Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ011SWNZSS73HP686SEBF59

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Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.004949
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door groaned before the third deadbolt even turned. Aurora heard it from the kitchen—a particular pitch of metal protesting against a particular weight of body—and her hand stilled around the kettle handle. Ptolemy leapt off the counter and positioned himself at the hallway entrance, tail rigid, yellow eyes tracking. She didn't call out. The flat was cramped enough that no one could get past the narrow corridor without her knowing, and the deadbolts meant whoever stood outside had been invited in—or had the sense to wait rather than force entry. The curry house below was mid-service; the bass thrum of someone's Bollywood playlist bled through the floorboards. The first deadbolt slid back. Then the second. "Rory." Lucien Moreau's voice carried that particular French cadence even after six years in London, the vowels rounded and unhurried. He hadn't said her name like that since—she stopped the thought where it started. "Door," she said. He understood. A soft exhale. "Open. It was open." She pulled the kettle off the element and stood there in Eva's too-small kitchen with her sleeves rolled to the elbows and her black hair tucked behind both ears. The overhead light buzzed, one filament flickering, and the whole room smelled of the tea she'd already made for herself—builder's brew, milky, nothing like the jasmine she'd learned to prefer in Marseille. She'd never told him she'd learned. Lucien appeared in the kitchen doorway. He'd lost weight since she'd last seen him, or redistributed it—those tailored charcoal suits had given way to something older, a jacket that hung loose across the shoulders, the collar of a dark shirt open at the throat. His platinum blond hair was pushed back from his forehead rather than slicked, revealing a bruise along his left temple that someone had failed to conceal with powder. The ivory-handled cane tapped once against the doorframe as he leaned against it. "You're not Eva," he said. "Observant." She turned back to the kettle, though she didn't need it. She busied her hands with the already-made cup, wrapping both palms around its warmth. "She's in Edinburgh this week. Conference on something I can't pronounce." "I know." "Of course you know." Ptolemy had not moved from his post in the hallway. His gaze shifted between them, tail flicking. The cat had known Lucien once, had slept on his lap while Aurora cooked and Lucien read aloud from French-language papers he claimed were about politics but were always about something else. The cat did not cross the hallway now. "You could have called," Aurora said. "I did. Twice." "Eva's phone." "Yours." He lifted one hand from the cane and produced a phone from his jacket pocket—old-model Nokia, the kind with no traceable app history—and set it on the edge of the counter. Her phone. She recognized the cracked screen protector, the sticker residue from a Cardiff University decal she'd scraped off years ago. "It was on the counter at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei asked me to return it." "Yu-Fei has your number." "Yu-Fei trusts me more than she should." Aurora looked at him then—really looked. The amber eye caught the buzzing kitchen light and threw it back like a coin at the bottom of a clear stream. The black eye, the demon's inheritance, absorbed everything and offered nothing. Two eyes that told contradictory stories. He met her gaze without flinching. "You're hurt," she said. He shifted his weight against the doorframe. "It's nothing." "Don't." His jaw tightened. "Don't do the thing where you make it nothing so I stop asking. You showed up at my door at—" She glanced at the clock on the wall, a plastic cat-shaped thing Eva had owned for as long as she'd known her. Half past ten. "—half past ten at night with a bruise on your face and a phone that isn't yours, and you want me to—what? Take the phone, say thank you, let you leave?" "What would you like me to say instead?" She pulled out one of Eva's mismatched chairs and sat. The kitchen table was buried under research notes, scrolls with marginalia in languages she couldn't read, a half-eaten bowl of rice. She pushed a stack of papers aside and fixed him with a look that had ended arguments in Cardiff moot courts. He stayed where he was. The cane tapped once more against the frame—a habit, she remembered, not a necessity. The blade concealed inside was real, though. The last time she'd watched him draw it, the world had gone sideways. "I left London because you asked me to," he said. "Six years ago. You were clear." "I was twenty-three." "You were certain." "I was angry." The word sat between them, small and precise. The curry-house bassline shifted into something slower. Ptolemy dropped to the floor and padded into the living room, unwilling to participate. Lucien entered the kitchen. He moved the way he always had—each step deliberate, as though the floor were a negotiation he was determined to win—and sat across from her. The chair groaned under his weight. He set the cane across his thighs and folded his hands over the ivory handle, and his heterochromatic gaze stayed on the table between them. "I didn't come to rehash Marseille," he said. "Then why did you come?" "Because someone is looking for you. And they asked me to find you first, which means they know we have history, which means they are either well-informed or dangerous." His amber eye flicked up. "They are both." Aurora reached for her tea and found it cold. She drank it anyway. "Who?" "His name is Soren Vael. I don't know his human name, and I suspect he doesn't have one." Lucien spoke with the flat precision of someone delivering a report, but his left hand—the one not gripping the cane—curled against the wood of the chair's armrest. "He deals in contracts. The kind that bind." She understood the terminology. Binding contracts in the supernatural world weren't metaphors. They were teeth. "Contracts for what?" "For you, specifically. A claim on your services. Your intellect. He's heard about the work you did with Yu-Fei—routing the Greyfell shipment, getting those documents through three layers of wards without setting off a single alarm. He wants that talent under contract." "I don't work under contract." "He doesn't care." She leaned back. The chair scraped against the linoleum. "And you found all this out how? In the two hours since you picked up my phone?" "I found it out over three weeks. The phone was the excuse." His voice dropped at the edges, and for a moment the careful architecture of composure showed its cracks. "I needed a reason to stand at your door again." The words hung in the air between them, not quite honest and not quite dishonest. Aurora studied his face—the bruise, the sharp cheekbones, the scar she knew existed along his right ribcage because she'd stitched it closed once with a needle borrowed from Yu-Fei's kitchen drawer while he'd bitten down on a leather strap and stared at the ceiling of her old flat and said nothing. "You could have just called," she said again, softer this time. "You wouldn't have answered." She didn't deny it. The kettle sat on the element like an accusation. She stood, moved past his chair close enough to catch the ghost of whatever cologne he wore now—cedar and something sharper, smoke or iron—and placed the kettle on the heat again. The click of the switch was loud in the silence. "When did you get the bruise?" she asked, her back to him. "Yesterday morning. Soren's people are thorough." "How many?" "Three. They were professionals." He paused. "I was better." "You limped up the stairs." "That was the stairs." She turned. He was watching her with that expression she'd catalogued years ago—the one that looked like indifference from across a room but revealed everything up close. His black eye was impossible to read; the amber one betrayed him. It always had. "I'll make a deal with you," she said. "I don't do deals anymore." "You literally sell information for a living." He almost smiled. It was the closest she'd seen in six years, and it rearranged something low in her stomach. She ignored it. "You stay tonight," she said. "Eva won't mind—the spare room is just the couch with a blanket on it, but you've slept on worse. Tomorrow, you tell me everything about Soren Vael. Every detail. And then we figure out how to make him regret wanting me." "You're not in danger, Rory. He wants you working for him, not—" "Three men attacked you in the street and you showed up at my door bleeding. Don't tell me I'm not in danger." He opened his mouth. Closed it. His hand relaxed on the cane. She poured the kettle over a fresh cup of tea—two bags, the way she always made it when she needed something to hold—and set it in front of him. Steam curled between them, blurring the sharp angles of his face. "It's builder's brew," she said. "You'll hate it." He wrapped his hands around the cup and looked up at her, and the bruise on his temple, and the years between this kitchen and every kitchen that had come before it, pressed against the room's thin walls. "I never hated anything you gave me." She pulled out the chair across from him and sat down again, and the plastic cat-clock ticked on the wall, and somewhere below them the music shifted into another song neither of them knew.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
1"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.322
leniency0.644
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.068
96.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"warmth"
2"determined"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1164
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Bollywood1
Moreau1
French2
London1
Eva3
Marseille1
Lucien6
Aurora6
French-language1
Nokia1
Cardiff2
University1
Half1
Yu-Fei1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"French"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"French-language"
4"Cardiff"
5"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite honest and not quite dishonest"
1"not quite dishonest"
2"looked like indifference from across a ro"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1594
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean22.45
std22.53
cv1.004
sampleLengths
050
158
28
31
433
53
69
767
885
95
1037
112
124
1357
146
153
162
1768
184
197
2051
214
229
231
243
2576
268
2752
2839
2916
303
313
323
3329
3460
358
365
3737
3814
3953
4015
413
4242
435
443
4526
4640
4766
4811
494
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences94
matches
0"been invited"
1"was pushed"
2"was buried"
3"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences134
ratio0.127
matches
0"Aurora heard it from the kitchen—a particular pitch of metal protesting against a particular weight of body—and her hand stilled around the kettle handle."
1"The flat was cramped enough that no one could get past the narrow corridor without her knowing, and the deadbolts meant whoever stood outside had been invited in—or had the sense to wait rather than force entry."
2"The curry house below was mid-service; the bass thrum of someone's Bollywood playlist bled through the floorboards."
3"He hadn't said her name like that since—she stopped the thought where it started."
4"The overhead light buzzed, one filament flickering, and the whole room smelled of the tea she'd already made for herself—builder's brew, milky, nothing like the jasmine she'd learned to prefer in Marseille."
5"He'd lost weight since she'd last seen him, or redistributed it—those tailored charcoal suits had given way to something older, a jacket that hung loose across the shoulders, the collar of a dark shirt open at the throat."
6"\"Yours.\" He lifted one hand from the cane and produced a phone from his jacket pocket—old-model Nokia, the kind with no traceable app history—and set it on the edge of the counter."
7"Aurora looked at him then—really looked."
8"\"—half past ten at night with a bruise on your face and a phone that isn't yours, and you want me to—what? Take the phone, say thank you, let you leave?\""
9"The cane tapped once more against the frame—a habit, she remembered, not a necessity."
10"He moved the way he always had—each step deliberate, as though the floor were a negotiation he was determined to win—and sat across from her."
11"\"His name is Soren Vael. I don't know his human name, and I suspect he doesn't have one.\" Lucien spoke with the flat precision of someone delivering a report, but his left hand—the one not gripping the cane—curled against the wood of the chair's armrest."
12"Aurora studied his face—the bruise, the sharp cheekbones, the scar she knew existed along his right ribcage because she'd stitched it closed once with a needle borrowed from Yu-Fei's kitchen drawer while he'd bitten down on a leather strap and stared at the ceiling of her old flat and said nothing."
13"She stood, moved past his chair close enough to catch the ghost of whatever cologne he wore now—cedar and something sharper, smoke or iron—and placed the kettle on the heat again."
14"He was watching her with that expression she'd catalogued years ago—the one that looked like indifference from across a room but revealed everything up close."
15"His black eye was impossible to read; the amber one betrayed him."
16"She poured the kettle over a fresh cup of tea—two bags, the way she always made it when she needed something to hold—and set it in front of him."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount851
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"plastic cat-shaped thing"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0282021151586369
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035252643948296123
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean11.9
std11.33
cv0.952
sampleLengths
09
124
217
34
437
517
65
73
81
919
1014
113
122
133
144
1529
1632
176
186
1938
2028
2113
225
2312
2414
2511
262
274
2810
297
3032
318
326
333
342
3532
362
3719
3815
394
407
416
4222
4311
446
456
464
477
482
491
40.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.29850746268656714
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners40
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.013
15.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences80
matches
0"She didn't call out."
1"He hadn't said her name"
2"She pulled the kettle off"
3"She'd never told him she'd"
4"He'd lost weight since she'd"
5"His platinum blond hair was"
6"She turned back to the"
7"She busied her hands with"
8"His gaze shifted between them,"
9"He lifted one hand from"
10"She recognized the cracked screen"
11"He met her gaze without"
12"He shifted his weight against"
13"His jaw tightened."
14"She glanced at the clock"
15"She pulled out one of"
16"She pushed a stack of"
17"He stayed where he was."
18"He moved the way he"
19"He set the cane across"
ratio0.513
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences80
matches
0"The door groaned before the"
1"Aurora heard it from the"
2"Ptolemy leapt off the counter"
3"She didn't call out."
4"The flat was cramped enough"
5"The curry house below was"
6"The first deadbolt slid back."
7"Lucien Moreau's voice carried that"
8"He hadn't said her name"
9"A soft exhale."
10"She pulled the kettle off"
11"The overhead light buzzed, one"
12"She'd never told him she'd"
13"Lucien appeared in the kitchen"
14"He'd lost weight since she'd"
15"His platinum blond hair was"
16"The ivory-handled cane tapped once"
17"She turned back to the"
18"She busied her hands with"
19"Ptolemy had not moved from"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He'd lost weight since she'd last seen him, or redistributed it—those tailored charcoal suits had given way to something older, a jacket that hung loose across …"
1"He moved the way he always had—each step deliberate, as though the floor were a negotiation he was determined to win—and sat across from her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.407
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.034
80.6583%