Run: 2026-04-24-01KPZV64ZR3NKX0SM3N3KF8S8C

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Duration:
28.4s
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$0.059485
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a sound like a neck cracking, and Rory pulled the door open with her sleeve still damp from the sink. Lucien stood on the landing. He had one shoulder against the jamb, the ivory cane tucked under his arm, and rain beaded across the charcoal wool of his suit as though the weather had failed to properly commit. The stairwell light turned his hair to something silvered and unreal. One amber eye, one black. Both of them landing on her like they had the right. "You're soaked." "An astute observation." His mouth moved, not quite a smile. "May I come in, or are we conducting this on the stairs for the entertainment of your neighbours?" She didn't move. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, indifferent to the stand-off, and she bent to scoop him up mostly for something to do with her hands. The cat was warm. Lucien was not. She could feel the cold coming off him from three feet away, which was unfair, because the rest of him looked like a photograph someone had staged deliberately. "It's been four months, Luc." "Seventeen weeks. But who counts." "You, apparently." He inclined his head, conceding it. "I need ten minutes. If after ten minutes you still wish me gone, I will go, and I will not darken your curry-scented threshold again." She stepped back. It wasn't a decision so much as a capitulation to the inevitable. He walked past her with that deliberate, unhurried stride, and the smell of him — tobacco, something greener beneath it, the cold rain — moved through the flat like a guest who already knew the furniture. He set the cane against Eva's bookshelf. He didn't sit. Rory shut the door. Three deadbolts. She took her time with each one. "Drink?" "Please." She poured whiskey into a chipped mug because all the glasses were in the sink, and she handed it to him without meeting his eyes. His fingers grazed hers. He had done it on purpose. She had known he would and had let it happen anyway, and she hated the small bright pulse it set off beneath her sternum. "Talk." "Directly to business. I'd forgotten how bracing you are." "Nine minutes." He laughed once, low, and took a slow pull from the mug. She watched his throat work. She looked away. "A name came across my desk this morning," he said. "Yours. Attached to a contract I did not place and cannot trace, which is — you will appreciate — not a situation I find acceptable." "So this is a business call." "This is a call that concerns your continued breathing, Aurora, which I happen to consider my business whether you do or not." "Don't." "Don't what." "Don't say my name like that." He set the mug down on Eva's cluttered desk with a soft click. A column of research notes tilted and slid. He caught the papers with one hand, righted them, and when he straightened he was closer than he had been, close enough that she could see where the rain had dampened the collar of his shirt, the faint flush under his jaw that suggested he had come up the stairs faster than he wanted her to know. "I spent seventeen weeks," he said, quiet, "trying to decide if I regretted it." "That's nice for you." "Rory." "No." She pressed Ptolemy tighter against her chest. The cat made an aggrieved noise and squirmed free, leaping to the floor with a thud of reproach. Her arms felt suddenly, stupidly empty. "You don't get to come here wet and handsome and talk about regret. You left. That was the arrangement. You told me very clearly what you were and what you weren't and I agreed to it, and then you walked out of that hotel room and didn't even—" "I know what I did." "You don't, actually. You think you do. You think you spared me something." "Did I not?" She looked at him then, properly, for the first time since she'd opened the door. The amber eye had gone soft. The black one, as always, told her nothing. "You spared yourself something," she said. "Don't confuse the two." Silence settled between them like dust. Outside, someone on Brick Lane was shouting at a taxi. Somewhere in the flat, a kettle she didn't remember putting on began its low climb toward a whistle. Lucien exhaled through his nose. "That's fair." "I know it's fair. I've had seventeen weeks to refine it." "Also fair." He didn't move. She didn't move. The kettle escalated and she crossed the room to deal with it only because staying still had become impossible, and he turned to watch her go, and in the galley kitchen with her back to him she shut her eyes and gripped the counter and reminded herself that she was twenty-five years old and had already been ruined once by a man with charm and a temper, and this one only had the charm, which did not make him safer, only more interesting. "The contract," she said, to the cupboard. "Who took it." "I don't know yet." "When will you know." "Tonight. Tomorrow. Soon." A pause. "I'd like you not to be alone while I find out." She laughed, a short flat sound. "Offering your protection, are you." "I'm offering my sofa and a man at the door who owes me favours. The protection is secondary and comes with the property." "And where will you be sleeping, in this arrangement." "Wherever you tell me to." She turned. He hadn't moved from where she'd left him, one hand resting on the back of Eva's reading chair, the other hanging at his side with the loose grace of a man who had never in his life been caught off-guard by a room. But his jaw was tight. And the flush under it hadn't gone down. "Ten minutes is up, Luc." "I know." "You're still here." "I know that as well." She picked up the whiskey bottle. Poured herself a measure. Did not offer him a refill, though he was watching the bottle with faint amusement, as though he could see the shape of her next sentence forming before she made it. "The sofa's broken," she said at last. "Eva sat on it wrong." "I'll manage." "Fine." "Fine?" "Don't make me say it twice." He didn't. He only inclined his head, picked up the cane, and crossed to the window to look down at the wet street — giving her, she realised, the small mercy of his back, so she could finish her drink without him watching her hand shake.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.269
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"charm"
count2
highlights
0"could feel"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen84
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount753
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Silence1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silence"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"looked like a photograph someone had stag"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1108
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean17.59
std22.1
cv1.257
sampleLengths
025
15
260
32
428
53
659
75
85
92
1031
113
1258
1313
141
151
1659
171
189
192
2020
2135
226
2322
241
252
266
2778
2814
294
301
3180
325
3313
343
3529
3610
3734
387
3911
402
4189
4210
434
444
4516
4611
4723
489
495
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"been ruined"
1"been caught"
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs132
matches
0"was shouting"
1"was watching"
87.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences104
ratio0.019
matches
0"He walked past her with that deliberate, unhurried stride, and the smell of him — tobacco, something greener beneath it, the cold rain — moved through the flat like a guest who already knew the furniture."
1"He only inclined his head, picked up the cane, and crossed to the window to look down at the wet street — giving her, she realised, the small mercy of his back, so she could finish her drink without him watching her hand shake."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount753
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.0398406374501992
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013280212483399735
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean10.65
std13.03
cv1.223
sampleLengths
025
15
233
311
45
511
62
710
818
93
1024
114
123
1328
145
155
162
176
1825
193
2012
2136
227
233
244
252
267
271
281
2925
304
316
3224
331
349
352
3612
375
383
3910
4025
416
4222
431
442
456
4613
478
4857
4914
63.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4326923076923077
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners45
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Somewhere in the flat, a"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences54
matches
0"He had one shoulder against"
1"His mouth moved, not quite"
2"She didn't move."
3"She could feel the cold"
4"He inclined his head, conceding"
5"She stepped back."
6"It wasn't a decision so"
7"He walked past her with"
8"He set the cane against"
9"He didn't sit."
10"She took her time with"
11"She poured whiskey into a"
12"His fingers grazed hers."
13"He had done it on"
14"She had known he would"
15"He laughed once, low, and"
16"She watched his throat work."
17"She looked away."
18"He set the mug down"
19"He caught the papers with"
ratio0.593
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Lucien stood on the landing."
2"He had one shoulder against"
3"The stairwell light turned his"
4"Both of them landing on"
5"His mouth moved, not quite"
6"She didn't move."
7"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
8"The cat was warm."
9"Lucien was not."
10"She could feel the cold"
11"He inclined his head, conceding"
12"She stepped back."
13"It wasn't a decision so"
14"He walked past her with"
15"He set the cane against"
16"He didn't sit."
17"Rory shut the door."
18"She took her time with"
19"She poured whiskey into a"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The kettle escalated and she crossed the room to deal with it only because staying still had become impossible, and he turned to watch her go, and in the galley…"
1"He hadn't moved from where she'd left him, one hand resting on the back of Eva's reading chair, the other hanging at his side with the loose grace of a man who …"
2"Did not offer him a refill, though he was watching the bottle with faint amusement, as though he could see the shape of her next sentence forming before she mad…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His mouth moved, not quite a smile"
1"he said, quiet,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.038
78.3809%