| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1047 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1047 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1056 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1016 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Tree" | | discoveredNames | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 6 | | God | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | You | 2 | | Tree | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "God" | | 3 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Isabella" | | 1 | "Plantation" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Heathrow" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "dark that seemed to have a shape if she looked at it sideways and none at all if she looked at it straight on" | | 1 | "as if considering her from an angle she couldn't see" |
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| 10.61% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.894 | | wordCount | 1056 | | matches | | 0 | "not the flash of a deer's eye, not a bin bag snagged on a branch, but the suggestion of a shape" | | 1 | "not a bin bag snagged on a branch, but the suggestion of a shape" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 24.56 | | std | 21 | | cv | 0.855 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 13 |
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| 97.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "been tucked" | | 1 | "been expected" |
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| 75.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "was answering" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Twice, she'd seen the beam catch on something pale between the trees — not the flash of a deer's eye, not a bin bag snagged on a branch, but the suggestion of a shape that chose, at the last second, not to be there." | | 1 | "The torch caught a flicker of white ahead — a deer, she told herself, just a fallow doe standing broadside on the path — but when she raised the beam properly there was only a birch trunk, peeling, leaning at an angle that looked wrong in a way she couldn't place." | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat gave a harder pulse, almost a kick, and the heat of it made her gasp — a small sound, shamefully loud." | | 3 | "Under it, something else — a rhythm that was not her heart, slower, heavier, coming from the ground or the air or the space behind her left ear." | | 4 | "A gap between two oaks where the path should have continued and didn't, because the path had bent while she wasn't looking, or she had, and —" | | 5 | "And then — and this was the worst of it, worse than the breathing, worse than the snap of the twig — it took one small, deliberate step to the side." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 429 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.02097902097902098 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004662004662004662 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 11.73 | | std | 11.46 | | cv | 0.977 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 51 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 57.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4111111111111111 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Twice, she'd seen the beam" | | 1 | "Only the dark between trunks," | | 2 | "Somewhere off in the trees," |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 90.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat with her hands" | | 1 | "Her voice came out flat" | | 2 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 3 | "She got out." | | 4 | "She knew this." | | 5 | "She'd walked here in daylight" | | 6 | "Her boots on the gravel" | | 7 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 8 | "She didn't turn her head." | | 9 | "She'd spent enough time in" | | 10 | "You kept walking." | | 11 | "You let your peripheral vision" | | 12 | "She risked a glance." | | 13 | "She passed it." | | 14 | "She counted to five and" | | 15 | "She pressed her hand flat" | | 16 | "It was a long, considered" | | 17 | "It came from her right." | | 18 | "It was not the wind." | | 19 | "She stood in the middle" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory killed the engine three" | | 1 | "She sat with her hands" | | 2 | "Her voice came out flat" | | 3 | "The pendant lay warm against" | | 4 | "A deeper heat, low and" | | 5 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 6 | "Eva had told her the" | | 7 | "Rory didn't know what she" | | 8 | "That was the whole point" | | 9 | "She got out." | | 10 | "The door thunked shut behind" | | 11 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 12 | "She knew this." | | 13 | "She'd walked here in daylight" | | 14 | "Tonight, there was none of" | | 15 | "Her boots on the gravel" | | 16 | "The torch on her phone" | | 17 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 18 | "Something moved at her left" | | 19 | "She didn't turn her head." |
| | ratio | 0.675 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "As though the distance between" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Twice, she'd seen the beam catch on something pale between the trees — not the flash of a deer's eye, not a bin bag snagged on a branch, but the suggestion of a…" | | 1 | "Not the friendly warmth of something that had been tucked under a jumper all evening." | | 2 | "The door thunked shut behind her and the sound travelled further than it should have, rolling across the open grass and coming back thinner, as though something…" | | 3 | "The torch caught a flicker of white ahead — a deer, she told herself, just a fallow doe standing broadside on the path — but when she raised the beam properly t…" | | 4 | "It was a long, considered exhalation, the sound of a creature that had been holding its breath for a while and had decided, finally, that it didn't need to any …" | | 5 | "Under it, something else — a rhythm that was not her heart, slower, heavier, coming from the ground or the air or the space behind her left ear." | | 6 | "The not-shape tilted, as if considering her from an angle she couldn't see." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |