| 70.97% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "she said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.839 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |
| 84.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1250 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 84.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1250 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "aligned" | | 2 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1263 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Stopped" | | 1 | "A.F." | | 2 | "cult angle" | | 3 | "tidying up" | | 4 | "almost" | | 5 | "E. Kowalski." | | 6 | "call" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 959 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 13 | | Patel | 9 | | Morris | 4 | | Rotherhithe | 1 | | August | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Met | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Patel" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Harlow" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.822 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.792 | | wordCount | 1263 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sweet rot she expected three days in, but something mineral" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 32.38 | | std | 28.53 | | cv | 0.881 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 78 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 85 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 101 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 76 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 52 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 67 | | 37 | 43 | | 38 | 10 |
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| 92.43% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "was laid" | | 1 | "been emptied" | | 2 | "been trained" | | 3 | "been seared" |
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| 63.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "was willing" | | 2 | "was not willing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell reached Quinn before the scene did — not the sweet rot she expected three days in, but something mineral and electric, like the air after a transformer blew." | | 1 | "Quinn checked her watch — the old leather strap had moulded itself to her wrist over the years until she no longer felt the buckle — and descended." | | 2 | "No blood pool — and that was the first thing Quinn didn't like." | | 3 | "Her knees complained; she ignored them." | | 4 | "Two punctures, yes — neat, nearly surgical, each the diameter of a pencil lead." | | 5 | "And beneath that, unmistakable if one knew to look for it — iron, yes, but in a place the blood had never reached." | | 6 | "*Stopped*, as though whoever — whatever — had left them had simply ceased to exist at that point." | | 7 | "Not burnt; scorched in the particular way of a kiln-firing, a circle perhaps four feet across, the grout blackened and the glaze crazed to a network of hair-fine cracks." | | 8 | "The cufflinks — gold, initials *A.F.* The skin at the temples drawn too tight." | | 9 | "In the half-dark her pupils widened and she could almost — *almost* — see the air shimmer where the residue trail ended, the way heat shimmers above tarmac in August." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 956 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.036610878661087864 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011506276150627616 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 12.89 | | std | 11.27 | | cv | 0.874 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 82.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5408163265306123 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused on the threshold" | | 1 | "He was laid out along" | | 2 | "Her knees complained; she ignored" | | 3 | "She angled the torch and" | | 4 | "She breathed through her mouth" | | 5 | "She touched a gloved fingertip" | | 6 | "She touched it to the" | | 7 | "Her finger came back tacky." | | 8 | "He was a good lad," | | 9 | "She liked him." | | 10 | "She wished she didn't have" | | 11 | "She walked the length of" | | 12 | "She shone her torch on" | | 13 | "she said flatly" | | 14 | "She let her gaze travel" | | 15 | "she said carefully" | | 16 | "She gestured at the folded" | | 17 | "She straightened and fished in" | | 18 | "He was already on his" | | 19 | "She thumbed through her contacts" |
| | ratio | 0.294 | |
| 92.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell reached Quinn before" | | 1 | "She paused on the threshold" | | 2 | "Dawn pushed weakly through the" | | 3 | "DS Patel's voice ricocheted up" | | 4 | "Quinn checked her watch —" | | 5 | "The killer, she thought, had" | | 6 | "Patel was waiting on the" | | 7 | "The tunnel yawned black on" | | 8 | "Forensics had rigged work-lights that" | | 9 | "Bespoke suit, the sort that" | | 10 | "He was laid out along" | | 11 | "Her knees complained; she ignored" | | 12 | "She angled the torch and" | | 13 | "The skin around them had" | | 14 | "This body had been emptied" | | 15 | "She breathed through her mouth" | | 16 | "The electric-mineral smell was stronger" | | 17 | "She touched a gloved fingertip" | | 18 | "She touched it to the" | | 19 | "Her finger came back tacky." |
| | ratio | 0.735 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Forensics had rigged work-lights that buzzed and threw everything into a sickly ivory, and at the centre of their glare lay the body." | | 1 | "At the centre, faint but unmistakable to an eye that had been trained the hard way to see them, a pattern had been seared into the ceramic." | | 2 | "The faint white crust at the corner of his mouth that wasn't saliva, wasn't anything she could name aloud, but which she had seen once before, three years ago, …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.161 | | leniency | 0.323 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |