1"Aurora Carter stepped between two"
2"The air smelled of wet"
3"She’d followed the GPS coordinates"
4"The courier company name had"
5"She tugged the strap of"
6"The silver chain of the"
7"A minute ago, the stone"
8"That wasn’t his name on"
9"The clearing opened ahead."
10"A path of moss snaked"
11"It wasn’t there on any"
12"Her phone flickered in her"
13"She’d crossed the oaks at"
14"That math didn’t add up."
15"a voice said"
16"The path was gone."
17"The oaks now loomed directly"
18"The runic symbols were on"
19"Her breath fogged the air."
ratio0.877
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Now it was hot enough"
1"Now it wanted the rest."
ratio0.018
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The moon hung low over Richmond Park, a swollen silver disc that cast more shadow than light."
1"Her boots sank into the moss as if it were quicksand."
2"The woman’s face was dissolving, her features melting into bark, hair into ivy."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, but his knuckles whitened on the steering wheel"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas muttered (mutter)"
1"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.143
83.9364%