Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ014C7AX05DAQVQ3X2EYD2A

Run Details

Duration:
48.9s
Cost:
$0.008302
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks grew in a perfect circle, their ancient trunks fused at the roots but not the canopy, creating a arching cathedral of knotted wood and dark, silver-veined leaves. Each bore carvings that looked less like human symbols and more like natural growths—whorls of bark that resolved into sleeping faces, limbs that twisted into cruel or delighted expressions. “Standing stones,” Rory breathed, her voice small in the sudden hush. The air inside the circle was different, thicker, tasting of damp earth and something floral that cloyed at the back of the throat. The usual London noise—traffic, the distant roar from Richmond Park’s Isabella Plantation—vanished. Here, silence had a pressure, a weight. Nyx, a taller shape of deeper darkness than the oaks’ shadow, flowed past her. Their form rippled, solid enough to cast its own faint violet shadow on the moss. “Not stones. They remember.” A melody, high and thin, like a glass harmonica played by a breeze, drifted from somewhere beyond the central oaks. No, not a melody. A whisper. “I remember you, Shadow,” Isolde Varga’s voice came, clear as water over pebbles, though she hadn’t appeared. “The circle welcomes you back. It has been three of your heartbeats.” Rory’s hand went to the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit. Three heartbeats? Nyx had said their last visit to this place was two centuries ago. The pendant against her collarbone, under her jacket, pulsed a slow, steady warmth, a muted red glow bleeding through the fabric. It had done that since they’d stepped off the main park path. “Time is a river here,” Isolde continued, and then she was there, standing just inside the circle as if she’d coalesced from the dappled light. She wore no shoes, and the wildflowers—violet, blue, and a startling gold—bent away from her feet but left no imprint. Her silver hair hung loose, a mantle against the shifting greens. “It pools and eddies. You stepped into an eddy. Welcome, Rory Carter.” Her pale lavender eyes were fixed on Rory, and Rory felt the unnerving sensation of being *seen*, not just looked at. Every secret, every scar, internal and external. She met the gaze. “You know why we’re here.” “A question is not a key, though it may open doors.” Isolde’s smile was slight, not unkind. “Come. The grove wishes to show you its heart.” She turned, and the path she took was no path at all, but a winding track between two of the massive oaks where the undergrowth—ferns with fronds of silver, mushrooms glowing with a soft, blue bioluminescence—simply parted. It felt deliberate, a gesture. Rory moved forward, boots sinking into the moss that was springy as a mattress. The air grew warmer, humid. The scent of flowers intensified, joined by the smell of rich, living soil and something else—metallic, like old blood. Above, the canopy knit together, filtering the light into a green-gold twilight. Strange insects with wings like stained glass flitted between the leaves, their buzzing a low counterpoint to the ever-present whisper. Nyx drifted beside her, their presence a cool counterbalance to the humid air. “This place… it’s a wound. In the Veil.” Their whisper-voice was barely audible, yet it carried clearly. “The boundaries are thin here. Can you feel it?” She could. It was a subtle vibration in the bones, a pressure behind the eyes. The Heartstone’s warmth pulsed a little faster, a little hotter. “Is that why Isolde’s here? To guard it?” “Not guard,” Nyx said. “Hold. Stitch. She was exiled for telling mortals truths. Now she tends the borderlands where those truths leak through.” They emerged into a larger clearing. The center was dominated by a single, colossal oak, its trunk easily twenty feet in diameter. Its bark was silver, not just veined with it, and it seemed to emit a faint, constant light, illuminating the clearing in a permanent, soft twilight. Nestled in a vast cavity in its trunk, where a root system like a frozen waterfall met the ground, was a shallow pool of water so still it looked like polished obsidian. The air here shimmered, and the whispering sound was louder, coming from the water, from the tree, from the vibrating air itself. At the tree’s base, amidst a nest of roots, sat a throne. It wasn’t carved; it *grew* from the tree, a fusion of silver wood and living moss, its back shaped like giant, folded wings. Isolde stood beside the pool. “The Heartstone warms. It knows its sister realm. Dymas. Gluttony. A place of endless appetite.” Her gaze shifted to the pendant glowing beneath Rory’s shirt. “Does it hunger, Aurora Carter?” Rory swallowed, her mouth dry. “It reacts. To portals. To Hel.” “Does it?” Isolde tilted her head, a birdlike motion. “Or does it react to *you*? To what you carry inside?” She gestured to the pool. “Look. Not with your eyes.” Reluctantly, Rory knelt at the pool’s edge. The water was utterly black, reflecting nothing—not the silver tree, not her own face. She leaned closer, the scent of metal and pollen making her dizzy. The Heartstone pulsed, a warm, insistent throb against her skin. She stared into the blackness. And the water moved. Not ripples. Something swam in the deep, formless black. A suggestion of color—deep crimson, the exact shade of the pendant’s gemstone—coiling like smoke. A shape began to form, indistinct but vast: sprawling fields, a sky of warm amber, towers built not of stone but of hardened, sculpted food, beautiful and grotesque. The scent of the pool changed, becoming rich, cloying, a thousand different meals—roast meats, spiced wine, ripe fruits—so potent it was nauseating. She gasped and jerked back, landing on the moss. “That was…” “Dymas,” Isolde said. “A glimpse through a keyhole. The pendant is a key. It was made there.” Rory’s hand closed over it, the metal hot now. “Who gave it to me?” “A question with a thousand answers, each more tangled than the last.” Isolde’s expression was unreadable. “The one who placed it in your path desired you to see. To *feel*. Gluttony is not just food, Rory Carter. It is consumption. Of information, of power, of life. It is a hunger that devours itself.” A chill, entirely unrelated to the grove’s temperature, traced down Rory’s spine. She thought of Evan, his possessive need to control, to swallow her whole. The comparison was uncomfortably apt. Nyx’s form condensed, becoming more solid, the violet glow in their eyes brightening as they stared at the pool. The water was still again, black and calm. “The weak points… the tears… they are here, aren’t they? Not just the standing stones. The grove itself is a thin place.” “You learn, Shadow,” Isolde murmured. “The stones are anchors. The pool is a lens. The tree…” She placed a silver-nailed hand on the bark. “The tree is a scar. Where the realms were wounded, and the growth over the wound was… unusual.” The whispering sound crescendoed, shaping itself into syllables that almost formed words. Rory’s ears strained. *…hungry…so hungry…more…always more…* It was a chorus of sighs, of insatiable longing. “It speaks,” Rory whispered, horrified and fascinated. “It remembers,” Isolde corrected. “Every soul that has passed through the thinness here. Every wish for excess. Every scream of denial. They soak into the ground, into the water, into the wood.” Rory stood, her legs unsteady. The wonder was still there—the impossible silver tree, the glowing flora, the sheer alienness of it all. But underneath, a deep unease had taken root. This wasn’t just a pretty, secret place. It was a repository of longing, a record of avarice. The Heartstone, hot in her fist, felt like a brand. She looked at Nyx, a being who was themselves a scar, a soul trapped by a hunger for forbidden knowledge. She looked at Isolde, an exile who tended these wounds. Then she looked back at the pool, that still, black mirror to a realm of endless consumption. “What does it want?” Rory asked, the question directed at the grove itself. The whispering stopped. Isolde smiled, a real smile this time, laced with ancient, weary sadness. “To be seen. To be remembered. And to remind those who carry keys to be very, very careful what doors they open.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it carried clearly [clearly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.057
85.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"utterly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"resolved"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"amidst"
count1
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"repository"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"resolved"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"shimmered"
8"amidst"
9"throb"
10"unreadable"
11"chill"
12"traced"
13"repository"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords7
totalWords1373
ratio0.005
matches
0"seen"
1"grew"
2"you"
3"feel"
4"…hungry…so hungry…more…always more…"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1031
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Isabella1
Plantation1
Varga1
Rory14
Heartstone3
Reluctantly1
Evan1
Isolde11
Nyx6
persons
0"Varga"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Evan"
4"Isolde"
5"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Isabella"
4"Plantation"
globalScore0.821
windowScore0.833
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like polished obsidian"
1"felt like a brand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.728
wordCount1373
matches
0"not of stone but of hardened, sculpted food, beautiful"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean38.14
std20.69
cv0.542
sampleLengths
058
153
233
326
429
562
668
737
826
942
1070
1139
1233
1323
14102
1535
1635
1711
1830
1948
204
2173
2211
2317
2414
2553
2630
2749
2842
2927
307
3132
3257
3347
3416
3534
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"were fixed"
1"being *seen"
2"was dominated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was nauseating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences107
ratio0.093
matches
0"Each bore carvings that looked less like human symbols and more like natural growths—whorls of bark that resolved into sleeping faces, limbs that twisted into cruel or delighted expressions."
1"The usual London noise—traffic, the distant roar from Richmond Park’s Isabella Plantation—vanished."
2"She wore no shoes, and the wildflowers—violet, blue, and a startling gold—bent away from her feet but left no imprint."
3"She turned, and the path she took was no path at all, but a winding track between two of the massive oaks where the undergrowth—ferns with fronds of silver, mushrooms glowing with a soft, blue bioluminescence—simply parted."
4"The scent of flowers intensified, joined by the smell of rich, living soil and something else—metallic, like old blood."
5"It wasn’t carved; it *grew* from the tree, a fusion of silver wood and living moss, its back shaped like giant, folded wings."
6"The water was utterly black, reflecting nothing—not the silver tree, not her own face."
7"A suggestion of color—deep crimson, the exact shade of the pendant’s gemstone—coiling like smoke."
8"The scent of the pool changed, becoming rich, cloying, a thousand different meals—roast meats, spiced wine, ripe fruits—so potent it was nauseating."
9"The wonder was still there—the impossible silver tree, the glowing flora, the sheer alienness of it all."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount390
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dark, silver-veined leaves."
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.015384615384615385
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.83
std7.95
cv0.619
sampleLengths
029
129
211
323
412
57
614
715
84
920
104
112
1217
1312
1414
152
1613
1721
1812
1925
2020
2111
2212
2321
247
254
265
2717
289
2937
305
3114
325
3319
3412
3520
3613
3717
389
392
4013
4110
428
434
4419
456
4616
4726
4832
4922
59.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.40186915887850466
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners43
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Reluctantly, Rory knelt at the"
1"Then she looked back at"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences80
matches
0"Their form rippled, solid enough"
1"It had done that since"
2"She wore no shoes, and"
3"Her silver hair hung loose,"
4"Her pale lavender eyes were"
5"She met the gaze."
6"She turned, and the path"
7"It felt deliberate, a gesture."
8"Their whisper-voice was barely audible,"
9"It was a subtle vibration"
10"They emerged into a larger"
11"Its bark was silver, not"
12"It wasn’t carved; it *grew*"
13"Her gaze shifted to the"
14"She gestured to the pool"
15"She leaned closer, the scent"
16"She stared into the blackness."
17"She gasped and jerked back,"
18"She thought of Evan, his"
19"She placed a silver-nailed hand"
ratio0.288
16.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences80
matches
0"The oaks grew in a"
1"Each bore carvings that looked"
2"Rory breathed, her voice small"
3"The air inside the circle"
4"The usual London noise—traffic, the"
5"Here, silence had a pressure,"
6"Nyx, a taller shape of"
7"Their form rippled, solid enough"
8"A melody, high and thin,"
9"Isolde Varga’s voice came, clear"
10"Rory’s hand went to the"
11"Nyx had said their last"
12"The pendant against her collarbone,"
13"It had done that since"
14"Isolde continued, and then she"
15"She wore no shoes, and"
16"Her silver hair hung loose,"
17"Her pale lavender eyes were"
18"Every secret, every scar, internal"
19"She met the gaze."
ratio0.888
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Each bore carvings that looked less like human symbols and more like natural growths—whorls of bark that resolved into sleeping faces, limbs that twisted into c…"
1"Nyx’s form condensed, becoming more solid, the violet glow in their eyes brightening as they stared at the pool."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory breathed, her voice small in the sudden hush"
1"Rory asked, the question directed at the grove itself"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Isolde continued (continue)"
2"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.286
79.4452%