Run: 2026-04-24-01KPZTTDKS1DHXZ6RQNNYP88Y4

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

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The third deadbolt slid back with a reluctant scrape, and Rory opened the door halfway — just enough to see who had the gall to ring Eva's buzzer at eleven at night — and the rest of her sentence died somewhere behind her teeth. Lucien stood on the landing with one gloved hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, as if he'd been there the whole time and she'd simply been slow to notice. The stairwell light, all jaundice and dust, caught the platinum of his hair and turned it almost silver. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the shoulders dry, though she could hear the rain still hissing against the window at the end of the hall. "You're on my doorstep," she said. "Technically," he said, "I'm on Eva's doorstep. You simply happen to be behind it." "Same difference." "A barrister's daughter should know better than to conflate the two." She almost laughed. She hated that she almost laughed. Ptolemy, who fancied himself the flat's doorman, wound between her ankles and stared up at Lucien with slitted yellow approval. Traitor, she thought. She bent, scooped him up, tucked him against her shoulder like armour. "Eva's in Edinburgh until Thursday," she said. "I know." "Then what do you want, Luc?" He looked at her properly for the first time, and she felt the careful double-pull of his mismatched eyes — the amber one warm, the black one unreadable, both of them entirely too attentive. There was a tightness at the corner of his mouth that hadn't been there six weeks ago, when he'd last walked out of her life with the same unhurried step he'd walked in. "Ten minutes," he said. "I'd prefer not to discuss it in a corridor that smells of vindaloo." "I like the way it smells." "I'm aware. You smell faintly of it yourself." "Charming." "Always." She held the door for three more seconds than she meant to, then stepped back. "Ten minutes, Moreau. And you can leave the cane by the door." "The cane stays with me." "The cane has a sword in it." "Then you understand why." He stepped inside. Somehow the flat, which had been claustrophobic since the day Eva moved in, grew a size smaller around him. He didn't touch anything. He never did. He simply observed — the leaning towers of books, the half-drunk mug of tea on the windowsill, the notebook splayed open on the coffee table with Rory's looping, left-handed scrawl across it. His gaze paused there a fraction longer than elsewhere, and she felt it like a fingertip dragged over the inside of her wrist. She set Ptolemy down. She crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight; she turned it inward without thinking. "Sit or don't," she said. "Talk." He didn't sit. He leaned his weight on the cane, very slightly, and that told her more than anything he might say — Lucien never leaned unless something hurt, and Lucien never admitted what hurt. "Someone is asking after you," he said. "By your old name. By the Cardiff one." The floor didn't tilt, but it felt as if it considered tilting. She kept her face still. It was a trick she had learned from him, actually, which was one of the smaller ironies of her life. "Evan." "I don't know yet. Possibly. Possibly someone he's paid. The inquiry came through a broker in Camden who wouldn't take my money to stop it, which is, as you can imagine, unusual." "So you came to warn me." "I came to tell you what I know. Warnings imply I think you need them." "Luc." She said it too quietly, and hated that too. "If you came here to be clever at me —" "I came here because I would rather you hear it from my mouth than find it on your own in a way that hurt you." He exhaled. It was the closest thing to an unpolished sound she had ever got out of him. "That is all, Aurora." Aurora. Not Rory, not Laila, not any of the names he liked to roll around his tongue in that maddening accent. Aurora, like a small confession. She turned away from him because looking at him was becoming a problem. The window gave her back a blurred reflection of the room — her, narrow and dark-haired and braced; him, elegant and unreadable, watching her watch him. "You said ten minutes," she said to the glass. "I did." "It's been three." "Then I have seven left to say the rest." "There's a rest?" A pause. In the pause, the rain, and Ptolemy's purr, and somewhere below them a burst of laughter from the curry house kitchen. She listened to Lucien not answer for long enough that she had to turn around. He had not moved. But something in his face had shifted, the way a lock shifts before it opens. "I shouldn't have left the way I did," he said. "No," she agreed. "You shouldn't have." "I thought distance would be kinder. To you. It was, in fact, the cowardice of a man who is not used to wanting things he cannot price." "Luc —" "I am not asking for anything, Rory." Her name, the real one, the friend one, spoken in his mouth like something fragile he had finally decided to risk. "I only wanted you to know I was aware of the size of the mistake." She stepped closer before she could stop herself. Close enough to see the faint shadow under his amber eye, the place where his jaw had been too recently clenched. Close enough that the rain-smell clinging to his coat mixed with the turmeric of the flat and became, absurdly, the specific perfume of the worst and best six weeks of her life. "You're bleeding," she said, because his left glove had a dark stain along the seam that she had only just registered. "A little." "For God's sake." She caught his wrist — the gloved one, gentle — and he let her. That was the thing that undid her, quietly: that he let her. "Sit down. I mean it. Sit down, Lucien." He sat. On Eva's terrible sagging sofa, a half-demon fixer in a thousand-pound suit, with her hand still holding his wrist as if she'd forgotten to let go. She didn't let go. "Ten minutes isn't going to be enough," she said. "No," he said. "I suspected as much."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"fragile he had finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.042
90.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"unreadable"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1081
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount758
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Eva3
Lucien5
Ptolemy3
Laila1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Laila"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1081
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean19.65
std19.78
cv1.006
sampleLengths
044
175
26
314
42
511
69
735
87
92
106
1167
1217
136
148
151
161
1727
185
197
204
2184
2224
236
2435
2515
2637
271
2832
296
3015
3120
3247
3326
3439
359
362
373
389
393
4038
4119
4210
436
4427
452
4643
4761
4821
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs132
matches
0"was becoming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences92
ratio0.076
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back with a reluctant scrape, and Rory opened the door halfway — just enough to see who had the gall to ring Eva's buzzer at eleven at night — and the rest of her sentence died somewhere behind her teeth."
1"He looked at her properly for the first time, and she felt the careful double-pull of his mismatched eyes — the amber one warm, the black one unreadable, both of them entirely too attentive."
2"He simply observed — the leaning towers of books, the half-drunk mug of tea on the windowsill, the notebook splayed open on the coffee table with Rory's looping, left-handed scrawl across it."
3"The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight; she turned it inward without thinking."
4"He leaned his weight on the cane, very slightly, and that told her more than anything he might say — Lucien never leaned unless something hurt, and Lucien never admitted what hurt."
5"The window gave her back a blurred reflection of the room — her, narrow and dark-haired and braced; him, elegant and unreadable, watching her watch him."
6"\"For God's sake.\" She caught his wrist — the gloved one, gentle — and he let her."
85.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount677
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.056129985228951254
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01772525849335303
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.75
std10
cv0.851
sampleLengths
044
132
218
325
46
514
62
711
83
96
1020
113
1212
137
142
156
1634
1733
184
1913
206
218
221
231
2415
2512
265
277
284
293
3019
314
323
3332
3423
354
364
3716
385
391
403
4132
427
438
4412
455
4620
471
4832
496
56.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.40217391304347827
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners37
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Somehow the flat, which had"
ratio0.022
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences46
matches
0"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
1"She almost laughed."
2"She hated that she almost"
3"She bent, scooped him up,"
4"He looked at her properly"
5"She held the door for"
6"He stepped inside."
7"He didn't touch anything."
8"He never did."
9"He simply observed — the"
10"His gaze paused there a"
11"She set Ptolemy down."
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He didn't sit."
14"He leaned his weight on"
15"She kept her face still."
16"It was a trick she"
17"She said it too quietly,"
18"It was the closest thing"
19"She turned away from him"
ratio0.609
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences46
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Lucien stood on the landing"
2"The stairwell light, all jaundice"
3"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
4"She almost laughed."
5"She hated that she almost"
6"Ptolemy, who fancied himself the"
7"Traitor, she thought."
8"She bent, scooped him up,"
9"He looked at her properly"
10"She held the door for"
11"He stepped inside."
12"He didn't touch anything."
13"He never did."
14"He simply observed — the"
15"His gaze paused there a"
16"She set Ptolemy down."
17"She crossed her arms."
18"The crescent scar on her"
19"He didn't sit."
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"On Eva's terrible sagging sofa, a half-demon fixer in a thousand-pound suit, with her hand still holding his wrist as if she'd forgotten to let go."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.271
leniency0.542
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.042
84.6056%