Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
79
glossingSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"hum that seemed to come from the ground itself, felt more in her teeth and bones than heard"
1
"petals that seemed to glow from within, tall spires of something that looked like glass but was alive, refracting light into tiny rainbows on the forest floor"
2
"looked like glass but was alive, refracti"
3
"as if testing her weight, deciding whether to hold her"
4
"appeared — slipped under her door at the flat above"
"Like stepping through a membrane — thin, invisible, but real."
1
"The Heartstone Pendant hung against her sternum, and she felt its faint warmth against her skin — not the pulsing she'd come to associate with Hel portals, but something gentler."
2
"Behind Rory, Nyx materialized from the shadow of a beech tree, their form condensing from a silhouette into something almost solid — a tall humanoid shape carved from living darkness, violet eyes burning faintly in the recesses where a face should have been."
3
"The moment she committed — really committed, both feet past the oaks — the world folded."
4
"Traffic, dogs, the distant thrum of an airplane — gone, replaced by a silence so complete she could hear her own heartbeat."
5
"Ancient oaks formed a rough circle — no, two concentric circles — their massive trunks connected by roots that arched above the ground in sweeping curves, creating natural archways."
6
"A dragonfly — or something shaped like a dragonfly, with wings that shifted from amber to deep violet — hovered above a cluster of blue flowers."
7
"Where it touched them, their shadow-body rippled, and they flinched — a subtle thing, a tightening of the darkness that comprised their shoulders."
8
"\"I am always something. 'Okay' is a mortal word for a mortal state.\" But they stayed close, and their form held its shape — solid, present, deliberately *here* rather than slipping into the spaces between realms where, Rory suspected, they felt more at home."
9
"A stream crossed their path, water so clear she could see every stone on its bed — and some of those stones seemed to be moving, rolling slowly against the current as if they had their own intentions."
10
"The wildflowers gave way to trees bearing fruit she couldn't name — deep purple orbs with skins like velvet, elongated golden shapes that hung in clusters like chandeliers, small red things that grew in spirals along the branches."
11
"It had warmed further, pulsing now — a slow, steady rhythm like a sleeping heartbeat."
12
"She turned to look at Rory, and her expression was careful, measured — the expression of someone who could not lie and was choosing every word with precision."
13
"She'd known, on some level, since the moment the pendant had appeared — slipped under her door at the flat above Silas' bar, no note, no explanation."
14
"She'd been wearing it for three weeks, and in that time she'd felt its warmth near the bar's basement door, which Silas kept locked, and once — just once — when she'd passed a woman on the street whose shadow moved wrong, stretched too long and too thin against the pavement."
15
"The compulsion that bound her — the Fae inability to lie — was not cruelty."
16
"Not hot — not even unpleasant — but alive, as if the earth itself had a pulse that matched the pendant's rhythm."
17
"\"I said I would offer what I can.\" Isolde stepped forward, and the air around her shimmered — just for a moment, just at the edges, as if reality itself was thinner where she stood."
18
"It was the first time Rory had seen her smile, and it was sad and bright and old — three hundred years old, she'd said."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
14
matches
0
"They stood like sentinels along the path, ancient and enormous, their trunks wider than her flat was long, bark fissured into deep grooves that looked almost li…"
1
"She paused at the threshold, one foot still on the ordinary path and one foot on earth that felt somehow more solid beneath her boot sole."
2
"The seer stood on the other side of the boundary, silver hair catching light that didn't seem to come from any particular direction."
3
"Behind Rory, Nyx materialized from the shadow of a beech tree, their form condensing from a silhouette into something almost solid — a tall humanoid shape carve…"
4
"Ancient oaks formed a rough circle — no, two concentric circles — their massive trunks connected by roots that arched above the ground in sweeping curves, creat…"
5
"Not the modest white and purple of English wildflowers, but things she had no names for: spiraling blue blossoms the size of her fist, clusters of gold-veined p…"
6
"Everything was impossibly vivid, as if the colour saturation of the ordinary world had been turned up past reason."
7
"A dragonfly — or something shaped like a dragonfly, with wings that shifted from amber to deep violet — hovered above a cluster of blue flowers."
8
"Where it touched them, their shadow-body rippled, and they flinched — a subtle thing, a tightening of the darkness that comprised their shoulders."
9
"A stream crossed their path, water so clear she could see every stone on its bed — and some of those stones seemed to be moving, rolling slowly against the curr…"
10
"A bridge of woven roots arched over it, and as Rory stepped onto it, the roots tightened gently beneath her boots, as if testing her weight, deciding whether to…"
11
"She turned to look at Rory, and her expression was careful, measured — the expression of someone who could not lie and was choosing every word with precision."
12
"Not hot — not even unpleasant — but alive, as if the earth itself had a pulse that matched the pendant's rhythm."
13
"Isolde standing between two roots, silver-haired and barefoot and leaving no mark on the world, as if she were a vision that might dissolve if you looked away."