Run: 2026-04-24-01KPZTXTHQD9K5YQ2RJ94Q658X

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Duration:
30.2s
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$0.060895
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in sheets across Camden High Street, the kind that soaked through a coat in under a minute and turned every streetlight into a smeared yellow halo. Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted a low iron railing, her boots hitting puddled pavement hard enough to send water up to her knees. Ahead of her, Tomás Herrera moved like a man who knew exactly where he was going and exactly how to stay out of reach. "Herrera! Stop!" He didn't look back. He ducked between two parked delivery vans, the tail of his jacket flaring out, and cut across the mouth of an alley. Quinn's radio crackled uselessly under the drumming rain. She'd left her backup three streets behind when Herrera had taken a turn no marked car could follow. Her watch caught the edge of a streetlamp as she ran—the worn leather strap she'd bought in her first year on the job. Eighteen years. She'd chased a lot of men down a lot of streets. None of them had ever moved quite like this one. "Herrera!" He cut left into a pedestrian underpass, then right. Quinn's lungs burned. Her breath came out in white bursts against the black air. She'd clocked him outside The Raven's Nest forty minutes ago, watched him slip out the back with a courier's satchel and that Saint Christopher medallion glinting under his collar. She'd tailed him on foot because she'd known—known the way she'd known things for three years now, since Morris—that putting a vehicle on him would spook whatever net she was trying to catch. Herrera glanced over his shoulder. For half a second she saw his face under the sodium light—warm brown eyes, the scar on his forearm exposed where he'd pushed his sleeve up to run—and then he was gone, swallowed by the shadow of a bricked-up railway arch. "Bloody hell." She hit the arch at full speed, expecting a dead end. Instead her shoulder glanced off something that gave—not brick, but the painted canvas of a construction hoarding. She shoved through. Behind the hoarding, a set of concrete steps descended into the dark. Old tile at the bottom of the stairwell, the colour of boiled sweets, spelled out a name half-scraped away. Disused Tube. She'd walked past this arch a hundred times and never clocked the opening. Quinn drew up short. Water ran off her hair and into her collar. Below her, somewhere down those steps, she could hear Herrera's footfalls slapping away, and something else—a low thrum, not mechanical, not music, closer to the sound a crowded room makes through a thick wall. Every bit of training she had told her to wait. Call it in. Wait for uniforms. Don't pursue an unknown suspect into an unknown structure with a single point of egress and no comms. She reached for her radio anyway. Static. Not the ordinary static of a weak signal, either—this was a sound like whispering, like a voice played backwards very quietly under the hiss. She killed it and clipped it back to her belt. Morris. Three years ago it had been a warehouse in Deptford. She'd waited for backup then. She'd done it by the book. She'd stood at the door for ninety-two seconds and when she'd finally gone in, her partner had been on the floor with his eyes open and no mark on him anywhere, and the man they'd been chasing had been gone. Not fled. Gone, in a way that the official report had called "escape via undetermined route" and that Quinn, in her own head, had never found a word for. She thought about that now, with rainwater trickling down her spine and the dark mouth of the stairwell exhaling cold at her. "Sod it." She took the steps two at a time, one hand trailing the tiled wall for balance. Her torch beam bounced ahead of her—dust, peeling posters from the nineties, a rat that didn't bother running. At the first turn she caught the flash of Herrera's jacket vanishing round the next. The thrum grew. Not whispers now. Voices, haggling, low laughter. Somewhere a bell rang three times and then once more, and the air changed. It went warmer. It smelled of frankincense and wet copper and something like rosemary burnt in a pan. Quinn came out at the bottom of the stairs onto what had once been a Tube platform. The rails were gone. In their place, torchlight—actual torches, pitch and flame—and stalls. Dozens of them. A woman in a leather apron was weighing something pale on brass scales. A man with no shadow counted coins. Glass jars held things that moved when nothing touched them. She stopped breathing for a moment. Just a moment. Long enough for her mind to throw up every rational explanation and reject each one. Herrera was thirty feet ahead, pushing between a stall of folded silks and a table covered in small white objects she slowly understood were teeth. He was arguing with a woman at the gate—a figure in a long coat who held out her palm. Quinn heard the word "token" before the crowd swallowed it. Herrera reached into his collar, pulled something off over his head—not the medallion, something else, something small and pale and bone-coloured—and pressed it into the woman's hand. The gate, which wasn't a gate so much as a shimmer in the air between two pillars, parted for him. He looked back. This time he saw her. His eyes widenednot fear, Quinn thought, but something closer to warning. He shook his head once, fast, and mouthed a word she thought was don't. Then he was through. Quinn stood on the edge of the platform with rain still dripping from the hem of her coat onto dust that hadn't seen rain in fifty years. The gatekeeper turned her head a fraction, regarding her. The woman's face, under the hood, was patient in the particular way of something that had been patient for a long time. "Token," the woman said. Not a question. Quinn's hand went to the inside pocket of her coat, where she kept her warrant card. Her fingers closed around the laminated edge of it. Eighteen years of decorated service. A dead partner. A radio that whispered. She thought: if I walk away now, I never find out what killed Morris. She thought: if I walk in, I might not walk out. The gatekeeper waited. Somewhere behind the shimmer, Tomás Herrera was disappearing into a market that, according to every file Quinn had ever read, did not exist. Quinn took a step forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1111
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"mechanical"
count1
2
word"structure"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"mechanical"
2"structure"
3"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1097
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1084
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tomás2
Herrera8
Raven1
Nest1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris3
Tube2
Deptford1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Raven"
4"Deptford"
globalScore0.946
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like rosemary burnt in a pan"
17.68% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.823
wordCount1097
matches
0"not brick, but the painted canvas of a construction hoarding"
1"not fear, Quinn thought, but something closer to warning"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.39
std24.5
cv0.692
sampleLengths
075
12
252
346
41
585
646
72
831
946
1047
1134
1241
1391
1422
152
1649
1742
1863
1924
2054
2147
2233
234
2458
257
2637
2714
2811
2926
305
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"was gone"
1"been gone"
2"were gone"
6.20% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was going"
1"was trying"
2"was weighing"
3"was arguing"
4"was disappearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences92
ratio0.12
matches
0"Her watch caught the edge of a streetlamp as she ran—the worn leather strap she'd bought in her first year on the job."
1"She'd tailed him on foot because she'd known—known the way she'd known things for three years now, since Morris—that putting a vehicle on him would spook whatever net she was trying to catch."
2"For half a second she saw his face under the sodium light—warm brown eyes, the scar on his forearm exposed where he'd pushed his sleeve up to run—and then he was gone, swallowed by the shadow of a bricked-up railway arch."
3"Instead her shoulder glanced off something that gave—not brick, but the painted canvas of a construction hoarding."
4"Below her, somewhere down those steps, she could hear Herrera's footfalls slapping away, and something else—a low thrum, not mechanical, not music, closer to the sound a crowded room makes through a thick wall."
5"Not the ordinary static of a weak signal, either—this was a sound like whispering, like a voice played backwards very quietly under the hiss."
6"Her torch beam bounced ahead of her—dust, peeling posters from the nineties, a rat that didn't bother running."
7"In their place, torchlight—actual torches, pitch and flame—and stalls."
8"He was arguing with a woman at the gate—a figure in a long coat who held out her palm."
9"Herrera reached into his collar, pulled something off over his head—not the medallion, something else, something small and pale and bone-coloured—and pressed it into the woman's hand."
10"His eyes widened—not fear, Quinn thought, but something closer to warning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1103
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.038077969174977334
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005439709882139619
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.92
std9.46
cv0.793
sampleLengths
029
122
224
32
44
522
68
718
823
92
1011
1110
121
139
143
1511
1629
1733
185
1941
202
2111
2217
233
2412
2519
262
2713
284
299
3034
3110
323
333
3418
356
361
3724
3810
391
4010
415
426
4340
442
4527
4622
472
4816
4918
68.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4673913043478261
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences83
matches
0"Instead her shoulder glanced off"
1"Somewhere a bell rang three"
2"Just a moment."
3"Then he was through."
4"Somewhere behind the shimmer, Tomás"
ratio0.06
75.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences83
matches
0"He didn't look back."
1"He ducked between two parked"
2"She'd left her backup three"
3"Her watch caught the edge"
4"She'd chased a lot of"
5"He cut left into a"
6"Her breath came out in"
7"She'd clocked him outside The"
8"She'd tailed him on foot"
9"She hit the arch at"
10"She shoved through."
11"She'd walked past this arch"
12"She reached for her radio"
13"She killed it and clipped"
14"She'd waited for backup then."
15"She'd done it by the"
16"She'd stood at the door"
17"She thought about that now,"
18"She took the steps two"
19"Her torch beam bounced ahead"
ratio0.361
98.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences83
matches
0"Rain came down in sheets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted a"
2"He didn't look back."
3"He ducked between two parked"
4"Quinn's radio crackled uselessly under"
5"She'd left her backup three"
6"Her watch caught the edge"
7"She'd chased a lot of"
8"None of them had ever"
9"He cut left into a"
10"Quinn's lungs burned."
11"Her breath came out in"
12"She'd clocked him outside The"
13"She'd tailed him on foot"
14"Herrera glanced over his shoulder."
15"She hit the arch at"
16"She shoved through."
17"She'd walked past this arch"
18"Quinn drew up short."
19"Water ran off her hair"
ratio0.723
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted a low iron railing, her boots hitting puddled pavement hard enough to send water up to her knees."
1"Instead her shoulder glanced off something that gave—not brick, but the painted canvas of a construction hoarding."
2"Her torch beam bounced ahead of her—dust, peeling posters from the nineties, a rat that didn't bother running."
3"Glass jars held things that moved when nothing touched them."
4"The woman's face, under the hood, was patient in the particular way of something that had been patient for a long time."
5"Somewhere behind the shimmer, Tomás Herrera was disappearing into a market that, according to every file Quinn had ever read, did not exist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2427%