Run: 2026-04-24-01KPZV32N48DX6H0GPVNZM0J3B

Run Details

Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.059710
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt was still sliding back when Rory heard him clear his throat on the other side of the door. She knew that sound. She'd catalogued it, once — the particular dry rasp Lucien Moreau made when he was about to say something he'd rehearsed in a cab ride over. She pulled the door open two inches, kept her foot braced behind it, and let him see exactly as much of her face as she wanted him to. "No." "You haven't heard the question, chérie." "I don't need to." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring at the stranger with the kind of uncomplicated welcome Rory resented on principle. Traitor cat. She nudged him back with her heel. Lucien was leaning on the ivory cane the way other men leaned on door frames — an arrangement of limbs designed to look accidental. Charcoal suit, no rain on the shoulders despite the weather doing its worst on Brick Lane, hair still that absurd platinum. The amber eye caught the hallway light. The black one gave nothing back. "Six weeks," he said. "Has it been?" "You know precisely how long it's been." She opened the door another inch, because keeping it closed required more strength than she wanted him to see her using. "If you came to apologise, you can post it. Eva's got a letterbox." "I didn't come to apologise." "Then we're really not having this conversation." He smiled. Not the one he used on clients. The other one, smaller, the one she'd been stupid enough once to think belonged to her. "May I come in, Aurora." "Rory." "May I come in, Rory." She stepped back. She told herself it was because the hallway smelled of curry and cigarettes and she didn't want the neighbours listening, and then she told herself she was a liar, and then she shut the door behind him and threw all three deadbolts out of sheer habit. He took in the flat the way he took in everything — quickly, completely, and without the decency to pretend he hadn't. Books stacked on the radiator. Eva's research pinned to the wall in a spiral Rory had given up trying to understand. A half-drunk mug of tea going cold on a grimoire. "She's not here," Rory said. "I know." "Of course you know." "I waited until she left." "Of course you did." He didn't sit. She didn't offer. They stood in the narrow stretch of carpet between the sofa and the kitchenette, and Rory folded her arms because she needed somewhere to put her hands that wasn't near him. "Say what you came to say." Lucien looked down at the head of the cane, turned it a quarter. "I was wrong." "Congratulations." "About the Malphora business. About what I asked of you." "You didn't ask. You arranged." "Yes." "There's a difference." "There is." He lifted his eyes. The amber one was warmer than she wanted. "I'm aware of the difference, Rory. I knew it then." She hated the way her name sat in his mouth. He said it like it was French, rolled the R a fraction too long, and it did something uninvited to the base of her spine. "So you knew, and you did it anyway." "I did it anyway." "Well." She breathed out through her nose. "Brilliant. Full marks for honesty. Door's behind you." He didn't move. "Lucien." "I haven't finished." "I have." "You have not." He set the cane against the side of the sofa, a small surrender of armament that irritated her more than the weapon itself had. "The night you left — " "I didn't leave. You sent me away." "The night I sent you away," he corrected, with the patience of a man repeating the correct verb to a stubborn student, "I told myself I was protecting you. I've had six weeks to understand that I was, in fact, protecting myself." She laughed — a short, unlovely sound. "From what, exactly? My devastating conversation?" "From the fact that you matter to me." The kettle ticked as it cooled on the counter. Ptolemy leapt onto the arm of the sofa and then onto Lucien's shoulder, because Ptolemy had, Rory decided, always been a bad judge of character. "Don't." She kept her voice low. "Don't come in here after six weeks of nothing and say something like that in my friend's living room at —" she glanced at the clock, "— ten past nine on a Tuesday." "When would you prefer." "Never would be ideal." "Rory." "You don't get to use that voice." "Which voice." "The one from Marseille." He went still. She watched him do it — the small, careful re-gathering of a man who had forgotten, briefly, to be the Frenchman in the charcoal suit, and remembered now that she'd seen him without it. "I didn't know you thought of it as Marseille." "I think of it as a lot of things." "Tell me one." "No." He stepped closer. Not far. One foot's worth of carpet. She should have stepped back; she didn't, and that was her own fault, and she'd examine it later when he wasn't near enough that she could smell the bergamot on his collar. "Aurora." "Rory." "Rory." He said it properly this time, the Welsh lilt of it, the way her mother said it. He'd been listening. He always listened. That was the problem with him. "If you tell me to leave, I will go. I won't come back unless you ask. You have my word, for whatever you think it's worth." "Not much." "Understood." She looked at his mouth, and then at the amber eye, and then at the floor, because the floor at least was not trying to ruin her evening. "Move the cat," she said. "Pardon?" "Ptolemy. Off your shoulder. He sheds." Lucien lifted the tabby down with both hands, as if the animal were made of glass, and set him on the cushion. Ptolemy gave him a slow, appraising blink and began to wash a paw. Rory uncrossed her arms. Crossed them again. Pressed the pad of her thumb to the crescent scar on her left wrist, the small childhood shape of it, the thing she did when she needed to remember she'd survived worse than a man in a good suit. "You get ten minutes," she said. "Sit down. Don't take the armchair, Eva will know." He sat on the sofa. She stayed standing. "Talk."
created_at"2026-04-24T13:32:56.88Z" 4/24/2026, 1:32:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.159
leniency0.317
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1066
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"really"
2"quickly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1066
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1073
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount738
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Lucien5
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
French1
Ptolemy4
Frenchman1
Welsh1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"French"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1073
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"knew that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean14.5
std16.54
cv1.14
sampleLengths
051
128
21
36
44
528
658
74
83
97
1034
115
127
1330
141
155
1649
1753
185
192
204
215
224
2337
246
2516
261
2710
285
291
303
3124
3235
338
344
3515
363
371
383
392
4033
417
4242
437
446
458
4634
4739
484
494
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"were made"
47.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was still sliding"
1"was leaning"
2"was not trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences112
ratio0.054
matches
0"She'd catalogued it, once — the particular dry rasp Lucien Moreau made when he was about to say something he'd rehearsed in a cab ride over."
1"Lucien was leaning on the ivory cane the way other men leaned on door frames — an arrangement of limbs designed to look accidental."
2"He took in the flat the way he took in everything — quickly, completely, and without the decency to pretend he hadn't."
3"She laughed — a short, unlovely sound."
4"She watched him do it — the small, careful re-gathering of a man who had forgotten, briefly, to be the Frenchman in the charcoal suit, and remembered now that she'd seen him without it."
5"She should have stepped back; she didn't, and that was her own fault, and she'd examine it later when he wasn't near enough that she could smell the bergamot on his collar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount734
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.039509536784741145
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008174386920980926
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean9.58
std9.99
cv1.043
sampleLengths
021
14
226
328
41
56
64
719
82
97
1024
1121
127
136
144
153
167
1721
1813
195
207
212
227
2316
245
251
265
273
2846
2922
305
3116
3210
335
342
354
365
374
383
393
4031
416
4213
433
441
4510
465
471
483
496
58.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4107142857142857
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences52
matches
0"She knew that sound."
1"She'd catalogued it, once —"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"She nudged him back with"
4"She opened the door another"
5"She stepped back."
6"She told herself it was"
7"He took in the flat"
8"He didn't sit."
9"She didn't offer."
10"They stood in the narrow"
11"He lifted his eyes"
12"She hated the way her"
13"He said it like it"
14"She breathed out through her"
15"He didn't move."
16"He set the cane against"
17"he corrected, with the patience"
18"She laughed — a short,"
19"She kept her voice low"
ratio0.577
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences52
matches
0"The third deadbolt was still"
1"She knew that sound."
2"She'd catalogued it, once —"
3"She pulled the door open"
4"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
5"She nudged him back with"
6"Lucien was leaning on the"
7"Charcoal suit, no rain on"
8"The amber eye caught the"
9"The black one gave nothing"
10"She opened the door another"
11"The other one, smaller, the"
12"She stepped back."
13"She told herself it was"
14"He took in the flat"
15"Books stacked on the radiator."
16"Eva's research pinned to the"
17"A half-drunk mug of tea"
18"He didn't sit."
19"She didn't offer."
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"They stood in the narrow stretch of carpet between the sofa and the kitchenette, and Rory folded her arms because she needed somewhere to put her hands that was…"
1"She watched him do it — the small, careful re-gathering of a man who had forgotten, briefly, to be the Frenchman in the charcoal suit, and remembered now that s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She breathed (breathe)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.063
78.5666%