| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "predator" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1406 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1278 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 3 | | Shade | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Fae-Forged" | | 2 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.952 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1406 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 24.24 | | std | 27.44 | | cv | 1.132 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 86 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 73 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 95 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 73 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.15% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Not spongy—yielding, as though the earth weighed her intrusion, undecided." | | 1 | "Rory caught one smirking from the corner of her vision, lips formed from a knot in the wood; when she turned her head, the expression flattened into whorled bark and the suggestion of a trick." | | 2 | "The moon—Earth's moon—hung in the exact position it had occupied when they entered, but three smaller orbs, bruise-coloured and mottled, now circled it in a slow, contrary waltz that made her stomach tip." | | 3 | "The bark of the surrounding oaks held impressions of faces—some weeping, some laughing, all of them watching without eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1290 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.017054263565891473 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0007751937984496124 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 11.16 | | std | 8.95 | | cv | 0.802 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 56.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.36507936507936506 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 35.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead it sang, a high" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward." | | 1 | "Her breath did not fog." | | 2 | "They bloomed in hues her" | | 3 | "Her left wrist itched." | | 4 | "She pushed the sleeve back." | | 5 | "They skirted a ring of" | | 6 | "Her scar ached." | | 7 | "She checked the pendant." | | 8 | "It pointed deeper into the" | | 9 | "She followed its pull." | | 10 | "They parted as Rory passed," | | 11 | "Their voice came thicker now," | | 12 | "She snapped the cover shut." | | 13 | "It unravelled thought." | | 14 | "She felt the tension drain" | | 15 | "She stepped closer." | | 16 | "Her hand rose to touch" | | 17 | "Their grip was solid, cold" | | 18 | "They were serrated, curved like" | | 19 | "She backed away, blade raised," |
| | ratio | 0.266 | |
| 34.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped at the tree" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 2 | "Nyx coalesced from the shadow" | | 3 | "Violet eyes glowed against their" | | 4 | "Rory touched the pendant." | | 5 | "The gemstone radiated warmth that" | | 6 | "She stepped forward." | | 7 | "Silence smothered the city." | | 8 | "The instant her trainer crossed" | | 9 | "The air moved here with" | | 10 | "Her breath did not fog." | | 11 | "Wildflowers carpeted the space beyond" | | 12 | "They bloomed in hues her" | | 13 | "Some petals emitted a faint" | | 14 | "Rory's fingers twitched toward the" | | 15 | "The moonsilver had gone bitter" | | 16 | "Nyx moved beside her." | | 17 | "Footprints pressed the moss." | | 18 | "The change stretched their shadow-veins" | | 19 | "The voice skittered into her" |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her sternum, a deep crimson throb that sent heat licking into her collarbone." | | 1 | "They bloomed in hues her eyes refused to catalogue, pigments that sat adjacent to purple and gold without settling into either." | | 2 | "Silver-barked trees ringed the clearing, leafless, yet fruit the colour of bone hung from branches that swayed without wind." | | 3 | "Not spongy—yielding, as though the earth weighed her intrusion, undecided." | | 4 | "Water cascaded upward over tiered limestone, feeding the roots of a canopy that hung inverted beneath the branches like a reflection refusing its mirror." | | 5 | "The gemstone blazed, a heartbeat rendered in garnet light that threw red flecks across her straight black hair." | | 6 | "The wildflowers grew denser, nodding heads large as dinner plates, petals translucent enough to show the veined networks beneath, throbbing with sap that glowed…" | | 7 | "The moon—Earth's moon—hung in the exact position it had occupied when they entered, but three smaller orbs, bruise-coloured and mottled, now circled it in a slo…" | | 8 | "Flowers with glass petals grew there, row upon row, chiming against one another with a low frequency that vibrated in Rory's ribs and loosened the knot between …" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes had dimmed with effort, maintaining coherence in a realm that tugged them toward physicality with the persistence of a current." | | 10 | "The Fae blade began to luminesce, faint silver light that grew bolder the deeper they walked, drinking the alien radiance and spitting it back in blades of refl…" | | 11 | "Silver branches laced overhead, forming a tunnel that breathed, expanding and contracting in a rhythm that matched the pendant's pulse." | | 12 | "The wildflowers rose to Rory's waist, luminescent stalks tracking her passage like spectators at a trial, bowing and swaying in patterns that formed words just …" | | 13 | "She did not need to check the pendant to know its warmth had migrated, spreading from her sternum into her ribs, her spine, pooling in the marrow of her bones." | | 14 | "Reflected in the surface stood a figure with silver hair that pooled around her feet, watching without ripples, without footprints, ageless lavender eyes fixed …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |