Run: 2026-04-24-01KPZTZ6VA93QT3DDVZ3YT42BC

Run Details

Duration:
27.3s
Cost:
$0.056200
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory ducked between the oak standing stones just as the last of the twilight bled out of the sky. The grove took her in with a sigh. That was how it felt — a long, slow exhalation pressed against her skin, warm where the park behind her had been cold. She stopped three paces inside the ring and listened to her own breathing until it steadied. "Alright," she muttered. "I'm here. Now what?" The pendant answered before anyone else could. A flutter of heat against her sternum, faint as a moth's wing, then nothing. She pressed her palm flat over it through her jumper. Still warm. Barely. Eva had sworn the grove was safe. Eva had sworn a lot of things. Rory moved deeper, boots soundless on moss that shouldn't have been this green in November. Wildflowers nodded around her ankles — foxgloves, cornflowers, something pale and bell-shaped she didn't know the name of. They shouldn't have been blooming. They were blooming anyway. She'd come for answers. That was the plan. Sit in the middle of the clearing, wait for whoever had left the pendant in her letterbox three weeks ago, and ask the questions she'd been carrying around like stones in her pockets. Simple. Except the grove was wrong tonight. She couldn't place it at first. The air tasted the same — that strange sweetness she remembered, half honey, half iron. The stones stood where they'd stood before. The moon, when she looked up, hung exactly where it should, a clean white coin slightly past full. And yet. Rory turned a slow circle, counting. Seven oaks. There had been seven last time. There were seven now. Good. She counted again to be sure. Eight. Her mouth went dry. She counted a third time, forcing her eyes from trunk to trunk, and got seven, and then on the fourth pass she got seven again and told herself firmly that she had miscounted the one time, that the light in here played tricks, that the moon through branches made shadows look solid. She sat down. The moss received her like a cushion someone had plumped in advance. She pulled her knees up, tucked her hands inside her sleeves against the cold that wasn't actually there, and waited. A minute passed. Two. Somewhere in the trees, a woman laughed. Rory's head snapped up. The sound had been soft — three notes, low in the throat, the kind of laugh you gave someone across a pillow. It came from her left, maybe twenty feet out, past where the wildflowers thinned into bracken. "Hello?" Nothing answered. The flowers bobbed. A single oak leaf spiralled down and landed on her knee, crisp and brown and entirely out of place among all that green. She picked it up. Turned it over. The underside was black and slick, like something rotted from the inside. She dropped it. "Isolde?" She tried the name Eva had given her, even though Eva had said never to use it out loud here unless she was sure. "If that's you, I've got the pendant. I came." The laugh again. Closer this time, or maybe further — the grove played tricks with distance the way it played tricks with time. Rory stood up slowly, very slowly, and put her back to the nearest oak. The bark was warm. Not sun-warm. Not the remembered warmth of a summer day. Warm like a body was warm. She felt it through her jumper, a steady human heat at her shoulder blades, and she did not turn around. She did not want to know what the tree felt like if she turned around. She stepped away from it instead. Out into the middle of the clearing, where at least there was nothing close enough to touch her. The pendant pulsed. Once. Harder than before. She looked down and caught the tail end of its glow fading under the wool, a dull red like a coal cooling. "Okay," she whispered. "Okay, okay, okay." Movement, at the edge of her sight. She didn't turn her head. She'd learned that trick as a kid, back when her father used to say the worst thing you could do to a frightened dog was look it in the eye. She slid her gaze sideways instead, and caught — something. A shape between two of the oaks. Tall. Thin. Standing the way people stood when they didn't know yet how to wear a body properly, shoulders a fraction too high, head angled a fraction too far. When she looked directly, there was only a tree. She looked away. The shape came back, in the soft corner of her vision, nearer now by a pace. It hadn't moved while she watched. It had moved while she hadn't. Her breath came shallow. She counted oaks again without meaning to. Nine. "Right," she said aloud, and her voice sounded small and unreasonable in all that listening quiet. "If you're going to do something, do it. I haven't got all night." The grove considered her. That was the only way she could describe the weight that settled on her shoulders then — the sense of being weighed, measured, held up against some standard she hadn't been told. The wildflowers stopped bobbing. The air, which had been moving without any wind she could feel, went perfectly still. Even her own heartbeat seemed to quiet, as though it were trying not to be overheard. A twig snapped behind her. She didn't turn. Footsteps — soft, deliberate, the pad of something walking on two feet that had perhaps been four not long ago. They circled her at a distance, moss muffling most of the sound but not all. A breath, drawn in long through what might have been a nose. Held. Released against the back of her neck from a distance no breath should have been able to cross. The pendant went cold. Not warm, not pulsing — cold, a sudden bright coldness that bit through the wool and into her skin like a coin left on ice. Rory closed her fist around it through her jumper and squeezed until her knuckles ached. "I'm not alone, am I," she said, very quietly. Behind her, close enough now to kiss her ear, something laughed the same three soft notes.
created_at"2026-04-24T13:30:50.104Z" 4/24/2026, 1:30:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
71.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"firmly"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"sense of"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"firmly"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"sense of"
5"measured"
6"standard"
7"could feel"
8"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1048
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1009
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
November1
Eva4
Movement1
Rory6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like if she turned around"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1048
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"learned that trick"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean24.37
std21.02
cv0.862
sampleLengths
019
147
27
334
414
542
642
76
846
92
1019
116
121
1356
143
1532
164
177
1842
191
2028
2122
2234
2337
244
2551
2624
2729
286
2988
309
3131
3212
3329
344
3567
365
373
3866
394
4040
419
4216
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"been seven"
1"being weighed"
2"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were blooming"
1"were trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences107
ratio0.084
matches
0"That was how it felt — a long, slow exhalation pressed against her skin, warm where the park behind her had been cold."
1"Wildflowers nodded around her ankles — foxgloves, cornflowers, something pale and bell-shaped she didn't know the name of."
2"The air tasted the same — that strange sweetness she remembered, half honey, half iron."
3"The sound had been soft — three notes, low in the throat, the kind of laugh you gave someone across a pillow."
4"Closer this time, or maybe further — the grove played tricks with distance the way it played tricks with time."
5"She slid her gaze sideways instead, and caught — something."
6"That was the only way she could describe the weight that settled on her shoulders then — the sense of being weighed, measured, held up against some standard she hadn't been told."
7"Footsteps — soft, deliberate, the pad of something walking on two feet that had perhaps been four not long ago."
8"Not warm, not pulsing — cold, a sudden bright coldness that bit through the wool and into her skin like a coin left on ice."
86.10% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1002
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.05588822355289421
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013972055888223553
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean9.79
std8.81
cv0.9
sampleLengths
019
18
223
316
43
54
67
714
810
92
101
117
127
1315
1418
155
164
174
184
1933
201
216
226
2315
247
2518
262
276
282
296
304
311
326
331
344
3552
363
3712
3820
393
401
417
424
4322
4416
451
462
473
4823
494
61.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4485981308411215
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners48
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Somewhere in the trees, a"
1"Even her own heartbeat seemed"
ratio0.024
74.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences85
matches
0"She stopped three paces inside"
1"She pressed her palm flat"
2"They shouldn't have been blooming."
3"They were blooming anyway."
4"She'd come for answers."
5"She couldn't place it at"
6"She counted again to be"
7"Her mouth went dry."
8"She counted a third time,"
9"She sat down."
10"She pulled her knees up,"
11"It came from her left,"
12"She picked it up."
13"She dropped it."
14"She tried the name Eva"
15"She felt it through her"
16"She did not want to"
17"She stepped away from it"
18"She looked down and caught"
19"She didn't turn her head."
ratio0.365
54.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences85
matches
0"Rory ducked between the oak"
1"The grove took her in"
2"That was how it felt"
3"She stopped three paces inside"
4"The pendant answered before anyone"
5"A flutter of heat against"
6"She pressed her palm flat"
7"Eva had sworn the grove"
8"Eva had sworn a lot"
9"Rory moved deeper, boots soundless"
10"Wildflowers nodded around her ankles"
11"They shouldn't have been blooming."
12"They were blooming anyway."
13"She'd come for answers."
14"That was the plan."
15"She couldn't place it at"
16"The air tasted the same"
17"The stones stood where they'd"
18"The moon, when she looked"
19"Rory turned a slow circle,"
ratio0.812
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory moved deeper, boots soundless on moss that shouldn't have been this green in November."
1"She pulled her knees up, tucked her hands inside her sleeves against the cold that wasn't actually there, and waited."
2"That was the only way she could describe the weight that settled on her shoulders then — the sense of being weighed, measured, held up against some standard she…"
3"Even her own heartbeat seemed to quiet, as though it were trying not to be overheard."
4"Footsteps — soft, deliberate, the pad of something walking on two feet that had perhaps been four not long ago."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
77.4765%