Run: 2026-04-24-01KPZTXKKMGD7D2KVF8CATSK7C

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26.4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt caught, as it always did, and Rory had to shoulder the door to get it open. She meant to curse at the hinge. She did not, in the end, curse at the hinge. Lucien Moreau stood on her doorstep with one gloved hand braced against the jamb, as though he'd been considering knocking and thought better of it. Rain clung to his shoulders in dark patches. The ivory cane rested in the crook of his elbow. "You're dripping on Eva's welcome mat," Rory said. "Eva doesn't own a welcome mat." "Exactly." He didn't smile. One amber eye held her gaze; the black one drifted, then settled, the way it always did when he was deciding how much truth to spend. Behind her, Ptolemy wound a figure-eight between her ankles and bolted when he scented something he didn't like. "May I come in, Aurora." Not a question. Not quite a plea either. She stepped back because her feet moved before her pride caught up. He crossed the threshold like a man stepping onto thin ice. The flat swallowed him — all those stacked books, the kettle rattling on its base, a half-drunk mug of tea going cold on a stack of conveyancing notes she'd never finish. He looked wrong in it. Too polished. Too expensive. The charcoal suit was cut to the millimetre and the rain hadn't dared soak through to the shirt. "Three weeks," she said. "I'm aware." "Three weeks and you turn up on a Tuesday with no coat." "I have a coat." He set the cane against the side table with a soft knock of ivory on wood. "I left it in the car." "You don't drive." "I had one driven." She laughed — one sharp, unamused note — and went to the kitchen because standing three feet from him was doing things to her sternum that she resented. The kettle had gone quiet. She flicked it back on. "Tea?" "Please." "I only have the cheap stuff." "Then I will drink the cheap stuff." She kept her back to him. It was easier. Two mugs down from the cupboard. The blue one with the chipped handle for him, because she was still, on some petty level, twelve years old. The crescent scar on her left wrist pulsed when her pulse did, and her pulse was doing something embarrassing. "Why are you here, Luc." "Because you didn't answer any of my calls." "That was the point of not answering them." "I deduced as much." She turned. He hadn't moved from the middle of the rug. His hands hung at his sides — ungloved now, she saw; he'd peeled the leather off and tucked it into an inner pocket in that practised, soundless way of his. The black eye caught the lamplight and gave nothing back. "Sit down," she said. "You're making the cat nervous." "The cat has excellent instincts." "Sit *down*, Lucien." He sat. On the one cleared corner of Eva's couch, which meant between a stack of cracked-spine grimoires and a dressing gown that wasn't his business. He looked at neither. He looked at her. "I owed you an apology," he said. "I'm told these are best delivered in person." "Told by whom." "By a very patient bartender." "Silas needs to mind his bar." "Silas was minding his bar. I was minding the stool in front of it. For some hours." She put the mug down on the coffee table harder than she meant to. Tea slopped over the rim onto a printout of something in Enochian. "You don't get to do this," she said. "You don't get to disappear for three weeks after —" She stopped. The rest of the sentence was a door she wasn't ready to open in front of him. "After what happened, and then walk in here and sit on my friend's couch and be *sorry.*" "I'm not asking you to accept it." "Then what are you asking." "Nothing." He folded his hands over one knee. The amber eye warmed a fraction. "I came to say it. You can do with it what you like." She sat down. Not beside him — in the armchair opposite, which had a broken spring and required some negotiation. She chose the discomfort deliberately. "Say it then." He did not look away. That was the worst of him, always — he never looked away. "I should not have left you on that rooftop," he said. "I should not have let you think I walked out because of what you told me. I walked out because I could not trust myself to stand next to you for another minute without doing something I was not certain you wanted." The kettle clicked off in the kitchen. Neither of them moved for it. "That's a convenient story," she said. Her voice came out thinner than she liked. "It's the true one. Convenience does not enter into it." He breathed out, once, careful. "If you would prefer the uglier version — I was afraid. I am not often afraid. I did not handle it with grace." "No. You didn't." "I'm aware." She looked at her hands. At the scar. At the place where his thumb had pressed against her pulse three weeks ago on a rooftop in Shoreditch, when she'd said something she hadn't planned to say and he'd gone very still and then very gone. "You could have called." "I did." "You could have *said* something when you called." "I know." "Lucien —" "I know, Aurora." She looked up. He had not moved an inch. The rain had started again; it ticked against the window behind him and made a halo of grey light around the platinum of his hair. She hated him, briefly, for being beautiful in Eva's ugly flat. "I haven't forgiven you," she said. "I didn't expect you to." "I might. Eventually." Something shifted in the amber eye. Not triumph. Something quieter. "I'll wait," he said. "Don't make it sound romantic." "I wouldn't dream of it." She got up to rescue the tea.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1002
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1002
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count3
highlights
0"flicked"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1009
ratio0.003
matches
0"down"
1"sorry."
2"said"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount657
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Eva2
Enochian1
Shoreditch1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
places
0"Enochian"
1"Shoreditch"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1009
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean15.52
std17.23
cv1.11
sampleLengths
036
143
28
36
41
547
65
720
869
94
102
1112
1226
133
144
1538
161
171
186
197
2054
215
228
238
244
2551
269
275
283
2934
3015
313
325
336
3417
3526
3654
377
385
3927
4025
413
4217
4353
4413
4514
4638
473
482
4945
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
31.93% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs119
matches
0"was deciding"
1"was doing"
2"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences113
ratio0.062
matches
0"One amber eye held her gaze; the black one drifted, then settled, the way it always did when he was deciding how much truth to spend."
1"The flat swallowed him — all those stacked books, the kettle rattling on its base, a half-drunk mug of tea going cold on a stack of conveyancing notes she'd never finish."
2"She laughed — one sharp, unamused note — and went to the kitchen because standing three feet from him was doing things to her sternum that she resented."
3"His hands hung at his sides — ungloved now, she saw; he'd peeled the leather off and tucked it into an inner pocket in that practised, soundless way of his."
4"Not beside him — in the armchair opposite, which had a broken spring and required some negotiation."
5"That was the worst of him, always — he never looked away."
6"The rain had started again; it ticked against the window behind him and made a halo of grey light around the platinum of his hair."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount632
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.01740506329113924
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0031645569620253164
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean8.93
std7.97
cv0.892
sampleLengths
019
17
210
325
48
510
68
76
81
93
1026
1118
125
133
145
1512
1611
1731
185
192
202
2118
224
232
2412
2520
266
273
284
2928
305
315
321
331
346
357
366
373
386
3920
4019
415
428
438
444
452
469
4730
4810
494
46.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34513274336283184
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences54
matches
0"She meant to curse at"
1"She did not, in the"
2"He didn't smile."
3"She stepped back because her"
4"He crossed the threshold like"
5"He looked wrong in it."
6"He set the cane against"
7"She laughed — one sharp,"
8"She flicked it back on."
9"She kept her back to"
10"It was easier."
11"He hadn't moved from the"
12"His hands hung at his"
13"He looked at neither."
14"He looked at her."
15"She put the mug down"
16"He folded his hands over"
17"She sat down."
18"She chose the discomfort deliberately."
19"He did not look away."
ratio0.5
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences54
matches
0"The third deadbolt caught, as"
1"She meant to curse at"
2"She did not, in the"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on her"
4"Rain clung to his shoulders"
5"The ivory cane rested in"
6"He didn't smile."
7"She stepped back because her"
8"He crossed the threshold like"
9"The flat swallowed him —"
10"He looked wrong in it."
11"The charcoal suit was cut"
12"He set the cane against"
13"She laughed — one sharp,"
14"The kettle had gone quiet."
15"She flicked it back on."
16"She kept her back to"
17"It was easier."
18"The blue one with the"
19"The crescent scar on her"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on her doorstep with one gloved hand braced against the jamb, as though he'd been considering knocking and thought better of it."
1"On the one cleared corner of Eva's couch, which meant between a stack of cracked-spine grimoires and a dressing gown that wasn't his business."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.357
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.036
79.3236%