| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "wavering" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "grave" | | 12 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1309 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1306 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a breaking bone, from the tre" | | 1 | "its glow now visibly illuminating the un" |
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| 47.21% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.528 | | wordCount | 1309 | | matches | | 0 | "not with aggression, but with a slow, curious certainty, its fingers" | | 1 | "not just at the edges, but purposefully, sliding between the standing stones, closing t" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 46.75 | | std | 20.3 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 78 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 74 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 46 |
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| 97.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "was followed" | | 2 | "being repositioned" |
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| 1.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t just pointing" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "were moving" | | 3 | "were passing" | | 4 | "was shrinking" | | 5 | "was pointing" |
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| 61.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d catch a glimpse of a shape—taller than a man, leaner, its edges indistinct—against a slightly less black patch of sky, and when she turned her head to look directly, there was only the tree." | | 1 | "The Heartstone’s warmth was no longer comforting; it was an alarm." | | 2 | "It reached for her, not with aggression, but with a slow, curious certainty, its fingers—or what she perceived as fingers—unfurling like dead leaves." | | 3 | "The smell hit her then—rich, cloying earth and something else, the sweet-rot scent of flowers left too long in a vase." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1314 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.0334855403348554 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0076103500761035 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 9.35 | | std | 6.68 | | cv | 0.714 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 34.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.24285714285714285 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 53.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Then a third, from somewhere" | | 1 | "Then they swayed back, hiding" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 85.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d told herself this was" | | 1 | "They were darker than she" | | 2 | "She checked her watch." | | 3 | "She’d entered the park at" | | 4 | "she whispered, the sound swallowed" | | 5 | "She took a step toward" | | 6 | "It came from behind the" | | 7 | "She waited, counting heartbeats against" | | 8 | "She exhaled, a shaky plume" | | 9 | "She forced her shoulders down," | | 10 | "She was here to observe," | | 11 | "She turned, intending to circle" | | 12 | "Her boot caught on something." | | 13 | "It was smooth, and gave" | | 14 | "She looked down." | | 15 | "It lay half-buried in the" | | 16 | "Its warmth was steady, almost" | | 17 | "She lifted it from her" | | 18 | "It pointed, she realized, towards" | | 19 | "She took a step towards" |
| | ratio | 0.336 | |
| 52.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 2 | "She’d told herself this was" | | 3 | "Silas had mentioned the old" | | 4 | "A place people found, sometimes," | | 5 | "The Grove opened before her," | | 6 | "They were darker than she" | | 7 | "The wildflowers, a riot of" | | 8 | "The grass was dry and" | | 9 | "She checked her watch." | | 10 | "She’d entered the park at" | | 11 | "The walk should have taken" | | 12 | "The certainty that she was" | | 13 | "she whispered, the sound swallowed" | | 14 | "The silence was a physical" | | 15 | "She took a step toward" | | 16 | "The pendant warmed another degree." | | 17 | "A soft, wet, *scraping* noise," | | 18 | "It came from behind the" | | 19 | "Aurora froze, her breath held" |
| | ratio | 0.816 | |
| 40.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d told herself this was research, a necessary step to understanding the strange warmth the gem sometimes emitted, a warmth that coincided with days when the…" | | 1 | "They were darker than she remembered from the single daytime photograph she’d found online, their surfaces slick with moss that looked black in the moonlight." | | 2 | "It was pulsing, a frantic rhythm that matched the sudden hammering in her own throat." | | 3 | "A ripple that passed through the pale blooms, as if something large had moved beneath them, underwater." | | 4 | "The moonlight dimmed as if a cloud were passing over, but the sky was clear." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |