Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ00YFE508MR8TFTXA52XQKV

Run Details

Duration:
24.3s
Cost:
$0.004441
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove tasted of rain that hadn't fallen. Aurora Carter pushed through the last curtain of whispering silver birch, the Heartstone pendant a warm, faint pulse against her sternum. She’d told herself this was research, a necessary step to understanding the strange warmth the gem sometimes emitted, a warmth that coincided with days when the city felt… thin. Silas had mentioned the old stories of Richmond Park, of a place where the paths didn’t lead where they should. A place people found, sometimes, but never on purpose. The Grove opened before her, ringed by the ancient oak standing stones. They were darker than she remembered from the single daytime photograph she’d found online, their surfaces slick with moss that looked black in the moonlight. The wildflowers, a riot of colour in the daylight shots, were now pale, ghostly shapes nodding in a breeze she couldn’t feel. The grass was dry and brittle under her boots, crackling like bone. She checked her watch. 11:47 PM. She’d entered the park at 10:30. The walk should have taken thirty minutes, forty at most. But the path had… looped. Or she’d taken a wrong turn. The certainty that she was lost had been a cold stone in her gut until the standing stones materialized from the darkness. “Okay,” she whispered, the sound swallowed by the immense quiet. No traffic hum from the A3. No distant sirens. No owls. The silence was a physical pressure, punctuated only by the dry whisper of the flowers. She took a step toward the centre of the circle. The pendant warmed another degree. A sound. Not the wind. Not a branch settling. A soft, wet, *scraping* noise, like something heavy being dragged slowly over gravel. It came from behind the largest stone to her left. Aurora froze, her breath held tight in her chest. She waited, counting heartbeats against the pendant’s subtle throb. One. Two. Three. Nothing. She exhaled, a shaky plume in the cold air. A deer, maybe. Or a fox dragging something. Rational explanations. She forced her shoulders down, unclenched her jaw. She was here to observe, not to panic. She turned, intending to circle the perimeter, to get a better sense of the space. Her boot caught on something. Not a root. It was smooth, and gave way with a brittle snap. She looked down. A bone. Long and white, looking like it could be from a large dog. Or a small deer. It lay half-buried in the dead grass, as if it had been there for years. Aurora stepped back, her hand going to the pendant. Its warmth was steady, almost comforting now. A beacon in the wrongness. She lifted it from her shirt, the deep crimson gem catching no light from the moon, yet seeming to hold its own internal fire. It pointed, she realized, towards the centre of the grove, where the wildflowers grew thickest. She took a step towards it. The scraping sound came again, closer this time. And it wasn’t one sound. It was an echo, or an answer. Another scrape from the opposite side of the circle. Then a third, from somewhere near the standing stones at the grove’s entrance. Aurora spun around, her eyes straining against the gloved darkness. The shadows between the oaks were deep, velvety, absolute. But they weren’t still. At the very edge of her vision, where sight blurred into suggestion, the darkness seemed to *thicken*. To bulge inward. She’d catch a glimpse of a shape—taller than a man, leaner, its edges indistinct—against a slightly less black patch of sky, and when she turned her head to look directly, there was only the tree. She backed up until her shoulders hit the rough bark of a standing stone. The moss was cold and damp through her jacket. The pendant burned against her palm now, a live coal. It wasn’t just pointing to the centre anymore. It was pulsing, a frantic rhythm that matched the sudden hammering in her own throat. A branch snapped, a sharp crack that sounded like a breaking bone, from the treeline to her right. It was followed by a sigh. Not the wind. A long, slow exhalation of breath, close enough that she felt the faintest brush of displaced air against her cheek. “Who’s there?” Her voice was a thin thread in the suffocating quiet. No echo. The Grove swallowed it whole. The wrongness was a taste in her mouth now, metallic and sweet, like old blood. She looked at her watch. The hands hadn’t moved. 11:47 PM. The same minute. The time here was thick, stagnant, or moving in a loop she couldn’t perceive. The moon, a sliver high in the sky, seemed to have crawled a few inches to the left since she’d arrived, but it felt wrong, like a stage prop being repositioned. A flutter of movement in the flowers. Not the wind. A ripple that passed through the pale blooms, as if something large had moved beneath them, underwater. The flowers swayed aside, revealing a patch of bare earth. Then they swayed back, hiding it. She needed to leave. The thought was clear and sharp. This was a mistake. The Grove was not a place for casual investigation. It was a lock, and she had just jiggled the handle. The Heartstone’s warmth was no longer comforting; it was an alarm. Aurora pushed off the stone, keeping her back to the thickest cluster of standing rocks. She’d retrace her steps, break into a run if she had to. The entrance was there, between those two oaks. She took one step. A hand. Not a hand. A shape, formed of shadow and moonlight, solidified directly in her path. It had too many joints. It reached for her, not with aggression, but with a slow, curious certainty, its fingers—or what she perceived as fingers—unfurling like dead leaves. Aurora didn’t scream. The sound was trapped behind a wall of ice in her chest. She stumbled backward, tripping over the root, or the bone, and went down hard on her side. The impact drove the air from her lungs. She scrambled, crab-walking away, the dry grass tearing under her nails. The shape didn’t pursue. It simply stood where she had been, its form wavering like heat haze, its featureless head tilted. From the treeline, the scraping sound began again, a slow, rhythmic cadence, like a heartbeat. The pendant was a furnace against her collarbone, its glow now visibly illuminating the underside of her chin in a faint, bloody light. The smell hit her then—rich, cloying earth and something else, the sweet-rot scent of flowers left too long in a vase. It was the smell of a grave. The smell of the Grove itself. Aurora scrambled to her feet, her eyes darting. The shadows were moving now, not just at the edges, but purposefully, sliding between the standing stones, closing the gaps. The moonlight dimmed as if a cloud were passing over, but the sky was clear. The Grove was shrinking, folding in on itself. The pendant pulsed, a single, hard beat of heat. It was pointing straight down. She looked at the ground where she had fallen. Beneath the layer of dead grass, the earth was different. Darker, richer. And right where her hand had landed, the soil was disturbed. Something small and pale protruded from it. The corner of a photograph, perhaps. Or a letter. The scraping stopped. The silence that followed was worse. The stillness was absolute, expectant. The shapes in the shadows were motionless, waiting. The Grove held its breath. Aurora looked from the disturbed earth, to the waiting darkness, to the pendant glowing like a warning eye in her hand. She was alone, and she was not alone. She had come here for a reason, and the Grove was about to give her an answer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1314
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1314
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count2
7
word"beacon"
count1
8
word"echo"
count2
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"grave"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"throb"
5"sense of"
6"comforting"
7"beacon"
8"echo"
9"wavering"
10"rhythmic"
11"grave"
12"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1309
ratio0.002
matches
0"scraping"
1"thicken"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1306
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Park1
Grove7
Aurora8
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Grove"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a breaking bone, from the tre"
1"its glow now visibly illuminating the un"
47.21% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.528
wordCount1309
matches
0"not with aggression, but with a slow, curious certainty, its fingers"
1"not just at the edges, but purposefully, sliding between the standing stones, closing t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
81.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean46.75
std20.3
cv0.434
sampleLengths
090
171
255
351
42
552
635
769
860
96
1042
1178
1256
1347
1419
1574
1643
1745
1839
1945
2051
2159
2234
2351
2414
2548
2627
2746
97.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"being dragged"
1"was followed"
2"being repositioned"
1.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs201
matches
0"wasn’t just pointing"
1"was pulsing"
2"were moving"
3"were passing"
4"was shrinking"
5"was pointing"
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences140
ratio0.029
matches
0"She’d catch a glimpse of a shape—taller than a man, leaner, its edges indistinct—against a slightly less black patch of sky, and when she turned her head to look directly, there was only the tree."
1"The Heartstone’s warmth was no longer comforting; it was an alarm."
2"It reached for her, not with aggression, but with a slow, curious certainty, its fingers—or what she perceived as fingers—unfurling like dead leaves."
3"The smell hit her then—rich, cloying earth and something else, the sweet-rot scent of flowers left too long in a vase."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1314
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.0334855403348554
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0076103500761035
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean9.35
std6.68
cv0.714
sampleLengths
011
121
228
31
420
59
612
725
822
912
104
112
126
1310
144
151
166
1722
1810
196
203
212
2215
2310
245
252
263
274
2813
2910
309
319
321
331
341
351
369
373
385
392
408
418
4215
435
443
4510
463
472
4812
494
34.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.24285714285714285
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners34
53.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"Then a third, from somewhere"
1"Then they swayed back, hiding"
ratio0.016
85.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences125
matches
0"She’d told herself this was"
1"They were darker than she"
2"She checked her watch."
3"She’d entered the park at"
4"she whispered, the sound swallowed"
5"She took a step toward"
6"It came from behind the"
7"She waited, counting heartbeats against"
8"She exhaled, a shaky plume"
9"She forced her shoulders down,"
10"She was here to observe,"
11"She turned, intending to circle"
12"Her boot caught on something."
13"It was smooth, and gave"
14"She looked down."
15"It lay half-buried in the"
16"Its warmth was steady, almost"
17"She lifted it from her"
18"It pointed, she realized, towards"
19"She took a step towards"
ratio0.336
52.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences125
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"She’d told herself this was"
3"Silas had mentioned the old"
4"A place people found, sometimes,"
5"The Grove opened before her,"
6"They were darker than she"
7"The wildflowers, a riot of"
8"The grass was dry and"
9"She checked her watch."
10"She’d entered the park at"
11"The walk should have taken"
12"The certainty that she was"
13"she whispered, the sound swallowed"
14"The silence was a physical"
15"She took a step toward"
16"The pendant warmed another degree."
17"A soft, wet, *scraping* noise,"
18"It came from behind the"
19"Aurora froze, her breath held"
ratio0.816
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"To bulge inward."
ratio0.008
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She’d told herself this was research, a necessary step to understanding the strange warmth the gem sometimes emitted, a warmth that coincided with days when the…"
1"They were darker than she remembered from the single daytime photograph she’d found online, their surfaces slick with moss that looked black in the moonlight."
2"It was pulsing, a frantic rhythm that matched the sudden hammering in her own throat."
3"A ripple that passed through the pale blooms, as if something large had moved beneath them, underwater."
4"The moonlight dimmed as if a cloud were passing over, but the sky was clear."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
78.0132%